Sci-Fi/Fantasy Chain Story Idea

[Darkniciad]

I confirmed a page or two ago as well Already outlining it.

Whenever anyone ahead of me has theirs done, drop me a line. I want to make sure I'm building on things ahead of me in the chain.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

I confirmed a page or two ago as well Already outlining it.

Whenever anyone ahead of me has theirs done, drop me a line. I want to make sure I'm building on things ahead of me in the chain.

I am almost done with mine. The muse struck and I ran with it. lol.

 

[deathlynx]

I fixed that. Oops. . . *hands you the whip* . . . be gentle.

*Tests the whip a few times with much proficiency then hands it of to Dark*
Sorry, I'm more of a soft-sub than a dom...
Dark, I have a couple ideas, one involving the society and different one which would involve a "happily ever after" immediately before mine...

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

*Tests the whip a few times with much proficiency then hands it of to Dark*
Sorry, I'm more of a soft-sub than a dom...
Dark, I have a couple ideas, one involving the society and different one which would involve a "happily ever after" immediately before mine...

*chuckles. . .*

That's okay. . .I'll wait till I get to whip you then.

 

[deathlynx]

*chuckles. . .*
That's okay. . .I'll wait till I get to whip you then.

Don't tell me that or else I'll end up missing my next deadline on purpose!

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Don't tell me that or else I'll end up missing my next deadline on purpose!

*wicked evil laugh*

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

My dad is in the hospital. . .with a fibulating heart. ( I had to look that up ) They have him stable, but haven't decided if they are going to keep him overnight. As soon as I know how he is doing, I'll finish up my chapter. I am almost done, just gotta write the hot steamy sex. . .and right now I'm not in the right mood for hot steamy sex. I should know more later tonight and as soon as I do I can put my worry behind me. ( I hope )

 

[deathlynx]

My dad is in the hospital. . .with a fibulating heart. ( I had to look that up ) They have him stable, but haven't decided if they are going to keep him overnight. As soon as I know how he is doing, I'll finish up my chapter. I am almost done, just gotta write the hot steamy sex. . .and right now I'm not in the right mood for hot steamy sex. I should know more later tonight and as soon as I do I can put my worry behind me. ( I hope )

Take whatever time you need! Real life always comes first...You know that...

Strength to you and hope all goes well with your father...

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Take whatever time you need! Real life always comes first...You know that...

Strength to you and hope all goes well with your father...

He is home resting. They gave him a couple different medications and he has to see a cardiologist. I guess he had all this "fluttering" in his chest, but never told mom until it got worse today.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

He is home resting. They gave him a couple different medications and he has to see a cardiologist. I guess he had all this "fluttering" in his chest, but never told mom until it got worse today.

Hugs, sweetie. I just hope that everything continues to improve for you and your father. Don't worry too much about the schedule. Family comes first.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Hugs, sweetie. I just hope that everything continues to improve for you and your father. Don't worry too much about the schedule. Family comes first.

Thank you. I appreciate the kind thoughts. *hugs*

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Chapter 17 has been submitted.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Thank you. I appreciate the kind thoughts. *hugs*

You're very welcome, hon. Hugs.

 

[Black Tulip]

Sorry to read about your father, Red.

Seems my browser kicked out all the cookies.
I'm missing all kinds of messages.

Chapter 18 is almost done.
Inspiration came along right with the start of winter break.

Two questions:

• Can someone take a look at the grammar and stuff, say the 27th?
  
• I stumbled into the region the genie was originally created; my story is happening in Tuareg country (Sahara desert mountains). Is that a problem? I can leave the reference to her creation out.

Have a Merry Christmas.

 

[deathlynx]

Can someone take a look at the grammar and stuff, say the 27th?

I'd offer but my gramar is horrid...I do better with continuity and flow...

I stumbled into the region the genie was originally created; my story is happening in Tuareg country (Sahara desert mountains). Is that a problem? I can leave the reference to her creation out.

I have no problem with this...Kind of a cool tie in if you ask me...

 

[Darkniciad]

I agree with Deathlynx, sounds fine to me. I can give this one a look-see too BT. I'm hardly an English major, but I get by.

Chapter 15 is finally listed as chapter fifteen. The powers that be got it changed at last.

Anyone else noticing a new, curious troll pattern? Somebody is going through one-bombing my stuff that isn't on the high end of the toplist. I've got a systematic run from top to bottom, hitting everything from 4.9 down with ones, skipping anything higher.

The trolls, with their tiny minds, must have decided that trying to destroy things that aren't on the first couple pages of toplists may sneak by, where all their hard work bombing high rated stories has just vanished in sweeps. Brain damaged little monkeys...

My conclusion to chapter 15 is almost done, all the stuff that I was going to include in the chain chapter, but dropped because of length.

