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Anyone ever write a story because of this thread, or is this just a porn dump?
So why aren't there more women-in-prison stories on this Literotica site?
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I think you got it in one. Every thread he touches. There seems to be what can only be called a fixation.
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It's a shame this thread hasn't been a story idea, then.
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DarkPleasures writes: "Anyone ever write a story because of this thread, or is this just a porn dump?"
Magineer responds: "I think you got it in one. Every thread he touches. There seems to be what can only be called a fixation."
DarkPleasures then adds, in parting: "It's a shame this thread hasn't been a story idea, then."
First of all, NO, this is NOT a porn-dump - as I am NOT a fan of porn! I believe that the name "Literorica" is short for "Erotic Literature," and NOT short for crude porn-stories (although a lot of the stories here ARE excessively porny!)
I also believe that a quality-photo or a drawing can express an erotic idea FAR better than mere words, in the same way that an erotic VIDEO is always going to be more enjoyable to watch when a director is accompanied by a talented, creative, and/or imaginative scriptwriter! Sadly, WAY TOO MANY video-directors nowadays are clueless pinheads with no writing skills whatsoever!
I was very pleased when the folks at Netflix decided to do an entire series on "Orange is the New Black," despite the fact that the WIP storyline is far too REALISTIC! I'd much prefer a series based more on FANTASY women's prison, which is why I like posting pics showing what a fantasy women's prison should look like!
Magineer responds: "I think you got it in one. Every thread he touches. There seems to be what can only be called a fixation."
DarkPleasures then adds, in parting: "It's a shame this thread hasn't been a story idea, then."
First of all, NO, this is NOT a porn-dump - as I am NOT a fan of porn! I believe that the name "Literorica" is short for "Erotic Literature," and NOT short for crude porn-stories (although a lot of the stories here ARE excessively porny!)
I also believe that a quality-photo or a drawing can express an erotic idea FAR better than mere words, in the same way that an erotic VIDEO is always going to be more enjoyable to watch when a director is accompanied by a talented, creative, and/or imaginative scriptwriter! Sadly, WAY TOO MANY video-directors nowadays are clueless pinheads with no writing skills whatsoever!
I was very pleased when the folks at Netflix decided to do an entire series on "Orange is the New Black," despite the fact that the WIP storyline is far too REALISTIC! I'd much prefer a series based more on FANTASY women's prison, which is why I like posting pics showing what a fantasy women's prison should look like!
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Dumpington, when you have posts like the one above - nothing but porn, sexual pics, gifs, or pics - how can you say this thread is not a porn dump. At one point I asked if this thread sparked writing in people and/or was it a "story idea". I genuinely am curious. I'd love to see this board used properly. Especially when many boards on Lit already are dedicated to porn. (Gen Board, Fetish, GLBT, BDSM, and even Am Pics to name but a few of several.)
Since 1999, when I ran a Net search for "free erotic stories", I took Literotica to mean erotic literature too. Literature. Not "erotic images" or "erotic movies". Ultimately this is a story site that had greatly morphed in the bulletin board.
Anywho, I asked my question and was met with an answer. I shall take my leave. Carry on!
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Story Idea - My Wife, Inmate #767838
Okay, here's a long form story I wrote a couple of chapters for, then stalled out on.
The woman works for the FBI as a special agent. Her husband is a prison warden. They get called to work at a Prison Farm in Texas that is a front for a world wide white slavery ring.
They know the prison is corrupt, and they aren't interested in busting the prison. They want to bust the cartel that is selling the women overseas, and hopefully work their way up to the Juan, who is running the entire organization.
The husband, who has experience as a Warden and knows a few of the prison officials through the good old boy network, gets called in to replace the Warden. This allows him to see the operation, but they are only showing it to him in pieces, until he gets to know it.
A few days after he starts, his wife shows up in town, masquerading as a law student who's phone/GPS has died and has gotten hopelessly lost. She gets hit on by a deputy, tell him to go spin (Badham County!) and gets arrested and sent to the Prison Farm.
Since he's just staring, the husband gets to watch his wife being processed: strip down, cavity search, gang shower, delousing. He even lends a hand for a double check during the cavity search. Of course, he has to treat her like any other inmate, or they are both dead.
The wife is targeted to work in the truck stop brothel as part of her preparation for eventual sale overseas. She is subjected to degrading plantation labor, tarring parking lots in skimpy clothes in the chain gang, corporal punishment in front of paid guests, and frequent cavity searches and showers with her husband and his pals watching. The lesbian prison guard running her block takes a liking to her, and starts renting her out to male convicts for a half carton of smokes.
