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Darkniciad said:
Looking forward to reading both Ch. 20 and the Laresa/Dark Beast saga. Of The People was rather impressive as it was.
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Looking forward to reading both Ch. 20 and the Laresa/Dark Beast saga. Of The People was rather impressive as it was.
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Hey, DL, announce when your chapters come out, some of us are scatter-brained! *laugh*
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=291691
RVCd, links updated.
Ch. 20 is in the queue as of a few minutes after midnight.
Dark Beast's tale ("The Beast Within" Cover ) is nearly half done, so I'll likely have it finished in time to submit on the 17th, that way there will be a Laresa story out in the week where we have a gap in the schedule.
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=291691
RVCd, links updated.
Ch. 20 is in the queue as of a few minutes after midnight.
Dark Beast's tale ("The Beast Within" Cover ) is nearly half done, so I'll likely have it finished in time to submit on the 17th, that way there will be a Laresa story out in the week where we have a gap in the schedule.
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Chapter 19!
Please double check your chapter numbers when submitting your story. Thanks - Red.
Laresa's World Ch. 19: Seymour - deathlynx
Ch. 20 - Dakinciad - submit by Jan. 10-17
Ch. 21 - RedHairedandFriendly - submit by Jan. 24
Ch. 22 - Black Tulip - submit by Jan. 31
Ch. 23 - deathlynx - submit by Feb. 7
Ch. 24 - Dakinciad - submit by Feb. 14
Ch. 25 - RedHairedandFriendly - submit by Feb. 21
Link to Cheat Sheet
** PLEASE remember. . . AS this story progress the chapters you are slotted for may not happen. The end of the story may be told before your chapter comes up. Also keep in mind that now that we've established a plot for our Laresa it may be a good idea to start linking a few of these chapters one after another. Not all mind you just some. . .eventually the story will come to an end, but it isn't ready quite yet. We'll see what happens. Thanks again for all of your involvements.
Please double check your chapter numbers when submitting your story. Thanks - Red.
Laresa's World Ch. 19: Seymour - deathlynx
Ch. 20 - Dakinciad - submit by Jan. 10-17
Ch. 21 - RedHairedandFriendly - submit by Jan. 24
Ch. 22 - Black Tulip - submit by Jan. 31
Ch. 23 - deathlynx - submit by Feb. 7
Ch. 24 - Dakinciad - submit by Feb. 14
Ch. 25 - RedHairedandFriendly - submit by Feb. 21
Link to Cheat Sheet
** PLEASE remember. . . AS this story progress the chapters you are slotted for may not happen. The end of the story may be told before your chapter comes up. Also keep in mind that now that we've established a plot for our Laresa it may be a good idea to start linking a few of these chapters one after another. Not all mind you just some. . .eventually the story will come to an end, but it isn't ready quite yet. We'll see what happens. Thanks again for all of your involvements.
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It is an excellent chapter. 
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deathlynx said:
Not entirely sure where all the sexual tension came from in that one...It just sort of appeared on the page...My muse has been very odd recently...
Yeah, mine gets that way too sometimes. You're very welcome.
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Yeah!!!
Please double check your chapter numbers when submitting your story. Thanks - Red.
Laresa's World Ch. 20 - Dakinciad - approved Jan. 15
Ch. 21 - RedHairedandFriendly - submit by Jan. 24
Ch. 22 - Black Tulip - submit by Jan. 31
Ch. 23 - deathlynx - submit by Feb. 7
Ch. 24 - Dakinciad - submit by Feb. 14
Ch. 25 - RedHairedandFriendly - submit by Feb. 21
Link to Cheat Sheet
** PLEASE remember. . . AS this story progress the chapters you are slotted for may not happen. The end of the story may be told before your chapter comes up. Also keep in mind that now that we've established a plot for our Laresa it may be a good idea to start linking a few of these chapters one after another. Not all mind you just some. . .eventually the story will come to an end, but it isn't ready quite yet. We'll see what happens. Thanks again for all of your involvements.
Please double check your chapter numbers when submitting your story. Thanks - Red.
