Short story part 1 review

[artslut86]

I'm looking for a quick read by a volunteer to have my story approved.
It's short and part one of 4 or 5.
Any takers? If so please PM . Cheers
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[yukonnights]

Sounds to me that you're probably looking for an editor. This Story Feedback category is aimed at stories that have already gone live. I think you'll have more luck seeking an editor.

 

[artslut86]

Sounds to me that you're probably looking for an editor. This Story Feedback category is aimed at stories that have already gone live. I think you'll have more luck seeking an editor.

Yes. Sorry, this post said no more than 10k words so I thought I cancelled the post. Doah. Apologies.