Her job is to resist convincingly, and she gets into character. Her husband's job is to break her as quickly as possible, so they can get her to work in the brothel, and she can eventually be sold. The problem is she gets into her role, and resists, and he starts to get turned on by all the degradations she is going through...as does she. It seems like they used to role play inmate/warden, and now they get to do it for real, without ever breaking character, or else.
I wrote up intake and chain gang, but never took it any further. But there is a new idea for you!
Okay, here's a long form story I wrote a couple of chapters for, then stalled out on.
The woman works for the FBI as a special agent. Her husband is a prison warden. They get called to work at a Prison Farm in Texas that is a front for a world wide white slavery ring.
They know the prison is corrupt, and they aren't interested in busting the prison. They want to bust the cartel that is selling the women overseas, and hopefully work their way up to the Juan, who is running the entire organization.
The husband, who has experience as a Warden and knows a few of the prison officials through the good old boy network, gets called in to replace the Warden. This allows him to see the operation, but they are only showing it to him in pieces, until he gets to know it.
A few days after he starts, his wife shows up in town, masquerading as a law student who's phone/GPS has died and has gotten hopelessly lost. She gets hit on by a deputy, tell him to go spin (Badham County!) and gets arrested and sent to the Prison Farm.
Since he's just staring, the husband gets to watch his wife being processed: strip down, cavity search, gang shower, delousing. He even lends a hand for a double check during the cavity search. Of course, he has to treat her like any other inmate, or they are both dead.
The wife is targeted to work in the truck stop brothel as part of her preparation for eventual sale overseas. She is subjected to degrading plantation labor, tarring parking lots in skimpy clothes in the chain gang, corporal punishment in front of paid guests, and frequent cavity searches and showers with her husband and his pals watching. The lesbian prison guard running her block takes a liking to her, and starts renting her out to male convicts for a half carton of smokes.
Her job is to resist convincingly, and she gets into character. Her husband's job is to break her as quickly as possible, so they can get her to work in the brothel, and she can eventually be sold. The problem is she gets into her role, and resists, and he starts to get turned on by all the degradations she is going through...as does she. It seems like they used to role play inmate/warden, and now they get to do it for real, without ever breaking character, or else.
I wrote up intake and chain gang, but never took it any further. But there is a new idea for you!
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perhaps the Warden had a picture of his wife on his desk and one of the guards and/or prisoners recognizes her from that and misuses this info...
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Story Idea - WIP
Yes, I actually had a side plot where someone she once put in jail as a rapist from her days as a prosecutor is now a guard in the jail. He agrees to keep her secret, but she has to submit to him, and he relishes using the prosector who once imprisoned him as a tasty piece of jail tail, whispering in her ear that she "doesn't seem so full of yer'sel now, do you, Princess?"
Yes, I actually had a side plot where someone she once put in jail as a rapist from her days as a prosecutor is now a guard in the jail. He agrees to keep her secret, but she has to submit to him, and he relishes using the prosector who once imprisoned him as a tasty piece of jail tail, whispering in her ear that she "doesn't seem so full of yer'sel now, do you, Princess?"
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Story Idea #2 - Reversal of Fortune
In that vain, I once had an idea where a bunch of female law enforcement professionals (prosecutors, detectives, prison guards, wardens, psychiatrists) are invited to a conference, where they are all arrested and put in a prison where the guards are the men they once imprisoned for various sex crimes.
They have to go through the entire intake procedure, only now when the guard tells them to strip naked and spread their legs for a fingering, the law is on HIS side. The women are given better rations if they agree to work in the island brothel, and as per the Stanford Prison Experiment begin behaving like inmates and prostitutes. It turns out the entire scheme was a billionaire's psych experiment to prove that cops can be criminals and visa-versa if the roles are changed.
In that vain, I once had an idea where a bunch of female law enforcement professionals (prosecutors, detectives, prison guards, wardens, psychiatrists) are invited to a conference, where they are all arrested and put in a prison where the guards are the men they once imprisoned for various sex crimes.
They have to go through the entire intake procedure, only now when the guard tells them to strip naked and spread their legs for a fingering, the law is on HIS side. The women are given better rations if they agree to work in the island brothel, and as per the Stanford Prison Experiment begin behaving like inmates and prostitutes. It turns out the entire scheme was a billionaire's psych experiment to prove that cops can be criminals and visa-versa if the roles are changed.
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story idea #3 - Celebrity Twin
A beautiful, famous actress is ridiculously rich, but is hungry for her Oscar. When a women-in-prison script is offered up to her, she cooks up a scheme with her sleazy agent that will win her Oscar glory!
