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[TheBard1982]

Hey folks. I'm TheBard1982. I started posting stories on Literotica in 2023, but have been away for a bit. I recently posted a new story and for whatever reason it's gotten hardly any activity. After talking with other members on the forum, it sounds like a combination of the algorithm and the category I posted it under. Long story short I am just trying to spread the word and would be grateful for anyone to check it out.

It's a fairly short story in the Erotic Couplings category called Pent-Up and I initially started writing it in early 2023 and recently finished it.

Thanks

Here's the link:
https://www.literotica.com/s/pent-up-3

 

[Craighalbert]

Short and not so sweet (in a good way!) Great little character sketch, I really liked the sense of melancholy and regret that hung over even the more erotic parts. You could feel both the relief that they finally gave in and the disappointment that they'll never be able to fully enjoy it the way they want to

 

[TheBard1982]

Short and not so sweet (in a good way!) Great little character sketch, I really liked the sense of melancholy and regret that hung over even the more erotic parts. You could feel both the relief that they finally gave in and the disappointment that they'll never be able to fully enjoy it the way they want to

Thanks for the feed back. Do you think it is something I should continue with a second part? I kind of have some ideas.

 

[Lumiere_Amie]

That's a hot little story. If you have it in you then you should continue. I love sister-in-law stories.

 

[TheBard1982]

That's a hot little story. If you have it in you then you should continue. I love sister-in-law stories.

Thanks. I am definitely thinking of continuing it.

 

[Craighalbert]

Thanks for the feed back. Do you think it is something I should continue with a second part? I kind of have some ideas.

Absolutely! There's a lot of places this can go