Laresa's World Ch. 20 - Dakinciad - approved Jan. 15
Ch. 21 - RedHairedandFriendly - submit by Jan. 24
Ch. 22 - Black Tulip - submit by Jan. 31
Ch. 23 - deathlynx - submit by Feb. 7
Ch. 24 - Dakinciad - submit by Feb. 14
Ch. 25 - RedHairedandFriendly - submit by Feb. 21
Link to Cheat Sheet
** PLEASE remember. . . AS this story progress the chapters you are slotted for may not happen. The end of the story may be told before your chapter comes up. Also keep in mind that now that we've established a plot for our Laresa it may be a good idea to start linking a few of these chapters one after another. Not all mind you just some. . .eventually the story will come to an end, but it isn't ready quite yet. We'll see what happens. Thanks again for all of your involvements.
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For Dark - - Hip! Hip! Hooray!!!
Congratulations to our Dark for his Reader's Choice Nomination for October.
Laresa's World Ch. 10: James!!!!!!!!
Congratulations to our Dark for his Reader's Choice Nomination for October. Laresa's World Ch. 10: James!!!!!!!!
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Wow! That is cool.
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Thankyes
In the final scene of the follow-up to "Of the People" now, so it should be ready to go in the queue within a couple of days.
In the final scene of the follow-up to "Of the People" now, so it should be ready to go in the queue within a couple of days.
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Here I am double posting again 
"The Beast Within" went in the queue here last night ( and is up at the other place ) The events are building that lead to the emotional place Laresa was in for Ch. 16 with this one... the next one will be the hammer blow.
The next will likely only post here, as it isn't going to be a happy tale in any way, shape or form - and it really needs Ch. 16 available on the same site for such a dark tale to have any real reason to be.
So are we looking at the key items, found by a Society member, as the focus for Laresa's eventual freedom in the final chapter? If so, we'll probably want to start getting at least a little bit of a reference to the Society in the bulk of the chapters from here on out.
I'll be happy to ramble on about the structure and nature of the Society for anyone who wants to put tidbits in their story, and I'm sure DL would be glad to do the same. Not to mention, DL and I are pretty quick on adaptation. Even if something veers a little bit, we can usually meld it in and make it work.
A few general points that could be used as references for tidbits:
The first rule is the genies are never to be used ( Ch. 20 gives a vague opening for dissent on the first rule... possible plot device )
The Society is generally divided into three camps. Those who want to utilize the genies once they have them, those who want to free them, and those who simply want to get them out of circulation. They simply agreed to focus on getting all the artifacts back in their possession now.
The Society makes use of both technology and magic in their work. I've had them using parabolic microphones, gps, and laptops, as well as the magical "finder's stone". The way things have been working, almost all of their magic has been provided by Laresa, unbeknownst to her, but knownst to us.
Finder's Stones are items that can track great magic. Their range is limited, but once an artifact or a genie is in range, they can track with pinpoint accuracy. DL dreamed them up, and we've both been making use of them in our chapters. They're a mainstay of all Society members.
The Society also has a larger version, which can track powerful magic all over the globe within their headquarters. DL reveals its creation in 19, and I utilize it a little in 20. This one's wide range is offset by its limited sensitivity. It can only sense Djinn actually outside their artifact. The artifacts themselves are more or less invisible to this item's tracking ability. A Djinn outside their home can be located, but it is much more effective if the genie uses their powers.
The containment chamber is a magically shielded room ( again its creation is shown in Ch. 19, and I showed it in Ch. 15 ) within the Society headquarters that houses all the artifacts they have located. It isn't infallible, but unless a specific Djinn housed within is summoned, the guardian can usually strengthen the barriers well enough to prevent an artifact from leaving.
The Society is led by a council of elders, your old-fashioned robed wise men. The three camps arise from this ( as yet un-numbered ) council's factions.
All members can shield their thoughts from Djinn to varying degrees. Those who master the technique can become all but invisible to a Djinn trying to locate them by their thoughts and feelings. Likewise, one who has mastered the technique can hide their thoughts from a genie completely.
Though the Society still isn't large, they have members spaced throughout the world, ready to move on a moment's notice. Members usually work in teams of two ( in modern times ) but sometimes may work alone, or in larger groups.
We more or less have to assume they have great wealth at their disposal to facilitate this and the purchase of their equipment. Oil profits and wise investment would account for this easily enough.
Any thoughts for fleshing the Society out more are most welcome. A fresh perspective is often a nice jumping point for new ideas DL and I have a general idea of the size and sophistication of the Society from its creation to modern times, so we can point you in the right direction to write tidbits if you'd like to in your chapters.
