Story featuring my favourite pornstar

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hey, long time lurker and fan of the stories on this site, first time posting in here.

I was wondering if anyone would be able to have an attempt at writing my idea of a story featuring my all time favourite pornstar

well the basic premise is that myself, and two other guys win a competition to get to fuck my favourite pornstar Jasmine Byrne

[The two pics containing copyrights were removed per site rules.]
http://www.nastypornostars.com/gals/jasmine_byrne_gangbang/10.jpg
http://www.nastypornostars.com/gals/jasmine_byrne_ass_fucked/2.jpg

Jasmine is a latina pornstar, her best features are her amazing ass, big lips and puffy pussy. She has done loads of DP scenes. So we all go to meet up with Jasmine and have a big gangbang after winning the competition. I'm really into anal, DP, blowbang, and messy facials so there would be plenty of that, I also like double cock sucking, but nothing else bi like DAP or DPP

i would love to see other people's interpretation of this idea

thanks
 
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It's not a bad idea in concept. Here are the major things I would change with it.

First pornstars simply aren't famous enough to really warrant this treatment. There are a few but really it's Jenna Jameson and from there you immediatly skip down to high end Playboy models like Jenny McCarthy, Anna Nicole Smith, Pamela Anderson and in a bit of a stretch Carmen Electra. It's not really a knock on the ladies but the entire point of a celeb story is that anybody reading the story would already know who the story is about and Jasyme simply isn't that famous. (I'm a huge fan of hers myself by the by)

That's not really a reason to abandon ship though because you set up an idea that's so good sorta use it in real porn. You make the title something like fuck a fan and focus all around the guys who won some rediculous contest and get to come out and fuck their favorite porn star. You can kinda do this as many times as you like but you have to watch enough porn to at least try and make the girls seem different from each other.

Overall I like the idea though I think you'd get a broader audiance by replacing Jasmyne with a similar famous actress like say J-Lo.
 
thanks for the input

i get what you mean about chosing someone more famous, i choose jasmine because she is my all time faveourite pornstar and i would love to see my idea brought to life by someone who is a much better writer than me!
 
She's not my favorite, for me she ranks below a couple of stars but I have heard of her and she was damn good at her job.

I'm not even really telling you to abandon it, just you might want to shift the focus to the guy(s). You know have it be something like Charlie and the Chocolate Factory where the story kinda hinges on the idea that for no particularly good reason got to be in Jasmine's big send off scene as a thank you to the fans sort of thing. It could vibe very well with what you've already set in motion here.
 
There is no reason the lady has to be famous beyond her own fans. That would bring out enough competitors. And it would still serve the story.

On the other hand, if you WANT somebody really famous in the story, pick a non-porn star, like Angelina Jolie or any other smokin' hot famous chick. In her off-screen persona, she could be a real slut and looking to get reamed out by some of her fans. Or she could be falling on hard times (bad investments, or just getting old and not getting the roles any more) and needs the cash.
 
thanks for the input, i was really just putting this idea out there to see if anyone would be kind enough to have a go at putting this story into words. I added the pics for those who are not sure who she is.

it really a request to ask if anyone would be willing to try writing this for me more than anything
 
Funny with porn stars because there are names everyone knows. Jessie Jane Bree Olson Sasha Grey of course Jenna.

But the there are second or third tier pornstars that have a done a lot of work, but maybe not in big releases. But sites like red tube show a ton of clips from hundreds of porn sites.

Alexis Texas is a good one who is not a "household name" but has the best ass in porn hands down.

Faye reagan is big if you are into red head porn.

My personal favorite is prett much a porn nobody (only a few videos on redtube) but just does it for me.

Megan Cox. She plays both sweet young lesbian and total porn slut very well and to me has the sweetest set of tits in porn.

http://www.redtube.com/?search=megan+cox
 
I'd argue that Jessie Jane and Bree Olson never really made it to Household name. You really have just Jenna and Sasha is right on the cusp but will likely never make it.

Kinda like hockey has Wayne Gretsky and. . .no wait he's the only person who ever played Hocky in the history of the world.
 
I'd argue that Jessie Jane and Bree Olson never really made it to Household name. You really have just Jenna and Sasha is right on the cusp but will likely never make it.

