Two versions of the same story

[purvis2]

I have two versions of the same story.



1st one: Standard Interracial, college, first time/virginity, large BBC story. Language is mostly “tame” except for the word for the female anatomy.



2nd story: The Language is a little more “hardcore”. With aspects of pregnancy and breeding.

What would be the better version? I think the 1st version would have less to “offend” a larger portion of the (interracial category) reading audience. I like the 2nd better (own perverted reasons I would guess).

 

[KeithD]

I have two versions of the same story.


What would be the better version?

OK, here we go again . . . wait for it . . . there is no single universal reader--or predominate group of readers--on Literotica, so there is no answer to your question.

Post either one--or both.

 

[Bramblethorn]

I have two versions of the same story.



1st one: Standard Interracial, college, first time/virginity, large BBC story. Language is mostly “tame” except for the word for the female anatomy.



2nd story: The Language is a little more “hardcore”. With aspects of pregnancy and breeding.

What would be the better version? I think the 1st version would have less to “offend” a larger portion of the (interracial category) reading audience. I like the 2nd better (own perverted reasons I would guess).

I'm not sure that readership are going to be offended by strong language or pregnancy. If anything, the latter is probably a selling point.

That said, you will make zero dollars from it either way, so how much do those numbers matter to you?

 

[MillieDynamite]

You'll need two different titles to post, each as a different story. I guess you can add Version 1 and Version 2 as enough difference for them to post both stories. Or add the explicit or extreme to the header version. Where are you posting the story? Category wise, that is.

 

[Carnevil9]

I have two answers:

1. Post them both! Put an Author's Note at the top (or the bottom) inviting readers to compare and contrast them.

2. Post the one that you think is the most extreme, the most controversial, the most likely to offend. You want to make a splash, don't you?

 

[jehoram]

I'd post the second one, if you like it better.

 

[oggbashan]

I also have two versions of the same story, by accident.

I was upgrading my main pc and I thought I hadn't submitted a story 'Escaping Cybele'. After file transfer, I found a late draft, edited and amended it and submitted it as 'Limit of Authority'.

But they are substantially the same and I'm not sure which I like better.