Another woman who is her twin look-a-like has been arrested in Mexico for impersonating the famous actress and running up bills in her name. The famous actress arranges with her agent to visit the girl in prison, and they change places so that she can have a "real" prison experience as research for her role. Her look-a-like knows how to impersonate her and can fool everyone, so she has no problems impersonating the celebrity.
The celebrity is supposed to be in prison for two weeks, but after two days of corporal punishment and relentlessly trading sex for better treatment she tries to contact her agent. Of course in the prison she has no way of contacting anyone. Things take a turn for a worse when her agent dies of a cocaine overdose and no one knows it's the famous actress who is actually in the Mexican hellhole jail.
A beautiful, famous actress is ridiculously rich, but is hungry for her Oscar. When a women-in-prison script is offered up to her, she cooks up a scheme with her sleazy agent that will win her Oscar glory!
Another woman who is her twin look-a-like has been arrested in Mexico for impersonating the famous actress and running up bills in her name. The famous actress arranges with her agent to visit the girl in prison, and they change places so that she can have a "real" prison experience as research for her role. Her look-a-like knows how to impersonate her and can fool everyone, so she has no problems impersonating the celebrity.
The celebrity is supposed to be in prison for two weeks, but after two days of corporal punishment and relentlessly trading sex for better treatment she tries to contact her agent. Of course in the prison she has no way of contacting anyone. Things take a turn for a worse when her agent dies of a cocaine overdose and no one knows it's the famous actress who is actually in the Mexican hellhole jail.
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Joe Doe Stories writes: "Her husband is a prison warden."
ChuckWolf adds: "... perhaps the Warden had a picture of his wife on his desk and one of the guards and/or prisoners recognizes her from that and misuses this info..."
Joe Doe Stories adds: "... where they are all arrested and put in a prison where the guards are the men they once imprisoned for various sex crimes."
While I appreciate your interest, the whole idea of erotic Women in Prison stories hinges upon an overall theme of LESBIAN women preying upon pretty young incarcerated girls behind bars! A male warden? STRIKE ONE! Male guards? STRIKE TWO? And a male doctor or any OTHER horny and/or rapacious men involved? STRIKE THREE!
I am NOT a fan of guys working in women's penitentiaries, at least NOT when it comes to WIP erotica! In real life, it's probably necessary, but NOT in the world of fantasy women's prison stories!
"...and no one knows it's the famous actress who is actually in the Mexican hellhole jail."
I remember an erotic video series titled "Bad Girls," or something along those lines, that was mostly about predatory lesbian guards in prison, having sex with beautiful young female inmates. In one PARTICULAR release in that series, it was south-of-the-border, with a predatory lesbian MEXICAN warden preying upon the pretty white American girls inide hr jail - and it was an exceedingly HOT idea!
ChuckWolf adds: "... perhaps the Warden had a picture of his wife on his desk and one of the guards and/or prisoners recognizes her from that and misuses this info..."
Joe Doe Stories adds: "... where they are all arrested and put in a prison where the guards are the men they once imprisoned for various sex crimes."
While I appreciate your interest, the whole idea of erotic Women in Prison stories hinges upon an overall theme of LESBIAN women preying upon pretty young incarcerated girls behind bars! A male warden? STRIKE ONE! Male guards? STRIKE TWO? And a male doctor or any OTHER horny and/or rapacious men involved? STRIKE THREE!
I am NOT a fan of guys working in women's penitentiaries, at least NOT when it comes to WIP erotica! In real life, it's probably necessary, but NOT in the world of fantasy women's prison stories!
"...and no one knows it's the famous actress who is actually in the Mexican hellhole jail."
I remember an erotic video series titled "Bad Girls," or something along those lines, that was mostly about predatory lesbian guards in prison, having sex with beautiful young female inmates. In one PARTICULAR release in that series, it was south-of-the-border, with a predatory lesbian MEXICAN warden preying upon the pretty white American girls inide hr jail - and it was an exceedingly HOT idea!
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Not necessarily. That is your opinion. That is the beauty of the board you are in. Story Ideas is a place where people come to share, collaborate, and work on stories together - more or less. Any author can take any tidbit (perhaps even your porn has inspired someone?) that interests them and write a story how they want. It does not mean they will write your fantasy. If your thread truly is in this board for the purpose of new Literotica stories, you may have to be the one to write your fantasy. Bring an idea to the board and you have to live with what an author chooses!
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Women In Prison Story Idea #4
I agree there is room for all sorts of stories, and as these are just outlines it's easy enough to change the genders. But as I aim to please, here's a Lesbian Lockup story.
THE PROTEST: Wealthy socialite Taylor is arrested during an VERY chic environmental protest. To her horror she recognizes the matron who is processing the women in is Sam, a fat redneck lesbian Taylor that used to work for Taylor. Sam was on the security staff, but Taylor fired her because she didn't feel she promoted the resorts "beautiful people" look.
