Story discussion

[al55]

Hi all,

I've recently started posting stories again (have a few pending submission).

Could we have a discussion on this story:

https://www.literotica.com/s/metamorphosis-33

Any ideas for sequels or feedback on the story?

 

[SyleusSnow]

Congrats on posting stories again.

Thanks for providing a link (so many people ask for reviews and don't even bother to link to the story).

However, I clicked, saw it was 47.1k words and noped out immediately. That's a big time commitment.

Suggestion: When asking others to review your work, especially for huge stories, you're more likely to get a response if you tell people more about it (e.g. what category it's in, a short synopsis, maybe the tags).

It would also help to say more specific about what feedback you're looking for: writing quality, plot, characters, dialogue, tension, hotness...

Not a guarantee of getting anyone willing to read it... 47.1K words is a lot... but providing a bit more about the story and what feedback you're looking for sure helps.

 

[al55]

Hi all, I've recently published a few stories under Al55.

The stories are getting okay star ratings, but no comments?

Could anyone provide some feedback on some of my stories?

 

[al55]

Anyone?

 

[yowser]

See https://forum.literotica.com/threads/yowser-yelps.1607757/page-2#post-100269433

 

[al55]

See https://forum.literotica.com/threads/yowser-yelps.1607757/page-2#post-100269433

Thanks Yowser