"The Beast Within" went in the queue here last night ( and is up at the other place ) The events are building that lead to the emotional place Laresa was in for Ch. 16 with this one... the next one will be the hammer blow.
The next will likely only post here, as it isn't going to be a happy tale in any way, shape or form - and it really needs Ch. 16 available on the same site for such a dark tale to have any real reason to be.
So are we looking at the key items, found by a Society member, as the focus for Laresa's eventual freedom in the final chapter? If so, we'll probably want to start getting at least a little bit of a reference to the Society in the bulk of the chapters from here on out.
I'll be happy to ramble on about the structure and nature of the Society for anyone who wants to put tidbits in their story, and I'm sure DL would be glad to do the same. Not to mention, DL and I are pretty quick on adaptation. Even if something veers a little bit, we can usually meld it in and make it work.
A few general points that could be used as references for tidbits:
The first rule is the genies are never to be used ( Ch. 20 gives a vague opening for dissent on the first rule... possible plot device )
The Society is generally divided into three camps. Those who want to utilize the genies once they have them, those who want to free them, and those who simply want to get them out of circulation. They simply agreed to focus on getting all the artifacts back in their possession now.
The Society makes use of both technology and magic in their work. I've had them using parabolic microphones, gps, and laptops, as well as the magical "finder's stone". The way things have been working, almost all of their magic has been provided by Laresa, unbeknownst to her, but knownst to us.
Finder's Stones are items that can track great magic. Their range is limited, but once an artifact or a genie is in range, they can track with pinpoint accuracy. DL dreamed them up, and we've both been making use of them in our chapters. They're a mainstay of all Society members.
The Society also has a larger version, which can track powerful magic all over the globe within their headquarters. DL reveals its creation in 19, and I utilize it a little in 20. This one's wide range is offset by its limited sensitivity. It can only sense Djinn actually outside their artifact. The artifacts themselves are more or less invisible to this item's tracking ability. A Djinn outside their home can be located, but it is much more effective if the genie uses their powers.
The containment chamber is a magically shielded room ( again its creation is shown in Ch. 19, and I showed it in Ch. 15 ) within the Society headquarters that houses all the artifacts they have located. It isn't infallible, but unless a specific Djinn housed within is summoned, the guardian can usually strengthen the barriers well enough to prevent an artifact from leaving.
The Society is led by a council of elders, your old-fashioned robed wise men. The three camps arise from this ( as yet un-numbered ) council's factions.
All members can shield their thoughts from Djinn to varying degrees. Those who master the technique can become all but invisible to a Djinn trying to locate them by their thoughts and feelings. Likewise, one who has mastered the technique can hide their thoughts from a genie completely.
Though the Society still isn't large, they have members spaced throughout the world, ready to move on a moment's notice. Members usually work in teams of two ( in modern times ) but sometimes may work alone, or in larger groups.
We more or less have to assume they have great wealth at their disposal to facilitate this and the purchase of their equipment. Oil profits and wise investment would account for this easily enough.
Any thoughts for fleshing the Society out more are most welcome. A fresh perspective is often a nice jumping point for new ideas
DL and I have a general idea of the size and sophistication of the Society from its creation to modern times, so we can point you in the right direction to write tidbits if you'd like to in your chapters.
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Great job guys! I am glad to see a society "cheat sheet." I've been wanting one, because I too agree that they need some kind of mention. If you could please make one post with all your info, and I can link it on the cheat sheet.
Anyone wanting to voice opinions on her freedom?
Personally, I am drawn to her going back to some of the characters in her story.
Perhaps the old man in the sea, in ch. 01, the young lover she had in ch.03 by Tersenc.
I see Dark's evil character Aaron involved, so this could mean a few things. 1. He (dark) writes the final chapter. 2. He trusts someone to write about Aaron. 3. He and another writer co-write together a story.
These are just ideas, not the set scene. Please chime in on where you see Laresa.
Thanks.
Anyone wanting to voice opinions on her freedom?
Personally, I am drawn to her going back to some of the characters in her story.
Perhaps the old man in the sea, in ch. 01, the young lover she had in ch.03 by Tersenc.
I see Dark's evil character Aaron involved, so this could mean a few things. 1. He (dark) writes the final chapter. 2. He trusts someone to write about Aaron. 3. He and another writer co-write together a story.
