Story idea

[Guest]

Here is an idea. Some love it some not, I love it, the thought of it turns me on. A couple in their thirties. The husband has for years yearned to see his wife with another man. They are both moderately shy, but the husband has done every thing to get his wife to try. To him unless she does it freely and really likes it ,it is not a turn on. So after years of trying he pretty much gives up. One day he comes home from work and finds a video in the vcr and a note
from his wife. "paly this tape." He does and he almost
cums as soon as it starts. His wife, is sitting in the very
spot he sits now, she is jerking of a guys with a huge cock
and she looks at the camera and says, " You know this guy
and he is going to cum in my mouth, he does and his wife swallows all but a trace that runs down her tits. The rest of the story can be about things the wife does to tirn her husband on. Calls him at work to let him here 2 guys fucking her... has various workmen come over and lets the cum all over her...which of course she video tapes for him.
That could be a good story...

 

[Guest]

Need someone to write story!!! About my WIFE Susie

Here is an idea. Some love it some not, I love it, the thought of it turns me on. A couple in their thirties. The husband has for years yearned to see his wife with another man. They are both moderately shy, but the husband has done every thing to get his wife to try. To him unless she does it freely and really likes it ,it is not a turn on. So after years of trying he pretty much gives up. One day he comes home from work and finds a video in the vcr and a note
from his wife. "paly this tape." He does and he almost
cums as soon as it starts. His wife, is sitting in the very
spot he sits now, she is jerking of a guys with a huge cock
and she looks at the camera and says, " You know this guy
and he is going to cum in my mouth, he does and his wife swallows all but a trace that runs down her tits. The rest of the story can be about things the wife does to tirn her husband on. Calls him at work to let him here 2 guys fucking her... has various workmen come over and lets the cum all over her...which of course she video tapes for him.
That could be a good story...

 

[LindsayRae]

Ten years ago today...

...this thread was written. It has potential, has good "bones" to it.

Would this be a "common" Loving Wives tale? (I'm still a little "confused" as to what type of story does well over there, but some of the "wife has sex with another at the husband's urging" stories have had high votes to them.)

Perhaps because of the video angle this could be an Ex/Voy story? Years ago the unregistered Mavodou said that maybe the wife began to live out other fantasies this husband had...so this tale could even become a chapter series or perhaps even a chain story if enough authors held interest.

Thoughts?

 

[hotsnatch6]

...this thread was written. It has potential, has good "bones" to it.

Would this be a "common" Loving Wives tale? (I'm still a little "confused" as to what type of story does well over there, but some of the "wife has sex with another at the husband's urging" stories have had high votes to them.)

Perhaps because of the video angle this could be an Ex/Voy story? Years ago the unregistered Mavodou said that maybe the wife began to live out other fantasies this husband had...so this tale could even become a chapter series or perhaps even a chain story if enough authors held interest.

Thoughts?

You are correct insofar as the votes received but many are reviled in the commenter's section. They simply cannot comprehend the idea of a loving wife with another man because that is a paradox to their understanding of marriage. Unfortunately, Lit, despite its many positive features, has no suitable section for such stories unless the founders assumed that such stories, which are actually quite common, were intended to go precisely there.

 

[LindsayRae]

When the category was added to the site, it was meant to be about (and described as) "cheating wives". "Adventurous" wives, as Lit called them, and their lovers. Many men, too scared to let their user name be known, posted their distate for such tales in "hate mail" and messages. (Heaven forbid that "we all" know that the STILL anonymous James895840021 thinks the CHARACTER Anne "should die a painful death of AIDS for cheating on her husband".

At any rate, this isn't to debate or discuss the Loving Wives category. Other categories could be implimented for such a tale.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

...this thread was written. It has potential, has good "bones" to it.

Would this be a "common" Loving Wives tale? (I'm still a little "confused" as to what type of story does well over there, but some of the "wife has sex with another at the husband's urging" stories have had high votes to them.)

Perhaps because of the video angle this could be an Ex/Voy story? Years ago the unregistered Mavodou said that maybe the wife began to live out other fantasies this husband had...so this tale could even become a chapter series or perhaps even a chain story if enough authors held interest.

Thoughts?

it'd get caned in LW - absolutely spanked. the slutwife/wimpy cuckold theme ... not a hope. it could still be a good story though, just don't expect the score to reflect any ... artistic merit the piece may have.

i doubt you could push it into the voy/exhib category either. i've had pieces 'moved' by the lit authorities. i submitted to EC for example, and the piece ended up in LW.

 

[hotsnatch6]

it'd get caned in LW - absolutely spanked. the slutwife/wimpy cuckold theme ... not a hope. it could still be a good story though, just don't expect the score to reflect any ... artistic merit the piece may have.

i doubt you could push it into the voy/exhib category either. i've had pieces 'moved' by the lit authorities. i submitted to EC for example, and the piece ended up in LW.

What a shame. That's the same thing that happened to many famous authors who were misunderstood, labeled, censored and panned prior to the masses discovering their writing prowess. I think your writing will be a definite hit, bordering perhaps on a masterpiece. The wimpy theme doesn't strike a chord with me but the deviant, unbridled, steamy eroticism does.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

What a shame. That's the same thing that happened to many famous authors who were misunderstood, labeled, censored and panned prior to the masses discovering their writing prowess. I think your writing will be a definite hit, bordering perhaps on a masterpiece. The wimpy theme doesn't strike a chord with me but the deviant, unbridled, steamy eroticism does.

i'd give it a go, sure; but masterpiece? ... nah.