Thoughts on breaking a story into 5 parts

[ShelbyDawn57]

Yes and I agree...I think it provides the reader with the change...Not sure if it's a plus or minus though.

You just have to make sure your scene breaks are clear. In my story 'Boat Talk' I have a main overriding story with two pocket stories embedded with each of the main characters telling their story in first person. I did it with dialog and a break mark; ***.

I also added this warning up front:

Be warned, the little three asterisk thing; ***, indicates a change in voice. Dave is our main storyteller, but Rick gets to tell his story, too, so just be aware.


It can get complicated making sure the reader doesn't get lost, but is doable.