These are just ideas, not the set scene. Please chime in on where you see Laresa.
Thanks.
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The old sea-dog may be a little difficult to pull off, because we have in print where he dies while still possessing her ring. We get into paradox territory there, because you can't really fit her in anywhere without having her in proximity with her previous self. It could be fit in as a visit before he acquired the ring - that would work. It could also be a Christmas Carol sort of "They can neither see you, nor hear you Ebeneezer" type of thing. That would eliminate paradox no matter where she went.
I do like the idea of revisiting previous Masters. I actually had something somewhat similar floating around in my head for my next chapter, a look back at what she's learned in her centuries of service. If it fully congealed, I was going to ask if I could borrow Horace *laugh* I really liked his character, and I think he needs an encore.
Aaron wouldn't really be that difficult to write - he's very elemental. He's arrogant, ruthless, cruel, power-hungry... and becoming more than a little insane as of the end of Ch. 20. He's felt all his life that the Society failed to recognize his greatness, and thus he's rebelling against everything they stand for. Now that he's been out in the world a bit, bouncing through time, he's pretty much acquired the same opinion of all humanity - and of Djinn. Naturally, his hatred is focused on Laresa now, as she's the one who keeps thwarting him.
We could work together a plotline toward the ending, and then DL and I could flesh out an outline for the Society/Aaron parts of it, letting everybody put their own voice/spin to the outline in their chapter. It could be something as little as a tag-on to the end of a chapter, mentioning what's going on with the Society and Aaron to keep continuity in all chapters building toward a conclusion.
I'll put together something tonight, or jump in and add my thoughts to anything that pops up here while I'm at work.
I do like the idea of revisiting previous Masters. I actually had something somewhat similar floating around in my head for my next chapter, a look back at what she's learned in her centuries of service. If it fully congealed, I was going to ask if I could borrow Horace *laugh* I really liked his character, and I think he needs an encore.
Aaron wouldn't really be that difficult to write - he's very elemental. He's arrogant, ruthless, cruel, power-hungry... and becoming more than a little insane as of the end of Ch. 20. He's felt all his life that the Society failed to recognize his greatness, and thus he's rebelling against everything they stand for. Now that he's been out in the world a bit, bouncing through time, he's pretty much acquired the same opinion of all humanity - and of Djinn. Naturally, his hatred is focused on Laresa now, as she's the one who keeps thwarting him.
We could work together a plotline toward the ending, and then DL and I could flesh out an outline for the Society/Aaron parts of it, letting everybody put their own voice/spin to the outline in their chapter. It could be something as little as a tag-on to the end of a chapter, mentioning what's going on with the Society and Aaron to keep continuity in all chapters building toward a conclusion.
I'll put together something tonight, or jump in and add my thoughts to anything that pops up here while I'm at work.
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I may just leave the old man be. I was planning on Horace coming back, but wasn't sure when. If you want to use him feel free.
As much fun as it may be to use more genies in the stories, I would hate to see that pattern, otherwise it doesn't seem the genies are very rare. Right now we've had (if my counting is right) 5 genies? and 4 of them were pretty close together in chapters. . .right?
The only problem with using Aaron in too many stories is we make each chapter dependent on the other. Right now we are still able to have them stand alone with little links in with the society or with a small mention to a previous chapter.
I'll have to think more on this, because I am not seeing the ending yet in my mind. I know it is coming, but I am just not sure what it will be, or what our Laresa would want or more ideal, where she would want to go in time.
As much fun as it may be to use more genies in the stories, I would hate to see that pattern, otherwise it doesn't seem the genies are very rare. Right now we've had (if my counting is right) 5 genies? and 4 of them were pretty close together in chapters. . .right?
The only problem with using Aaron in too many stories is we make each chapter dependent on the other. Right now we are still able to have them stand alone with little links in with the society or with a small mention to a previous chapter.
I'll have to think more on this, because I am not seeing the ending yet in my mind. I know it is coming, but I am just not sure what it will be, or what our Laresa would want or more ideal, where she would want to go in time.
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RedHairedandFriendly said:
I count four genies? Laresa = ring, Horace = brooch and Mirza (once without a name) = bracelet, and one without a name = bracelet too.
I like the suggestion of a little something at the end of each chapter about the Society and Aaron.
I'll read the last chapter and Off the People this weekend. Been too busy to keep up. Sorry.