Sam recognizes Taylor too, and takes great pleasure in conducting Taylor's strip search, doing a "double check" with three fingers when Taylor's on the exam table. When Taylor starts to cry in the showers, Sam taunts her: "Oh, little jailbird is crying all ready? What's a matter, sweet cheeks? Daddy's money not going to help you in the showers?"
Sam arranges a "mistake" where Taylor isn't sent to court to be bailed out with the rest of the protestors and instead has to spend the night in jail. After taking Taylor over her knee for a quick lesson in respect, she gives her a choice: lick Sam's snatch or Sam will trade her to a group of lesbian inmates for a pack of smokes. Taylor pleasures Sam, and then Sam trades her away anyway, watching and hooting at Taylor as she is used and abused by the other girls.
I agree there is room for all sorts of stories, and as these are just outlines it's easy enough to change the genders. But as I aim to please, here's a Lesbian Lockup story.
THE PROTEST: Wealthy socialite Taylor is arrested during an VERY chic environmental protest. To her horror she recognizes the matron who is processing the women in is Sam, a fat redneck lesbian Taylor that used to work for Taylor. Sam was on the security staff, but Taylor fired her because she didn't feel she promoted the resorts "beautiful people" look.
Sam recognizes Taylor too, and takes great pleasure in conducting Taylor's strip search, doing a "double check" with three fingers when Taylor's on the exam table. When Taylor starts to cry in the showers, Sam taunts her: "Oh, little jailbird is crying all ready? What's a matter, sweet cheeks? Daddy's money not going to help you in the showers?"
Sam arranges a "mistake" where Taylor isn't sent to court to be bailed out with the rest of the protestors and instead has to spend the night in jail. After taking Taylor over her knee for a quick lesson in respect, she gives her a choice: lick Sam's snatch or Sam will trade her to a group of lesbian inmates for a pack of smokes. Taylor pleasures Sam, and then Sam trades her away anyway, watching and hooting at Taylor as she is used and abused by the other girls.
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Story Idea 5: Judged!
Stephanie, an accomplished Female State Supreme Court Judge is invited to speak at a law enforcement conference. At the conference, Stephanie meets Maxine ("Call me Max!") a female Southern sheriff who runs Yankee girls who are passing through for Spring break to the prison farm where the nasty female warden can turn a quick dollar on them, and use them for her pleasure.
Our State Justice is intrigued, and to Max's surprise Stephanie shows up in the Sheriff's office. However instead of being dressed in a smart business suit, she is dressed in a tube top and Daisy Duke shorts. Acting the ditz, Stephanie complains that her tail light is broken and wonders if her car is safe to drive.
Alas, it is NOT, and she is promptly arrested, strip searched, showered and made to service Max. Will Max keep her, or send her to the Judge for a quick run-through in court and a stint of hard labor on the prison farm? Get busy with that tongue, Stephanie...your fate is in Sheriff Max's hands!
Stephanie, an accomplished Female State Supreme Court Judge is invited to speak at a law enforcement conference. At the conference, Stephanie meets Maxine ("Call me Max!") a female Southern sheriff who runs Yankee girls who are passing through for Spring break to the prison farm where the nasty female warden can turn a quick dollar on them, and use them for her pleasure.
Our State Justice is intrigued, and to Max's surprise Stephanie shows up in the Sheriff's office. However instead of being dressed in a smart business suit, she is dressed in a tube top and Daisy Duke shorts. Acting the ditz, Stephanie complains that her tail light is broken and wonders if her car is safe to drive.
Alas, it is NOT, and she is promptly arrested, strip searched, showered and made to service Max. Will Max keep her, or send her to the Judge for a quick run-through in court and a stint of hard labor on the prison farm? Get busy with that tongue, Stephanie...your fate is in Sheriff Max's hands!
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DarkPleasures writes: "That is your opinion. That is the beauty of the board you are in. Story Ideas is a place where people come to share, collaborate, and work on stories together - more or less."
Yes, of course it's my opinion - everything on this Literotica forum involves people expressing their opinions on things! This very story-idea: "Women in Prison" - is something that some people CLEARLY find erotic, otherwise they wouldn't have made all of those erotic women-in-prison films starting back in the 1970's! And then today we have "Orange is the New Black," which is more REALISTIC than it is EROTIC!
http://monstergirl.files.wordpress.com/2012/06/capturfiles_19.jpg?w=490&h=264 - (REALISTIC women's prison: mopping the floor!)
http://i.imgur.com/mQuF8VC.jpg - (FANTASY women's prison: mopping the floor - now which is more EROTIC?)
