Penny as a 'Frost Spirit'

[HawkerPenn]

Penny as a 'Frost Spirit' (whatever that is) ... I only know that Penny could only appear as a benevolent spirit. The related fantasy would be set in a far Northern (or, I suppose, a far Southern) clime, and would, of course, be intensely erotic and explicit. (For example, there could be a magical place somewhere lost in the wilds of Antarctica.) I suspect that one could not actually touch a 'Frost Spirit', as they are 1) spirits and 2) intensely cold. Such a spirit could lead one on to the presence of embraceable beings and related erotic adventures. A benevolent spirit would lead to good things, and an evil spirit would lead to bad things. Penny would only manifest as a very good, benevolent spirit.

 

[Rob_Royale]

Penny as a 'Frost Spirit' (whatever that is) ... I only know that Penny could only appear as a benevolent spirit. The related fantasy would be set in a far Northern (or, I suppose, a far Southern) clime, and would, of course, be intensely erotic and explicit. (For example, there could be a magical place somewhere lost in the wilds of Antarctica.) I suspect that one could not actually touch a 'Frost Spirit', as they are 1) spirits and 2) intensely cold. Such a spirit could lead one on to the presence of embraceable beings and related erotic adventures. A benevolent spirit would lead to good things, and an evil spirit would lead to bad things. Penny would only manifest as a very good, benevolent spirit.

I find a character that you cannot touch but would lead you to those you can touch rather sad and lonely. Neither is conducive to erotica in my opinion. Perhaps some sort of forest spirit like a nymph or wood sprite? One that can only visit our world on the full moon.

If you are set on the frost idea, then some sort of quest to either turn you like her or her like you, so that you can consummate your love. Maybe she leads you to a portal to her world where you can touch her. However, a mortal in the world of the fey, could have all sorts of sexual adventures.

 

[HawkerPenn]

I find a character that you cannot touch but would lead you to those you can touch rather sad and lonely. Neither is conducive to erotica in my opinion. Perhaps some sort of forest spirit like a nymph or wood sprite? One that can only visit our world on the full moon.

If you are set on the frost idea, then some sort of quest to either turn you like her or her like you, so that you can consummate your love. Maybe she leads you to a portal to her world where you can touch her. However, a mortal in the world of the fey, could have all sorts of sexual adventures.

Here's the classic story of a man who meets a nymph in the snowy forest. He gets a night, and then, when he awakes, she's gone forever. It's sad, but it's opera, so, as Bugs Bunny said in "What's Opera, Doc?", "Well, what did you expect in an opera? A happy ending?"

What's Opera, Doc?
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[HawkerPenn]

I imagine a story of a lonely woodsman, a widower. Bereft of the love of his life, he eventually resolves to hike off into the frozen wilderness to join his wife in death. His dead wife's loving spirit watches over him and, as he approaches exhaustion and death in the freezing wilderness, she, as a frost spirit, appears to him in the guise of another. Astounded and inspired, he gazes awestruck as she smiles and outstretches her arm to point the way. He follows her gesture and sees a cabin with a light in the window and smoke from the chimney. Led by the frost spirit, he manages to reach the cabin with the last of his strength and knocks at the door. A beautiful, lonely widow with the face and form of the spirit answers his knock and takes him in. She restores him to life and health, and they find new love and life in each other. Blessed by the spirits of the departed, they live happily ever after. This being Literotica, they also live kinkily and sexily and explicitly ever after as well. Schmaltzy, huh?

 

[HawkerPenn]

Penny as a 'Frost Spirit' #2

 

[jaF0]

Penny as a 'Frost Spirit' (whatever that is) ... I only know that Penny could only appear as a benevolent spirit. The related fantasy would be set in a far Northern (or, I suppose, a far Southern) clime, and would, of course, be intensely erotic and explicit. (For example, there could be a magical place somewhere lost in the wilds of Antarctica.) I suspect that one could not actually touch a 'Frost Spirit', as they are 1) spirits and 2) intensely cold. Such a spirit could lead one on to the presence of embraceable beings and related erotic adventures. A benevolent spirit would lead to good things, and an evil spirit would lead to bad things. Penny would only manifest as a very good, benevolent spirit.

Flip it. Use a hot climate area. The spirit appears almost as a hallucination and helps to calm and cool people that are nearly overheated. Sort of a as a savior.

 

[SteelPoint]

I personally find all these utter nonsense and fantasy settings more a hindrance than a help to any erotic message they try to convey.

Each to their own, but I find reality to be a pretty darn wonderful backdrop to apply to any sexy plot.

 

[jaF0]

Remember, it's all in your mind.

That's what fantasy and fiction are all about.

 

[SteelPoint]

Remember, it's all in your mind.

That's what fantasy and fiction are all about.

I guarantee you that what's "in your mind" mostly is stuff to do with the everyday. This is why we are able to identify far more readily with the concerns of man-in-the-street John Smith than those of man-in-the-starship Captain Kirk.

Of course, it suits the laziness of some writers to come up with surprise-out-of-the-box "dilithium" solutions to whatever problems their plot development presents. That goes without saying. What they forget however is that they lose their readers in alienation from the familiar by so doing.

If you can't believe what's happening, you have trouble getting touched by the erotic nature of it. Simples...

 

[HawkerPenn]

I personally find all these utter nonsense and fantasy settings more a hindrance than a help to any erotic message they try to convey.

Each to their own, but I find reality to be a pretty darn wonderful backdrop to apply to any sexy plot.

It's an interesting question. Literature, by and large, is fiction. Events and people, places and things are described that might have been real but were not. Literal reality, per se, is the realm of nonfiction. Most erotic writing seems to emphasize exaggeration in some form, leading the audience to something better than what they have experienced as 'real'. Nonsense and fanstasy imply difficulty with the suspension of disbelief, which challenge every author. The audience seems to prefer erotic fantasy to reality as they know it.

 

[jaF0]

^^ Only partially. The attraction and success of some TV and movie SciFi is the combination of 'fantasy' and the ability to make the reader/viewer believe the reality is at least possible.

That also works here, but isn't as necessary. Sometimes pure nonsense works just as well.

 

[Reenigam]

I guarantee you that what's "in your mind" mostly is stuff to do with the everyday. This is why we are able to identify far more readily with the concerns of man-in-the-street John Smith than those of man-in-the-starship Captain Kirk.

Of course, it suits the laziness of some writers to come up with surprise-out-of-the-box "dilithium" solutions to whatever problems their plot development presents. That goes without saying. What they forget however is that they lose their readers in alienation from the familiar by so doing.

If you can't believe what's happening, you have trouble getting touched by the erotic nature of it. Simples...

Another hand up for realism. Credibility is what counts in the fight to get a reader's engagement with what you, as the writer, insist "is happening". I'm not going to duck, no matter how many photon torpedoes the Starship Enterprise sends my way!

 

[HawkerPenn]

Penny as a 'Frost Spirit' #3

 

[DarkSollat]

Yes, as long as the frozing to death MC's last words would be "worth it"

 

[LiverpoolMaster]

Another hand up for realism. Credibility is what counts in the fight to get a reader's engagement with what you, as the writer, insist "is happening". I'm not going to duck, no matter how many photon torpedoes the Starship Enterprise sends my way!

Yes, let's have 'shields up' against all the cheap, fanciful stuff. Decent writers avoid it.