Seeking editor for "Step Bro Chillin' in My Bed" And maybe another story.

[Starburst8865]

"Step Bro Chililn' in My Bed" was a story that actually got accepted and stayed for a few months, suddenly, I got the note that it has been taken down and should see a volunteer to proofread it for me. I don't think I broke any of the rules especially since It actually initially got accepted and stayed for a good while. it's a script intended for a F VA to voice it.

The other one is "The DayFlirt Dating App" which, adittedly, might be too heavy on story and takes too long to get to the sex.

Message me if you want to help proofread it help me know why it wasn't accepted.

 

[AchtungNight]

I’m not sure I can help you with either story even though they sound interesting. I don’t know which rules you broke or how you broke them. I’ve submitted many stories of various quality and seen others posted also with the issues you describe. A volunteer editor has no connection to the publication staff here. But if you want me to try and help you with feedback, give you another chance, start a private Conversation with me please and we’ll go from there. Heads up, I will need to be into your story to review it effectively. I will also request a full disclosure of how it broke the rules as per your current knowledge. They did send you rejection messages for both stories, right!? I will also need about a week to review what you send me, minimum. If you can’t give me that, find another editor or another place to publish and good luck.