Joe Doe Stories writes: "After taking Taylor over her knee for a quick lesson in respect, she gives her a choice: lick Sam's snatch or Sam will trade her to a group of lesbian inmates for a pack of smokes."
Redneck butchy-lez Sam spanking wealthy socialite Taylor's ass is an EXCELLENT idea, Joe, but I'd much rather she desired Taylor's entire body than simply wanting to humiliate the girl by forcing her to go down on her! But trading Taylor to a lezzie-gang in exchange for a pack of smokes certainly works for me!
"Stephanie meets Maxine ("Call me Max!") a female Southern sheriff who runs Yankee girls who are passing through for Spring break to the prison farm where the nasty female warden can turn a quick dollar on them, and use them for her pleasure."
The idea of big-bellied male southern sheriffs running corrupt jails has been done ad infinitum, but I've YET to see a southern jail portrayed with a predatory lesbian FEMALE sheriff locking up pretty "Spring-Breakin'" Yankee girls to play with! THAT could definitely be a winner!
http://www.bondageblog.com/bondage-pictures/arrested-bikini-girls.jpg - (Spring Break gone wrong - bikini girls in handcuffs!)
Yes, of course it's my opinion - everything on this Literotica forum involves people expressing their opinions on things! This very story-idea: "Women in Prison" - is something that some people CLEARLY find erotic, otherwise they wouldn't have made all of those erotic women-in-prison films starting back in the 1970's! And then today we have "Orange is the New Black," which is more REALISTIC than it is EROTIC!
http://monstergirl.files.wordpress.com/2012/06/capturfiles_19.jpg?w=490&h=264 - (REALISTIC women's prison: mopping the floor!)
http://i.imgur.com/mQuF8VC.jpg - (FANTASY women's prison: mopping the floor - now which is more EROTIC?)
Joe Doe Stories writes: "After taking Taylor over her knee for a quick lesson in respect, she gives her a choice: lick Sam's snatch or Sam will trade her to a group of lesbian inmates for a pack of smokes."
Redneck butchy-lez Sam spanking wealthy socialite Taylor's ass is an EXCELLENT idea, Joe, but I'd much rather she desired Taylor's entire body than simply wanting to humiliate the girl by forcing her to go down on her! But trading Taylor to a lezzie-gang in exchange for a pack of smokes certainly works for me!
"Stephanie meets Maxine ("Call me Max!") a female Southern sheriff who runs Yankee girls who are passing through for Spring break to the prison farm where the nasty female warden can turn a quick dollar on them, and use them for her pleasure."
The idea of big-bellied male southern sheriffs running corrupt jails has been done ad infinitum, but I've YET to see a southern jail portrayed with a predatory lesbian FEMALE sheriff locking up pretty "Spring-Breakin'" Yankee girls to play with! THAT could definitely be a winner!
http://www.bondageblog.com/bondage-pictures/arrested-bikini-girls.jpg - (Spring Break gone wrong - bikini girls in handcuffs!)
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WHY are the people who write/script WIP (women-in-prison) videos such clueless fucking morons?
https://www.redtube.com/6983991 - (Example #1 - female guard engages in lezzie sex with pretty inmate - runs 8:04)
This FIRST example of crappy scriptwriting involves a predatory lesbian guard paired with a pretty female inmate (who has a strong foreign accept!) Problem #1: the guard TRIES to act all butchy, but she doesn't really look the part. Nor does she ever seem particularly attracted to the girl she's been paired with! That's just bad directing! The guard handles her nightstick with what I guess is supposed to be a tough-looking expression, only it looks more constipated instead. A pretty female inmate behind bars is shown smiling & trying to flirt with her. In other words, it's going to be the inmate initiating the action instead of showing the lesbian guard being attracted to a pretty young girl under her control (which would have been so much hotter!) The inmate says: "You wanna fuck me? How much?" That kind of dialogue would make much more sense out on the street with a cop & a hooker, but NOT in jail! The girl is wearing lingerie, which looks more porny than anything else! The guard sticks her nightstick up the girl's pussy (excessively porny), and later the girl gets onto her elbows & knees so that the guard can stick her nightstick up her from behind (5:30 to 7:52), which was also more porny than erotic! On the positive side, I liked how the guard remained fully-clothed for this entire scene, as opposed to both women getting simultaneously naked (which just looks porny!)