Kinda like hockey has Wayne Gretsky and. . .no wait he's the only person who ever played Hocky in the history of the world.

Nah, in Boston only Bobby Orr played hockey!

Hard for me to say who is or is not a household name as I-like many here-are far more into porn then the average Joe.

I've seen Bree in a few major releases as well as JJ so I figured they were big.

I remember back in the day(for me the 80's) everyone talked about Tori Wells Seka and Nina harley(and she is still going!)

But there was a porn star named Victoria Paris who drove me crazy. Matter of taste.
 
If you asked me to name some famous pornstars out of the blue, I think the first names to leap to mind would be Nina Hartley and Eva Angelina. Any others, I'd have to really think about to remember their names.
 
Bobby Orr is . . .yeah kinda my point.

Household names are people that you can go up to anybody on the street and they know. I doubt a random person would be able to ID Bree Olson by picture or name. Just like Bobby Orr might be a household in his home down (which is why I assumed you mentioned the locale) but outside that who knows or cares? He might very well be the second best hocky player of all time, but he's not someone who's name gets put on video games, because they can't sell his name, he doesn't appear in movies or television shows as himself because nobody would recognize him when he walked out.

Interesting side note Alexis Texas was almost the name of a popular Disney Show but our sweet little porn star (who's ass is not as good as Jynx Maze or Kristina Rose) got there just in time to snatch it up. :D Disney probably decided they didn't want any confusion. I should totally write Alexis Texas meets Hannah Montana just to help them out because I'm a nice guy.

Anyway I would say the test for household name is to ask someone who has no interest in whatever subject it is if they have heard of so an so. Everybody knows who Hulk Hogan, Mike Tyson and LeBron James are because they are quite literally bigger than the sports they are/were part of.
 
Bobby Orr is . . .yeah kinda my point.

Household names are people that you can go up to anybody on the street and they know. I doubt a random person would be able to ID Bree Olson by picture or name. Just like Bobby Orr might be a household in his home down (which is why I assumed you mentioned the locale) but outside that who knows or cares? He might very well be the second best hocky player of all time, but he's not someone who's name gets put on video games, because they can't sell his name, he doesn't appear in movies or television shows as himself because nobody would recognize him when he walked out.

Interesting side note Alexis Texas was almost the name of a popular Disney Show but our sweet little porn star (who's ass is not as good as Jynx Maze or Kristina Rose) got there just in time to snatch it up. :D Disney probably decided they didn't want any confusion. I should totally write Alexis Texas meets Hannah Montana just to help them out because I'm a nice guy.

Anyway I would say the test for household name is to ask someone who has no interest in whatever subject it is if they have heard of so an so. Everybody knows who Hulk Hogan, Mike Tyson and LeBron James are because they are quite literally bigger than the sports they are/were part of.

Thing is little Hannah is rapidly becoming a bigger slut than Miss Texas who gets paid specifically to be a slut. As opposed to Miley who does it because she thinks its cool.

And I have no doubt Billy Ray is fine with it and is trying to get her to spread them in Playboy.

Man all kidding aside I bet people all the time that someday it is going to come to light he was screwing her. The way he has promoted and pushed her is nothing short of sick.
 
I honestly pay very little attention to her. I don't see why anybody is treating her like this isn't a wholly necessary part of her career. Britney Spears, Christina Aguilera, Justin Timberlake, Ashley Simpson the other dumb blonde one, they all go through this phase and the ones who don't end up. . .where is Raven Ramone right now? The Olsons? (And to their credit they tried), Hell if Lindsey Lohan could stay out of jail for a whole year she'd probably be just fine.

That's just the way of the adult Disney girl adn the only thing that shocks me is that people are paying attention THIS time around.
 
Hey Carny, didn't notice ya there. While obviously you don't discuss porn with your mother I doubt she'd know who Eva is, I'd expect her to frown at the mention of Jenna.

Which is why I kinda veered into sports because your mother knows who Micheal Jordan is but I doubt she could name anybody on the Bulls today.
 
