Solo Female Scene

[Topdog1345]

Hi all

As I said in a previous post I am a new writer and felt my story needed a solo Female scene to help the story arc.

I found it tricky as it is fantasy and thus not logical or sensible but I found that difficult to write. I'm sure there are still lots of other issues too but would welcome any comments or advice.

https://literotica.com/s/her-red-panties-ch-02

Thanks

 

[AchtungNight]

Hi all

As I said in a previous post I am a new writer and felt my story needed a solo Female scene to help the story arc.

I found it tricky as it is fantasy and thus not logical or sensible but I found that difficult to write. I'm sure there are still lots of other issues too but would welcome any comments or advice.

https://literotica.com/s/her-red-panties-ch-02

Thanks

The three times I’ve included female solo scenes in my work it’s been to introduce a character and show how their mindset works. I think your scene shows much the same purpose, same vibe. Good quality too, if that means anything.

 

[Topdog1345]

Thanks that is really appreciated.

Can you link me one or two of yours that have solo scenes so I can have a read? I had a look but wasn't sure which ones they would be.

 

[AchtungNight]

Counseling 2, Rendezvous 1, Passion 5 are the three. Enjoy!

 

[ElectricBlue]

It's an interesting view of the fantasy and the confusion within Susan. The interior monologue was believable. Nicely erotic, not pornographic - which for me is mostly a good thing.

I've not read the first chapter - the strength of this piece is that it can stand-alone. It's got enough self-contained context for it all to make sense. I gave you a five.

 

[Rob_Royale]

I liked it and commented. I'm interested enough to follow you to see where you take this.

 

[Topdog1345]

Thanks Rob, much appreciated and I'll take your comments on board. It's my second story ever so it's good to get that sort of feedback.