Seeking feedback on draft story (Amy's curse) not yet published. Themes are mind control & free use.

[Emma_McKay]

Hello all,

Thanks for reading! I am seeking someone who is willing to provide feedback on a story I have written but not yet published. I have just finished writing part 2 and am starting on part 3 soon. But really, its Part 1 i am emailing about.

The story is about an 18 year old girl who gets cursed by an old witch. The curse results in her being unable to resist the sexual advances of old men. It has themes of mind control, free use, and cnc. Seeking help with/ feedback on editing and story concept. PM if you can help!

Thanks in advance!!!!
Emma

 

[TheWritingGroup]

There's a forum for editors, and your control panel has a tab for "Editors" where you can request help.

-Rocco

 

[Emma_McKay]

Oh gosh! I just looked at the Editors tab! there are so many. How would I know who to ask!?

 

[ChuckWolf]

In any case, sounds like a hot story idea!

 

[ElectricBlue]

Hello all,

Thanks for reading! I am seeking someone who is willing to provide feedback on a story I have written but not yet published. I have just finished writing part 2 and am starting on part 3 soon. But really, its Part 1 i am emailing about.

The story is about an 18 year old girl who gets cursed by an old witch. The curse results in her being unable to resist the sexual advances of old men. It has themes of mind control, free use, and cnc. Seeking help with/ feedback on editing and story concept. PM if you can help!

Thanks in advance!!!!
Emma

You're after a beta reader more than an editor, I think.

Even so, you should start a thread in the Editors Forum. This Feedback Forum is to seek commentary on a story once it's been published.

 

[PennyThompson]

Oh gosh! I just looked at the Editors tab! there are so many. How would I know who to ask!?

The Editors tab is organized in order of how recently a volunteer editor "checked in" with the list, that's what the "Updated" date next to each editor means. If someone hasn't checked in within the last month or so, they're probably not likely to respond to editing requests.

You can also filter by each editor's preferred story categories! So if you filter by Mind Control or other relevant categories and then look at editors who have been active within the last month, the list will be a lot smaller.

Then read their bios to see if they feel compatible, and send them a message! Last time I used the Editors tab, I messaged five editors and heard back from one of them, so I recommend casting a wide net!

 

[alohadave]

The Editors tab is organized in order of how recently a volunteer editor "checked in" with the list

It's by how recently the Biography in the user profile is updated. There is no checking in involved.

 

[PennyThompson]

It's by how recently the Biography in the user profile is updated. There is no checking in involved.

Ahh ok, that's good to know! I still figure that the more recently they've updated their profile, the more responsive they're likely to be... but maybe that means I missed out on the greatest editor ever who just hasn't updated their profile in years!