I'm still in the middle of writing Hanan's Story. We will have to decide where Laresa wants to go when she can get freedom. I'd say she would pick one of the Masters she truly loved if that's possible.
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Yep, four, and Laresa would be five, but Nathifa is a free one now.Black Tulip said:I count four genies? Laresa = ring, Horace = brooch and Mirza (once without a name) = bracelet, and one without a name = bracelet too.
I like the suggestion of a little something at the end of each chapter about the Society and Aaron.
I'll read the last chapter and Off the People this weekend. Been too busy to keep up. Sorry.
We will have to decide where Laresa wants to go when she can get freedom. I'd say she would pick one of the Masters she truly loved if that's possible.
I know we have/had: Horace (Ch. 9 ) - Medallion, Nathifa (Ch. 15) FREE - bracelet, Mirza (Ch. 18) - bracelet, Karida (Ch. 20) - ???
Dark & death - - When/if you make up a cheat sheet on the society can you please list the genies as well as their "homes."
Black Tulip - I look forward to that story.
I thought it was interesting that our chapters had genies in them, but if you notice the names... mine was Hanna and your Hanan. The names so close together to be meant good minds think alike!
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Hi Red,
You're right. I got mixed up about the genies and their homes.
I realized Hanna and Hanan were rather close only after I posted my story.
Otherwise I would have picked another name.
But I know some women by the name of Hanan and I like them, so that's why the name popped up I guess.
You're right. I got mixed up about the genies and their homes.
I realized Hanna and Hanan were rather close only after I posted my story.
Otherwise I would have picked another name.
But I know some women by the name of Hanan and I like them, so that's why the name popped up I guess.
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Black Tulip said:Hi Red,
You're right. I got mixed up about the genies and their homes.
I realized Hanna and Hanan were rather close only after I posted my story.
Otherwise I would have picked another name.
But I know some women by the name of Hanan and I like them, so that's why the name popped up I guess.
I thought it was neat.
I like the name too, it is more old world than it is now adays.
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Well, I think Dark's post above is about everything we have as a cheat sheet...
As for wrapping things up, dunno really...it might be nice to combine some of the scattered plot points (Aarron, society, Horace) in the final chapter...I think it might be especially fitting if Horace witnesses her release...Possibly even learns that her way with masters has led her to that point more quickly than he?
As for wrapping things up, dunno really...it might be nice to combine some of the scattered plot points (Aarron, society, Horace) in the final chapter...I think it might be especially fitting if Horace witnesses her release...Possibly even learns that her way with masters has led her to that point more quickly than he?
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Please double check your chapter numbers when submitting your story. Thanks - Red.
Laresa's World Ch. 20 - Dakinciad - approved Jan. 15
Ch. 21 - RedHairedandFriendly - submit by Jan. 24
Ch. 22 - Black Tulip - submit by Jan. 31
Ch. 23 - deathlynx - submit by Feb. 7
Ch. 24 - Dakinciad - submit by Feb. 14
Ch. 25 - RedHairedandFriendly - submit by Feb. 21
Link to Cheat Sheet
Link to Society Sheet Sheet
** PLEASE remember. . . AS this story progress the chapters you are slotted for may not happen. The end of the story may be told before your chapter comes up. Also keep in mind that now that we've established a plot for our Laresa it may be a good idea to start linking a few of these chapters one after another. Not all mind you just some. . .eventually the story will come to an end, but it isn't ready quite yet. We'll see what happens. Thanks again for all of your involvements.
Laresa's World Ch. 20 - Dakinciad - approved Jan. 15
Ch. 21 - RedHairedandFriendly - submit by Jan. 24
Ch. 22 - Black Tulip - submit by Jan. 31
Ch. 23 - deathlynx - submit by Feb. 7
Ch. 24 - Dakinciad - submit by Feb. 14
Ch. 25 - RedHairedandFriendly - submit by Feb. 21
Link to Cheat Sheet
Link to Society Sheet Sheet
** PLEASE remember. . . AS this story progress the chapters you are slotted for may not happen. The end of the story may be told before your chapter comes up. Also keep in mind that now that we've established a plot for our Laresa it may be a good idea to start linking a few of these chapters one after another. Not all mind you just some. . .eventually the story will come to an end, but it isn't ready quite yet. We'll see what happens. Thanks again for all of your involvements.
