Rejected Story

[PrincessErin]

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[Elenia26]

So I normaly prefer writing soft romantic sweet stories however my attempt at writing nonconsent/reluctance isn't working. My story was rejected for too much violence.
I was wondering if someone could read my story and make suggestions as to what to remove or change.
The story is about 5000 words. My email is princesserin@live.ca if someone wants me to send them the story that way.

Thanks in advance.

Erin

Did you already get a response? If not, I'll e-mail you and I'll read it. I'm a vol editor on these boards anyway.

 

[cutebrowngirl]

How does a nonconsent/reluctance story get rejected for too much violence? I have read some pretty violent ones.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

How does a nonconsent/reluctance story get rejected for too much violence? I have read some pretty violent ones.

Depends if the Literotica censor's piles are playing up?

 

[cutebrowngirl]

Is it weird that I prefer a more violent nonconsent/reluctance story? Too many of those stories read like erotic couplings to me. I am not sure if this is the rule, but I don't think I have ever read a story where the "rapee" doesn't consent and start participating halfway through. too many are way tame.
On the other hand, there have been a few pretty rough ones. Not a lot, but I have read some with punching and possible broken noses! Another, I am guessing, was trying to be a cautionary tale, and the protagonist had her own cellphone and keys shoved into her. The other end of the extreme.

 

[PrincessErin]

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[Elenia26]

I like them when the girl starts liking it halfway through. I don't really want to read rape, just non-consent.