Poor Lasher

Re: Perhaps this can shed some light on the low ratings.

Kitten Eyes said:
Ironically enough, Softly is the featured writer in this month's newsletter. When ask what suggestions she has for other authors, she points out proper grammar and spelling are important. An example -

"Few people came to the table of being an author with less basic writing skills, then I did." - Softly

Hmmmm, then should be than and there should be no comma. Otherwise, that sentence states there were not many writers with poor skills until she arrived.


Maybe she should practice what she preaches.

"...the author's table" (not 'the table of being an author') and "fewer basic writing skills" (not 'less').

Ditto. Very distracting.
 
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