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deathlynx said:
I've included that page in the Post that has the schedule. Anytime Dark makes changes, as long as it is on that page, we'll alwyas be updated.
I like the idea of Aaron and Horace being in the final chapter. ( chuckles-- this makes me want to keep going and free Horace. LOL. . .He's a messed up genie, but there was something about him that was still likeable.
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I was thinking the same thing Red. I had to give Aaron another genie to keep him around, but I thought we should probably back away from that as well. At some point, Aaron is going to go searching for a genie powerful enough to get past Laresa... and Horace is the perfect choice for that. He's ancient, powerful, and we already know him
Karida's home was an earring. It's mentioned in there somewhere, but otherwise the list is good. I'll add that to the previous Society post here in a bit.
Red and I both get the impression that Horace doesn't want to be freed. He likes his power, and he's sneaky enough to manipulate his masters most times so that he has a pretty good life. I also get the feeling that Horace may even know the means to free several genies... perhaps he even knows about the key items we've been mentioning.
I purposely ended Ch. 20 with the "wish you luck" thing so that we could drop Aaron out of the picture for a while, but leave the means for him to find her again eventually. Lady Luck is fickle, after all. Laresa's luck will eventually run out, and that's when we spring Aaron on her again... probably for the final confrontation. So we don't have to worry much about mentioning Aaron. In fact, it would probably be best if he just pops back up unexpectedly.
We can use the Society as the tie to bind the chapters building toward an ending together, no need to worry about Aaron other than as a footnote for why the Society is changing direction slightly and accellerating some efforts.
BT, be sure to let me know when the ending ( or chapters thereof ) to your last chapter is posted here in the thread, so I can add it to the Laresa's World page on my website. I'm making sure everything Laresa ( and all the award nominations the stories have picked up ) are updated on there.
So, you feel like we're going to surpass the Ch. 25 mark Red? If so, I'll gear up for something a little more lighthearted, with some Society asides for my next chapter. I actually have an idea in modern times that I've thought about before that I want to use as a little Master transition before the "named" Master for my next chapter ( as yet simmering in my brain with about fifty-million other things *laugh* ) I'm sure one of the movies my son watches fifty-million times will inspire something soon. With the exception of the first one, the other three official chain chapters have been inspired by either Disney or Muppet movies
I'll get back later tonight, I need to get this cross-eyed cupid story out of my head and onto "paper" before it drives me nuts screaming to be written, and so I can get it in for the contest fairly early.
Karida's home was an earring. It's mentioned in there somewhere, but otherwise the list is good. I'll add that to the previous Society post here in a bit.
Red and I both get the impression that Horace doesn't want to be freed. He likes his power, and he's sneaky enough to manipulate his masters most times so that he has a pretty good life. I also get the feeling that Horace may even know the means to free several genies... perhaps he even knows about the key items we've been mentioning.
I purposely ended Ch. 20 with the "wish you luck" thing so that we could drop Aaron out of the picture for a while, but leave the means for him to find her again eventually. Lady Luck is fickle, after all. Laresa's luck will eventually run out, and that's when we spring Aaron on her again... probably for the final confrontation. So we don't have to worry much about mentioning Aaron. In fact, it would probably be best if he just pops back up unexpectedly.
We can use the Society as the tie to bind the chapters building toward an ending together, no need to worry about Aaron other than as a footnote for why the Society is changing direction slightly and accellerating some efforts.
BT, be sure to let me know when the ending ( or chapters thereof ) to your last chapter is posted here in the thread, so I can add it to the Laresa's World page on my website. I'm making sure everything Laresa ( and all the award nominations the stories have picked up ) are updated on there.
So, you feel like we're going to surpass the Ch. 25 mark Red? If so, I'll gear up for something a little more lighthearted, with some Society asides for my next chapter. I actually have an idea in modern times that I've thought about before that I want to use as a little Master transition before the "named" Master for my next chapter ( as yet simmering in my brain with about fifty-million other things *laugh* ) I'm sure one of the movies my son watches fifty-million times will inspire something soon. With the exception of the first one, the other three official chain chapters have been inspired by either Disney or Muppet movies
I'll get back later tonight, I need to get this cross-eyed cupid story out of my head and onto "paper" before it drives me nuts screaming to be written, and so I can get it in for the contest fairly early.