I honestly pay very little attention to her. I don't see why anybody is treating her like this isn't a wholly necessary part of her career. Britney Spears, Christina Aguilera, Justin Timberlake, Ashley Simpson the other dumb blonde one, they all go through this phase and the ones who don't end up. . .where is Raven Ramone right now? The Olsons? (And to their credit they tried), Hell if Lindsey Lohan could stay out of jail for a whole year she'd probably be just fine.

That's just the way of the adult Disney girl adn the only thing that shocks me is that people are paying attention THIS time around.

I think it is sort of expected, but the problem is they can;t stop. You make that point with Lohan.

But as for the Olson's? Man they are worth a pretty penny with their clothing line and other ventures so not slutting out paid off for them.
 
I think it is sort of expected, but the problem is they can;t stop. You make that point with Lohan.

But as for the Olson's? Man they are worth a pretty penny with their clothing line and other ventures so not slutting out paid off for them.

They did slut it up, and worse. Wasn't one of them pretty into drugs? Like she practically killed Heath Ledger? And got caught driving on the wrong side of the freeway?

Those two as you point out though probably could have skipped the slut phase cus being the Disney Twins paid enough before they hit puberty that they could quit.

Yes Lohan seems to have a problem quitting. Miley twerked on stage and licked some stuff. She's gotta lot of catching up to do in a world that has Lady Gaga walking around. Or as I brought up Britney, Christina, Jessica n Ashley Simpson. I honestly don't understand what the big deal is.
 
I honestly pay very little attention to her. I don't see why anybody is treating her like this isn't a wholly necessary part of her career. Britney Spears, Christina Aguilera, Justin Timberlake, Ashley Simpson the other dumb blonde one, they all go through this phase and the ones who don't end up. . .where is Raven Ramone right now? The Olsons? (And to their credit they tried), Hell if Lindsey Lohan could stay out of jail for a whole year she'd probably be just fine.

That's just the way of the adult Disney girl adn the only thing that shocks me is that people are paying attention THIS time around.

Just caught this (usually stay in "CHYOO" area), & gotta say I don't even know WHO "Raven Ramone" is (Joey's widow?!). I think the name you want is "Raven Symone"... Also, read a book on child stars once where she was quoted as claiming there's some accent or something on the end of her surname.

While we're at it, where's her former Disney costar Orlando Brown, who I first remember as a kid adopted by (I think) Urkel?!
 
You're right I did mean Raveny Symone. My point remains, who the fuck has seen her since her time as a child ended? Children stars, especially females are pretty much required by law to slut it up if they want to survive the transition from their tweens into adulthood. Some can hold out longer than others. Miley may have actually waited too long but can't say she's not making an honest effort of it now.

And we can also be honest that in Hollywood (or really anything entertainment based) having the right look is better than being actually talented.
 
You're right I did mean Raveny Symone. My point remains, who the fuck has seen her since her time as a child ended? Children stars, especially females are pretty much required by law to slut it up if they want to survive the transition from their tweens into adulthood. Some can hold out longer than others. Miley may have actually waited too long but can't say she's not making an honest effort of it now.

And we can also be honest that in Hollywood (or really anything entertainment based) having the right look is better than being actually talented.

So far Taylor Swift seems to have bucked this. She really doesn't seem much different since she passed 18.

I blame a lot on the parents too. Billy Ray is disgusting. he'll be holding Miley's legs open for the camera when she finally spreads them for Playboy.
 
Somehow I don't see Miley in Playboy. Considering I'm fairly pro-porn I don't really like the majority of stars who pose in Playboy. It's very rare for any woman with a career to pose, they always wait until they are so far past gone that anything they say in the interview about feeling sexy and empowered just screams "I'm desperate for a final paycheck." It's one of those times where I'll take the genuine porn star who came from little or nothing and shows up and tells the fans she loves them a million times before I bat an eye at some of the other women.

Point taken about Taylor Swift though I wish I didn't have to qualify "never" and "always" by saying extremely rarely and extremely frequently respectively. In the same way that I might bother pointing out that you just haven't listened to the right rap or watched the right anime when someone tells me all rap is fuck bitches shoot cops or all anime is martial art bad boys blowing up planets. I know what they mean.

This rant was not directed primarily at you. It was kind of an omnidirectional people keep saying this rant.
 
