Looking for a beta reader familiar with colloquial Mexican spanish

[Zeronix]

I’m writing a story about a Hispanic undocumented immigrant in Texas who came to the USA at a young age. and the MC often mixes English and Spanish in their speech. I’m not very good at Spanish personally, could use some feedback on whether the writing makes sense / sounds natural.

P.S it is a gay male story but you don’t have to read the smut if you don’t want to

Edit: I have realized there is a Spanish Literotica, am going to post there lol
Edit 2: Resolved, thanks!