https://www.redtube.com/1151101 - (Example #2 - court-appointed attorney has lezzie sex with pretty inmate - runs 7:37)
This scene is from a Sweetheart Video production, and involves pretty young spoiled rich girl Sara Luvv behind bars, meeting her court-appointed lawyer, played by Dana DeArmond, who is normally excellent when playing the dominant older woman role! Problem #1: WHY NOT simply cast Dana as a lesbian guard, or maybe even the woman in charge of the jail? In THIS version, Dana has to explain to the girl that her family has disowned her, which adds nothing to the overall eroticism of this encounter! The she forcibly kisses Sara (2:30), initiating lezzie-sex! Dana then makes Sara go down on her, showing very little attraction for the beautiful young girl's gorgeous body! Finally, she positions a submissive, nude Sara onto her elbows & knees and fingers her from behind (5:35 to 6:20), which was kind of hot, although doing her with a strap-on would have been even hotter! This was GREAT casting with sub/par writing & directing!
https://www.redtube.com/119667 - (Example #3 - kinky lesbian guard decides to play with pretty prisoner - runs 14:43)
This third scene ALSO has good casting but weak writing/direction! Basically, this wicked-looking lesbian guard tells a beautiful chained-up female inmate: "I'm going to have my way with you!" The beautiful inmate objects, but to no avail. Problem #1: both women appear really bored by this whole experience! The inmate (Natasha Sweet) gets her beautiful butt spanked & swatted with a riding crop (2:05 to 3:35), which was nice. She then has to lick the guard's leg, followed by mostly-porny-looking nipple torture. It gets good again later on (10:30 to 12:30), with the lezzie guard again giving some attention to Natasha's gorgeous derriere! The main problem with this scene is that the dominant lezzie never actually FUCKS the beautiful young inmate under her control! It's all just punishment ONLY - and that get boring really quickly!
https://www.redtube.com/6983991 - (Example #1 - female guard engages in lezzie sex with pretty inmate - runs 8:04)
This FIRST example of crappy scriptwriting involves a predatory lesbian guard paired with a pretty female inmate (who has a strong foreign accept!) Problem #1: the guard TRIES to act all butchy, but she doesn't really look the part. Nor does she ever seem particularly attracted to the girl she's been paired with! That's just bad directing! The guard handles her nightstick with what I guess is supposed to be a tough-looking expression, only it looks more constipated instead. A pretty female inmate behind bars is shown smiling & trying to flirt with her. In other words, it's going to be the inmate initiating the action instead of showing the lesbian guard being attracted to a pretty young girl under her control (which would have been so much hotter!) The inmate says: "You wanna fuck me? How much?" That kind of dialogue would make much more sense out on the street with a cop & a hooker, but NOT in jail! The girl is wearing lingerie, which looks more porny than anything else! The guard sticks her nightstick up the girl's pussy (excessively porny), and later the girl gets onto her elbows & knees so that the guard can stick her nightstick up her from behind (5:30 to 7:52), which was also more porny than erotic! On the positive side, I liked how the guard remained fully-clothed for this entire scene, as opposed to both women getting simultaneously naked (which just looks porny!)
https://www.redtube.com/1151101 - (Example #2 - court-appointed attorney has lezzie sex with pretty inmate - runs 7:37)
This scene is from a Sweetheart Video production, and involves pretty young spoiled rich girl Sara Luvv behind bars, meeting her court-appointed lawyer, played by Dana DeArmond, who is normally excellent when playing the dominant older woman role! Problem #1: WHY NOT simply cast Dana as a lesbian guard, or maybe even the woman in charge of the jail? In THIS version, Dana has to explain to the girl that her family has disowned her, which adds nothing to the overall eroticism of this encounter! The she forcibly kisses Sara (2:30), initiating lezzie-sex! Dana then makes Sara go down on her, showing very little attraction for the beautiful young girl's gorgeous body! Finally, she positions a submissive, nude Sara onto her elbows & knees and fingers her from behind (5:35 to 6:20), which was kind of hot, although doing her with a strap-on would have been even hotter! This was GREAT casting with sub/par writing & directing!
https://www.redtube.com/119667 - (Example #3 - kinky lesbian guard decides to play with pretty prisoner - runs 14:43)
This third scene ALSO has good casting but weak writing/direction! Basically, this wicked-looking lesbian guard tells a beautiful chained-up female inmate: "I'm going to have my way with you!" The beautiful inmate objects, but to no avail. Problem #1: both women appear really bored by this whole experience! The inmate (Natasha Sweet) gets her beautiful butt spanked & swatted with a riding crop (2:05 to 3:35), which was nice. She then has to lick the guard's leg, followed by mostly-porny-looking nipple torture. It gets good again later on (10:30 to 12:30), with the lezzie guard again giving some attention to Natasha's gorgeous derriere! The main problem with this scene is that the dominant lezzie never actually FUCKS the beautiful young inmate under her control! It's all just punishment ONLY - and that get boring really quickly!
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And back to porn?
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DarkPleasures writes: "And back to porn?"
