Story Opinion

[eversobeautiful]

Hello all,

I'm writing a story but I'd like feedback on a certain part of it. If you'd be willing to read it (it isn't that long) and give me your opinion, I'd appreciate it -- just PM me or reply, thanks!

Jess

 

[taurents]

Happy to ,............ taurents@yahoo.co.uk

 

[The Sex Master]

Hello all,

I'm writing a story but I'd like feedback on a certain part of it. If you'd be willing to read it (it isn't that long) and give me your opinion, I'd appreciate it -- just PM me or reply, thanks!

Jess

message me the story.