The shaman Dark Beast that Severus mentioned in his story is taking shape in my head too, so I may end up writing that story as well, continuing to fill the gaps between 15 and 16. I may even jump on the Nazis to complete the transition.

I'm getting into chapter 21 as well. It's going to have a lot of Society focus in it, much like 15.

I have a few paragraphs of the follow-up to Ch. 10 written, on top of all that. It will get finished, eventually.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

I agree with Deathlynx, sounds fine to me. I can give this one a look-see too BT. I'm hardly an English major, but I get by.

Chapter 15 is finally listed as chapter fifteen. The powers that be got it changed at last.

Anyone else noticing a new, curious troll pattern? Somebody is going through one-bombing my stuff that isn't on the high end of the toplist. I've got a systematic run from top to bottom, hitting everything from 4.9 down with ones, skipping anything higher.

The trolls, with their tiny minds, must have decided that trying to destroy things that aren't on the first couple pages of toplists may sneak by, where all their hard work bombing high rated stories has just vanished in sweeps. Brain damaged little monkeys...

My conclusion to chapter 15 is almost done, all the stuff that I was going to include in the chain chapter, but dropped because of length.

The shaman Dark Beast that Severus mentioned in his story is taking shape in my head too, so I may end up writing that story as well, continuing to fill the gaps between 15 and 16. I may even jump on the Nazis to complete the transition.

I'm getting into chapter 21 as well. It's going to have a lot of Society focus in it, much like 15.

I have a few paragraphs of the follow-up to Ch. 10 written, on top of all that. It will get finished, eventually.

Glad to hear that you'll use Dark Beast and his Arapaho village. Maybe even those nasty Nazis...it's flattering to see my ideas inspire others. Oh, and thanks for the comments.

 

[Black Tulip]

Sev, I did read and vote, but left no comment on your chapter, due to lack of time.

I do think you did an excellent job and I read it with pleasure.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Sev, I did read and vote, but left no comment on your chapter, due to lack of time.

I do think you did an excellent job and I read it with pleasure.

Thank you. That's cool. I know how that is.

 

[Darkniciad]

Just finished "Of the People" It will be after the first of the year before it goes live... maybe earlier at the other place, but I doubt it. Roust already has about 120k of that LW story in his queue to edit once I put him back to the grindstone after Christmas *laugh*

Just have to see where my muse takes me next. I have several things started, and I'll probably just bounce around opening them, until one of them strikes me. Half of them are Laresa stories.

I'll post here when "Of the People" goes live. I'm going to put it in Sci-Fi/Fantasy, since it's outside the core chain chapters.

 

[Darkniciad]

Pardon the double post. Had a major inspirational flash at work today, and chapter 21 is well under way.

I should have this one done a week or two before my scheduled deadline

Feels good after having to drag the last one out tooth and nail through my lack of motivation

 

[Black Tulip]

...
I agree with Deathlynx, sounds fine to me. I can give this one a look-see too BT. I'm hardly an English major, but I get by.
...

Thanks, I'll take you up on that offer later today.
So glad your day starts at least 6 hours later than mine.

I thought to finish my chapter last night, when all of a sudden my characters got it into their heads to develop all kinds of subplots.

I'll wrap this one up now, and like some of you have done - I'll write a different story using the mistress for a main character.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Chapter 17 is out!!!

Please double check your chapter numbers when submitting your story. Thanks - Red.


Laresa's World Ch. 17: Bruno - RedHairedandFriendly - Approved Dec. 27
Ch. 18 - Black Tulip - submit by December 27 - confirmed
Ch. 19 - deathlynx - submit by January 3rd - confirmed.
Ch. 20 - Tseranc - submit by January 10th - confirmed



Please confirm your involvement.

Ch. 21 - Dakinciad - submit by Jan. 17
Ch. 22 - RedHairedandFriendly - submit by Jan. 24
Ch. 23 - Black Tulip - submit by Jan. 31
Ch. 24 - deathlynx - submit by Feb. 7
Ch. 25 - Tseranc - submit by Feb. 14

Link to Cheat Sheet

** PLEASE remember. . . AS this story progress the chapters you are slotted for may not happen. The end of the story may be told before your chapter comes up. Also keep in mind that now that we've established a plot for our Laresa it may be a good idea to start linking a few of these chapters one after another. Not all mind you just some. . .eventually the story will come to an end, but it isn't ready quite yet. We'll see what happens. Thanks again for all of your involvements.

 

[Black Tulip]

Chapter 18 has been mailed to Dark.
Anybody else up for a quick scan to see if it's ok?

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Chapter 18 has been mailed to Dark.
Anybody else up for a quick scan to see if it's ok?

I'll be happy to read it if you'd like.