KillerMuffin
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cym was kind enough to give me information but I am severely not processing it into action.
Serious Hypothetical D/s question here
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KillerMuffin
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Dammit, I hit the wrong button!
Anyway
Here's the deal.
I've got two characters, male officer, female private, US Army, same chain of command. Yeah yeah yeah, whatevever. Anyway, she had a major crush on the major, he took advantage of it and took her to a remote cliched cabin in the woods and wouldn't fuck her until she submitted to him so she did and really loved it. She gave him her submission. The sex: Bondage and he got her submission by denying orgasms and by denying his cock.
They get back to real life and one of the sergeants figures it out. He tries to protect her by telling her it wasn't real, just a game, and she gets seriously pissed off. Of course it's not and he can't stay away so he manages to get her back to the cabin the next weekend.
She doesn't trust him and she's angry at him.
He's got to get the trust back. What's a Dom to do?
I honestly have no idea. Conversation isn't working because he keeps sticking his foot in his mouth and she keeps telling him to go to hell.
Anyway
Here's the deal.
I've got two characters, male officer, female private, US Army, same chain of command. Yeah yeah yeah, whatevever. Anyway, she had a major crush on the major, he took advantage of it and took her to a remote cliched cabin in the woods and wouldn't fuck her until she submitted to him so she did and really loved it. She gave him her submission. The sex: Bondage and he got her submission by denying orgasms and by denying his cock.
They get back to real life and one of the sergeants figures it out. He tries to protect her by telling her it wasn't real, just a game, and she gets seriously pissed off. Of course it's not and he can't stay away so he manages to get her back to the cabin the next weekend.
She doesn't trust him and she's angry at him.
He's got to get the trust back. What's a Dom to do?
I honestly have no idea. Conversation isn't working because he keeps sticking his foot in his mouth and she keeps telling him to go to hell.
Shadowsdream
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They get back to real life and one of the sergeants figures it out. He tries to protect her by telling her it wasn't real, just a game, and she gets seriously pissed off. Of course it's not and he can't stay away so he manages to get her back to the cabin the next weekend.
...How can he protect her by telling her it wasn't real?
This sentence is losing Me
...How can he protect her by telling her it wasn't real?
This sentence is losing Me
cymbidia
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Translation: Muff's blocked big time.
Here, let me help...
What would happen in a real situation if
1. The two, dom and sub, are falling in love with each other, despite their appalled realization of that fact.
-and-
2. Outside forces were conspiring to keep them apart
-and-
3. She's fighting her sub nature and needs but is wildly drawn to him and his dominance of her, too, drawn in a way she's never been drawn to anyone or anything in her life
-and-
4. He knows he should leave her alone, after all, he's in a position of aurthority over her, but he cannot. Whatever is between them is stronger than he can fight, and all he knows is that he needs her, hungers for her -mind, body, soul, spirit- like she's the air in his lungs
-and-
5. They have to end up together for Muff's story to make me happy, despite what she says about prison time for him for fucking someone out of his rank or some weird military thing.
Okay kinksters: dig in. Help the little Muffin girl finish this one. She's agonizing over it and i've read, like 60 or 70 ro 80 pages of this thing and it's good. It should be finished.
Muffy honey sweetie pie?
Did you throw away the notes i sent you after i read this?
I might still have a copy in my files...
Here, let me help...
What would happen in a real situation if
1. The two, dom and sub, are falling in love with each other, despite their appalled realization of that fact.
-and-
2. Outside forces were conspiring to keep them apart
-and-
3. She's fighting her sub nature and needs but is wildly drawn to him and his dominance of her, too, drawn in a way she's never been drawn to anyone or anything in her life
-and-
4. He knows he should leave her alone, after all, he's in a position of aurthority over her, but he cannot. Whatever is between them is stronger than he can fight, and all he knows is that he needs her, hungers for her -mind, body, soul, spirit- like she's the air in his lungs
-and-
5. They have to end up together for Muff's story to make me happy, despite what she says about prison time for him for fucking someone out of his rank or some weird military thing.
Okay kinksters: dig in. Help the little Muffin girl finish this one. She's agonizing over it and i've read, like 60 or 70 ro 80 pages of this thing and it's good. It should be finished.
Muffy honey sweetie pie?
Did you throw away the notes i sent you after i read this?
I might still have a copy in my files...
James Blandings
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If he's her commanding officer, his actions with her would seriously compromise his career if revealed. Perhaps there is something you can work with there, his vulnerablity to her in that regard. She can trust him because he HAS to trust her.
KillerMuffin
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They're going to get caught and their BDSM play is going to come out. It's got to, I have 40,000 more words to write. He's going to uncharacteristically sacrifice himself to save her from any harm because the military seriously frowns on this. He has to go to jail, though she would have just been reduced in rank, forfieture of pay, confinement to quarters, and dishonerably discharged.
The happily ever after is the cementing of their D/s relationship.
The reason he lies to her is to push her away, do the noble thing and make her hate him enough to keep herself clear of military legalities. He's too nuts about her to actually do the legal thing himself.0
The happily ever after is the cementing of their D/s relationship.
The reason he lies to her is to push her away, do the noble thing and make her hate him enough to keep herself clear of military legalities. He's too nuts about her to actually do the legal thing himself.0
Shadowsdream
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WOW
What a completely unusual introduction to a D/s ending
hmmm introduction=ending
I can't wait to read the finished version!
What a completely unusual introduction to a D/s ending
hmmm introduction=ending
I can't wait to read the finished version!
Desert Amazon
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