Please tell me whatchya think

[windstormy]

Have 1st chapter of a book I had started about a year back. http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=191426 it's in the gaymale sec. Hope all who read it like it. let me know whatchya think. This is the first time I've let anyone read my stuff. I hope I'm doin' this right. lol

 

[msboy8]

Hi,
Good first story, you have a depth and finess that takes years to develope. Need to use an editor, though. I R.V.C.ed on your tale. Keep writing!