H piltdown
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- Oct 6, 2002
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I recall from reading the rules and advice concerning submissions that we are advised to let everyone know that we posted a story, and would care for some constructive criticism. So, this is my personal plug.
I submitted two stories at about the same time. One of those stories was my first tentative attempt at any type of writing since High School, (and that was years ago). The story is called 'Lady in Black', and I had a lot of problems trying to keep it relatively short, and simple. I didn't think that a lengthy, introspective novel was what readers of erotica were looking for. It really was difficult finding a happy medium between story line and good old fashioned hanky panky. Anyhow, I hope y'all like it, and would appreciate some constructive criticism.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=65652
I submitted another which was actually my first real attempt at writing erotica. However, this story was more a game between myself, my wife, and our friend. The thing got out of hand, but we had fun. We read several stories from Literotica, and they dared me to write one myself. Well, it turned into a collaborative effort that pushed the limits of our combined imaginations. It got out of hand. The editing is cursory, and the plot goes from straight sex, to public humiliation, to FemDom BDSM, to very hard bisexuality, mostly concerning males. Basically, its not for everyone. Judging from the e-mail I've gotten about this one so far, people either love it, or hate it. A couple of the hate e-mails were stranger than the story--Go figure! If you're into this type of bizarre stuff, here it is:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=65661
I submitted two stories at about the same time. One of those stories was my first tentative attempt at any type of writing since High School, (and that was years ago). The story is called 'Lady in Black', and I had a lot of problems trying to keep it relatively short, and simple. I didn't think that a lengthy, introspective novel was what readers of erotica were looking for. It really was difficult finding a happy medium between story line and good old fashioned hanky panky. Anyhow, I hope y'all like it, and would appreciate some constructive criticism.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=65652
I submitted another which was actually my first real attempt at writing erotica. However, this story was more a game between myself, my wife, and our friend. The thing got out of hand, but we had fun. We read several stories from Literotica, and they dared me to write one myself. Well, it turned into a collaborative effort that pushed the limits of our combined imaginations. It got out of hand. The editing is cursory, and the plot goes from straight sex, to public humiliation, to FemDom BDSM, to very hard bisexuality, mostly concerning males. Basically, its not for everyone. Judging from the e-mail I've gotten about this one so far, people either love it, or hate it. A couple of the hate e-mails were stranger than the story--Go figure! If you're into this type of bizarre stuff, here it is:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=65661
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