Speechless, I am.

[Guest]

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=73954

Thank you for writing this.

 

[damppanties]

How do you find these things? Are you here 24/7?

 

[Guest]

No, just 12/7.

 

[Guest]

*bump* to make myself a bit respectable.

Manu and Manx are my only friends, so what's new.

G'day to you Sir., Ma'am.

 

[Guest]

*bump* to make myself a bit respectable.

Manu and Manx are my only friends, so what's new.

G'day to you Sir., Ma'am.

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Ahem, what "Manx" were you referring to?

 

[Guest]

Manx, you know I regard as one of better writers on the Lit. I value your opinion.

What do you think of the story I've linked. Is it good enough to be in next volum of the Literotica anthology book?

It's quite short story. Ten minutes max for a slow reader.

 

[Guest]

Manx, you know I regard as one of better writers on the Lit. I value your opinion.

What do you think of the story I've linked. Is it good enough to be in next volum of the Literotica anthology book?

It's quite short story. Ten minutes max for a slow reader.

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I'm just going to do this once, CV.

First, personally, I'm not a fan of the non-human sexual genre. It doesn't do much for me. Nevertheless, yes, I thought it was a good story, probably a 4.5 or better. Is it worthy of inclusion into Lit's next anthology? I suppose I'm the wrong guy to ask that because I really don't appreciate the genre that much and haven't read many of the other stories. Perhaps I should after reading this one by darkmaas.

Technically, there are some minor grammar/punctuation errors. Pleroma, BTW, is a proper noun, has only one context, and is spelled with a capital "P". I'm not going to comment on other aspects of the story because the author is really not here to defend--it's something I just don't like to do unless I have the opportunity to share commentary with the author, ok?

In summary, you picked a very good story. Is it the best in this genre? I don't know--I haven't read enough of them.

Feel better now?