Not at all - with those above three video-clips I am trying to illustrate what's WRONG with the adult-video-industry and it's LACK of quality writers!
This Literotica web-site is ALL ABOUT erotic writing - something that the directors & producers of adult video have all-but-ABANDONED! I mean, read what they've slapped together (if you don't wish to watch them for yourself), and tell me if you think there's nothing wrong with those clueless pinheads creating WIP videos today!
Yes, I know that some people say "it's just PORN - it's SUPPOSED to be excrement!" - and that may very well be true for all of the gonzo-crap out there being gobbled-up by the consumers of XXX-garbage-porn, but for WOMEN-IN-PRISON videos I expect something better!
And yes - I already know what you're going to say - "that's just your opinion" - and you're right! But for those of us who CARE about erotic quality-writing, it means so much more! Sure, I can write about what I THINK is wrong with the adult video-industry today, but I'd much rather illustrate it, and let you judge for yourself!
Not at all - with those above three video-clips I am trying to illustrate what's WRONG with the adult-video-industry and it's LACK of quality writers!
This Literotica web-site is ALL ABOUT erotic writing - something that the directors & producers of adult video have all-but-ABANDONED! I mean, read what they've slapped together (if you don't wish to watch them for yourself), and tell me if you think there's nothing wrong with those clueless pinheads creating WIP videos today!
Yes, I know that some people say "it's just PORN - it's SUPPOSED to be excrement!" - and that may very well be true for all of the gonzo-crap out there being gobbled-up by the consumers of XXX-garbage-porn, but for WOMEN-IN-PRISON videos I expect something better!
And yes - I already know what you're going to say - "that's just your opinion" - and you're right! But for those of us who CARE about erotic quality-writing, it means so much more! Sure, I can write about what I THINK is wrong with the adult video-industry today, but I'd much rather illustrate it, and let you judge for yourself!
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lol Sure thing, Dumpington.
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A Story Fragment: Lawyer In LockUp
Navigating the stairs of the prison bus with my wrists shackled to my leg irons was even more difficult on my way down the steps because of my fear of falling. The last step brought me painfully to my knees as the impatient Matron yanked me down the last step, causing me to land in the dirt of the Pine Parish Prison Farm for Women.
"On your feet!" she screamed, kicking me in the side with her boot, then slapping me on the ass for good measure as I staggered up and into line with the others. I was 31, a lawyer, a former prosecutor, and now a Judge, but any illusion that I was better than the feckless Spring Break bimbos who had been picked up for a stint at the prison farm by my pal Sheriff Alex vanished as I staggered into line with my sisters.
Sheriff Alex! She'd probably laugh if she could see me now, my scrapped knees and crop top covered in the dirt of the prison yard. I remembered the way she smiled as she looked me up-and-down at the Judicial conference, a cold, appraising, lustful that gave me the chills. "Ya think a lot of yerself, don't ya, city girl?" she said.
I did indeed. I was a Judge speaking at a conference, and as high above her as heaven was above earth. Sheriff Alex was a rube, a hick town Sheriff who hadn't even graduated from High School. Of course that was part of her appeal: her utter insignificance made her the perfect foil for my fantasy. And so when I showed up in her town dressed like one of the idiot college girls she liked to arrest, our role play began.
I thought she'd give me a little frisk and a bit of quick girl-on-girl love, but I was wrong. The prison farm! My trial wouldn't be for 2 weeks, and until then I'd be working for the county. Since she got a cut of whatever the girls she arrested earned, I'd be working for ALEX.
They took the shackles off of us in the yard. The interior fence was electrified, and the dogs barking and snarling at us knew to stay away from it. The outer wall was stone, about 40 feet high, with guard towers, and guards with high powered rifles. While this was my fantasy, it certainly wasn't going to be a fantasy I escaped.
It had been a short bus ride but the shackles had already chaffed my wrists and ankles. I had seen the girls in the sweltering cotton fields wearing them -- I certainly hope Alex didn't expect ME to lug around those leg shackles all day. I didn't have much time to reflect as we were hustled into a building under a sign that said INTAKE and handed a cardboard box.
Once again we lined up. To my surprise, I saw Sheriff Alex in the corner, leaning against the wall, looking oh-so-butch in her uniform with her short hair and mirrored sunglasses hanging from the front of her shirt.
"What's SHE doing there?" I asked the matron.
The unamused matron got in my face and yelled. "SHE'S WATCHING YOU STRIP, INMATE! TOP OFF! SHOW ME THOSE TITTIES!"
I quickly pulled my top off, trying to ignore Sheriff Alex's obvious delight as my bare breasts bounced into view.