Somehow I don't see Miley in Playboy. Considering I'm fairly pro-porn I don't really like the majority of stars who pose in Playboy. It's very rare for any woman with a career to pose, they always wait until they are so far past gone that anything they say in the interview about feeling sexy and empowered just screams "I'm desperate for a final paycheck." It's one of those times where I'll take the genuine porn star who came from little or nothing and shows up and tells the fans she loves them a million times before I bat an eye at some of the other women.

Point taken about Taylor Swift though I wish I didn't have to qualify "never" and "always" by saying extremely rarely and extremely frequently respectively. In the same way that I might bother pointing out that you just haven't listened to the right rap or watched the right anime when someone tells me all rap is fuck bitches shoot cops or all anime is martial art bad boys blowing up planets. I know what they mean.

This rant was not directed primarily at you. It was kind of an omnidirectional people keep saying this rant.

I know you weren't ranting. I was just making a point about Swift because although I can't stand her music I admire the fact she is at the top of her game without being a whore.

I think Cyrus has more than enough talent to not have to go the route she is.

Speaking of tramps I always get a kick out of the fact that Katie Perry started off singing gospel, but made nothing.

I kissed a girl? Now she's raking it in.

Sin sells my friend, but it doesn't mean someone has to sell out.

BTW Katie in her blue hair makes this boy think really bad things,:eek::eek:
 
I know you weren't ranting. I was just making a point about Swift because although I can't stand her music I admire the fact she is at the top of her game without being a whore.

I think Cyrus has more than enough talent to not have to go the route she is.

Speaking of tramps I always get a kick out of the fact that Katie Perry started off singing gospel, but made nothing.

I kissed a girl? Now she's raking it in.

Sin sells my friend, but it doesn't mean someone has to sell out.

BTW Katie in her blue hair makes this boy think really bad things,:eek::eek:

From what little attention I've paid to Miley Cyrus I would kinda consider her the exception that proves the rule. She's the Will Smith of girls.

Cyrus is quite talented, I don't know if she's talented enough to get by without being on the route she's on. By route I mean the general direction, she didn't need necessarily to twerk on live television, she could probably have settled for singing "Rub me the right way" or filming soft core porn labeled as a coming of age film. I don't think she has the talent to pull a Taylor Swift. But I don't think Taylor Swift has the talent to pull a Taylor Swift. I think she's got the right combination of going so far against the grain to be known for it AND a fair stroke of luck. (Nothing against luck btw. Just like I got nothing against that guy who says "You know you love it!" and is a homeless guy discovered by someone walking home.)

I'm not sure Katy Perry is a great example. I really nobody gets rich (they may get by) singing Gospel. Period. Full Stop. End Disccusion. It's like Opera. She sang something that was fun (and sinful) and it made more money than tons of less fun music. That's like getting upset about "Who Let the Dogs Out." That's just how music works, tis unfortunate but true.

Katty just makes me think bad things pretty much period. It's really not fair.
 
You're right I did mean Raveny Symone. My point remains, who the fuck has seen her since her time as a child ended? Children stars, especially females are pretty much required by law to slut it up if they want to survive the transition from their tweens into adulthood. Some can hold out longer than others. Miley may have actually waited too long but can't say she's not making an honest effort of it now.

And we can also be honest that in Hollywood (or really anything entertainment based) having the right look is better than being actually talented.

I enjoy irony, which is why I enjoy the irony I'm finding in you telling me I'm right, & my responding to tell you you're wrong.

1] No, I can't say I've seen her in several years, but I also can't say I have a problem with that.

2] I don't think stars of any gender have to do porn or anything like it to continue being famous. Want proof? The now-being-discussed Miley is a good start. As for Taylor, I wouldn't say she's done anything close. Then again, I also wouldn't say she's all that talented. [My own posts elsewhere online during the recent CMAs, where they gave her "the Pinnacle Award"... 1] Been watching #CMAAwards most of night. Curious: If Taylor Swift wins, who writes & performs her acceptance speech?!...; 2] Can I (un-famous songwriter) sue the #CMAAWARDS for something over lying about Taylor writing her songs?!]
 
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