Tiny little feedback question...

[Liar]

My latest poem just got a visit from out Trolly friend. I really don't mind, so don't go there flaming on my behalf please. But I got this comment...

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??? "betlehem's star" ???
Just because it is unstructured poetry doesn't excuse a lack of spell check.
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...and I don't get it. Is that spelled wrong?

#L

 

[minsue]

Yup. It's Bethlehem.

 

[Reltne]

WOW! The Spirit of YDD Lives On!

My latest poem just got a visit from out Trolly friend. I really don't mind, so don't go there flaming on my behalf please. But I got this comment...

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??? "betlehem's star" ???
Just because it is unstructured poetry doesn't excuse a lack of spell check.
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...and I don't get it. Is that spelled wrong?

#L

as Minsue said, Yes it is.

I also thought WE gave you Wicked Head(s up), in her pub(l)ic comment.

 

[Liar]

Bethlehem? Not in my bible.

Wait, I don't have a bible. Ok, not in any bible I've looked in.

Must be another one of those weird biblical name translation that all you anglo-folks are so fond of. Like Mary insterad of Maria, and Paul instead of Paulus.

I'm suprised you kept Jesus and didn't turn him into Jessie.

#L

 

[Liar]

Re: WOW! The Spirit of YDD Lives On!

I also thought WE gave you Wicked Head(s up), in her pub(l)ic comment.

Still trying to catch my breath there.

 

[minsue]

Bethlehem? Not in my bible.

Wait, I don't have a bible. Ok, not in any bible I've looked in.

Must be another one of those weird biblical name translation that all you anglo-folks are so fond of. Like Mary insterad of Maria, and Paul instead of Paulus.

I'm suprised you kept Jesus and didn't turn him into Jessie.

#L

I've googled out of curiosity. The only sites that come up containing Betlehem are from Denmark, Finland, wherever ".tk" is, and a few others that I can't tell but all have the lovely ø's and å's in their descriptions.

 

[WickedEve]

My latest poem just got a visit from out Trolly friend. I really don't mind, so don't go there flaming on my behalf please. But I got this comment...

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??? "betlehem's star" ???
Just because it is unstructured poetry doesn't excuse a lack of spell check.
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...and I don't get it. Is that spelled wrong?

#L

I was pretty sure it wasn't spelled right but I didn't say anything, because I was too lazy to go look it up. lol

 

[Liar]

Na na na na, not listening. I live in the center of the universe, that that's how we, the pinnacle of human civillisation, spell it.

wherever ".tk" is

Tokelau. Whatever that is.

 

[minsue]

Na na na na, not listening. I live in the center of the universe, that that's how we, the pinnacle of human civillisation, spell it.

Tokelau. Whatever that is.

 

[jthserra]

I wondered if it were a translation thing...

I guess Trolly should have googled. Just because it's a comment doesn't excuse a lack of google...


jim : )

 

[minsue]

Re: I wondered if it were a translation thing...

I guess Trolly should have googled. Just because it's a comment doesn't excuse a lack of google...


jim : )

 

[twelveoone]

Bethlehem? Not in my bible.

Wait, I don't have a bible. Ok, not in any bible I've looked in.

Must be another one of those weird biblical name translation that all you anglo-folks are so fond of. Like Mary insterad of Maria, and Paul instead of Paulus.

I'm suprised you kept Jesus and didn't turn him into Jessie.

#L

He was turned into Jesse, at least once, and will be again

 

[Tathagata]

Bethlehem? Not in my bible.

Wait, I don't have a bible. Ok, not in any bible I've looked in.


I'm suprised you kept Jesus and didn't turn him into Jessie.

#L

We prefer "Hay-soose" now

 

[twelveoone]

We prefer "Hay-soose" now

"Hey sose
Your chimp needs a better beer
Liar's got the good stuff, let's go over and drink his" -
Jesse
(turning water into suds)

 

[Tathagata]

"Hey sose
Your chimp needs a better beer
Liar's got the good stuff, let's go over and drink his" -
Jesse
(turning water into suds)

I'm reminded of the WC Fields character
Egbert Souse'

" It's pronounced Soo-say"

 

[Liar]

keyser Soze?

 

[Tathagata]

keyser Soze?

Don't make me google you

in old time slang a " souse" is a drunk
soussed is to get drunk
i believe it's english in origin

 

[twelveoone]

I'm reminded of the WC Fields character
Egbert Souse'

" It's pronounced Soo-say"

So, say, next time I'm in Boston? I'll buy you one.
God, that sounded gay.
We'll talk about manly non-literary things. Babe Ruth.

 

[Tathagata]

So, say, next time I'm in Boston? I'll buy you one.
God, that sounded gay.
We'll talk about manly non-literary things. Babe Ruth.

Come to Boston and talk about Babe Ruth??
you're a brave man

 

[twelveoone]

Come to Boston and talk about Babe Ruth??
you're a brave man

Ever see the Mel Gibson movie, "Dumbheart"?
Just seeing if you are awake Tath.
Nobody, could be that dumb, not even me.

 

[minsue]

keyser Soze?

The greatest trick the devil ever pulled was convincing the world he didn't exist....

 

[The Mutt]

For His first miracle, Jesse turned beer into urine.

 

[Lauren Hynde]

It's Belém

 

[twelveoone]

For His first miracle, Jesse turned beer into urine.

and then walked across it
Jesus, Mutt, that's no miracle, I did it. I think I'll do it again.
Remind me never to show up it Boston.
I've been banned in Boston.

 

[The Mutt]

and then walked across it
Jesus, Mutt, that's no miracle, I did it. I think I'll do it again.
Remind me never to show up it Boston.
I've been banned in Boston.

Lord Mutt is fine, thanks.
I've always wanted to be banned in Boston.
Either that or get an office at the corner of Berkley and Boylston and a dog named Pearl.