The overlooked and under-appreciated

~ starts reading... hmm, I've read this before ~
"I have never previously had thoughts of sharing my wife with anyone," he says, despite having given his wife a free pass, even if half jokingly.
Damn those commas are, distracting.
Curse you AX! I remember you teasing me about those commas when it was already posted.
You taught me the lesson about using proofreaders which I definitely will utilize on this next story.
 
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