"EVERYBODY! EVERYTHING OFF AND INTO YOUR PROPERTY BOX! I WANT YOU ALL BARE ASS NAKED IN 60 SECONDS!"
Alex smirked at me as I quickly stripped down for her viewing pleasure. Licking her lips, she watched me take off my absurdly expensive sneakers, cute pink socks, jean shorts, and finally my lacy white panties. All my pretty things gone, all in the cardboard property box, which already had a barcoded tag with what i presumed was going to be my inmate number.
I was a Judge, but naked it was clear I was no different than the others. When the order came to bend over, put my hands flat on the floor, and spread my legs, I obeyed, opening myself up to my amused captors gaze.
Navigating the stairs of the prison bus with my wrists shackled to my leg irons was even more difficult on my way down the steps because of my fear of falling. The last step brought me painfully to my knees as the impatient Matron yanked me down the last step, causing me to land in the dirt of the Pine Parish Prison Farm for Women.
"On your feet!" she screamed, kicking me in the side with her boot, then slapping me on the ass for good measure as I staggered up and into line with the others. I was 31, a lawyer, a former prosecutor, and now a Judge, but any illusion that I was better than the feckless Spring Break bimbos who had been picked up for a stint at the prison farm by my pal Sheriff Alex vanished as I staggered into line with my sisters.
Sheriff Alex! She'd probably laugh if she could see me now, my scrapped knees and crop top covered in the dirt of the prison yard. I remembered the way she smiled as she looked me up-and-down at the Judicial conference, a cold, appraising, lustful that gave me the chills. "Ya think a lot of yerself, don't ya, city girl?" she said.
I did indeed. I was a Judge speaking at a conference, and as high above her as heaven was above earth. Sheriff Alex was a rube, a hick town Sheriff who hadn't even graduated from High School. Of course that was part of her appeal: her utter insignificance made her the perfect foil for my fantasy. And so when I showed up in her town dressed like one of the idiot college girls she liked to arrest, our role play began.
I thought she'd give me a little frisk and a bit of quick girl-on-girl love, but I was wrong. The prison farm! My trial wouldn't be for 2 weeks, and until then I'd be working for the county. Since she got a cut of whatever the girls she arrested earned, I'd be working for ALEX.
They took the shackles off of us in the yard. The interior fence was electrified, and the dogs barking and snarling at us knew to stay away from it. The outer wall was stone, about 40 feet high, with guard towers, and guards with high powered rifles. While this was my fantasy, it certainly wasn't going to be a fantasy I escaped.
It had been a short bus ride but the shackles had already chaffed my wrists and ankles. I had seen the girls in the sweltering cotton fields wearing them -- I certainly hope Alex didn't expect ME to lug around those leg shackles all day. I didn't have much time to reflect as we were hustled into a building under a sign that said INTAKE and handed a cardboard box.
Once again we lined up. To my surprise, I saw Sheriff Alex in the corner, leaning against the wall, looking oh-so-butch in her uniform with her short hair and mirrored sunglasses hanging from the front of her shirt.
"What's SHE doing there?" I asked the matron.
The unamused matron got in my face and yelled. "SHE'S WATCHING YOU STRIP, INMATE! TOP OFF! SHOW ME THOSE TITTIES!"
I quickly pulled my top off, trying to ignore Sheriff Alex's obvious delight as my bare breasts bounced into view.
"EVERYBODY! EVERYTHING OFF AND INTO YOUR PROPERTY BOX! I WANT YOU ALL BARE ASS NAKED IN 60 SECONDS!"
Alex smirked at me as I quickly stripped down for her viewing pleasure. Licking her lips, she watched me take off my absurdly expensive sneakers, cute pink socks, jean shorts, and finally my lacy white panties. All my pretty things gone, all in the cardboard property box, which already had a barcoded tag with what i presumed was going to be my inmate number.
I was a Judge, but naked it was clear I was no different than the others. When the order came to bend over, put my hands flat on the floor, and spread my legs, I obeyed, opening myself up to my amused captors gaze.
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As "story fragments" go, that is longer than the allowable "less than 3 paragraphs" per Lit's rules.
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This concept could work for the Crime and Punishment story event in a few months. A prison romance. My problem is most of the people I know who have done time in prison were in Jamaican jail on drug trafficking charges. Does anyone know if American prison and Jamaican jail are the same experience?
Lesbian inmates are boring. Soviet helicopter gunships were less than $2 million in the years after the fall of the Soviet Union. Her getting herself into prison was the easy part, us breaking her out was going to be the hard part.
Lesbian inmates are boring. Soviet helicopter gunships were less than $2 million in the years after the fall of the Soviet Union. Her getting herself into prison was the easy part, us breaking her out was going to be the hard part.
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