Seeking Beta readers/feedback on a second book in a magical university setting

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The first book is already completed and is on Literotica, it's about 170k in words so it has some decent length.
here's the blurb to save you a click:

"Welldark University, one of the many schools in the universe specialized in the training of those that know the Dimensional Truth. Those that can, to put it simply, step through the veil where it is weak and travel to other worlds, no matter how far away or no matter in which parallel universe.

A freshman at Welldark, Karitas aims to enjoy his university life to the fullest. Although he certainly is looking forwards to studying topics he is passionate about, what he cares most for is the building of his Anomalia - a soulbonded unit of several people that know the Dimensional Truth. It just so happens that this world-travelling ability tends to awaken in the women of the cosmos a lot more commonly then men. Harem-building hijinks ensue.

This story is written in the First-Person POV."

Just as a warning It is of the slow-burn romance variety and it's a bit of a "slice of life" book.
The second book will have a faster pace and more smutty scenes in it compared to the first one.
If you liked the first one you're welcome to contact me to beta read the second one which will be released on Literotica in chapters once it's done.
General feedback is also greatly appreciated.
Welldark B1 Ch.01