Paratwat

[ParrotDee]

The vagina is a special place
a small dark cave
that people have been known
to put things in
Sometimes a human pops out
Plato would have loved this place
if he wasn't so gay

It has also been known
to appear on your face
and nowhere near your nose.

Do you think this is good enough to submit and vote myself an H and with the aid of alts, name my self as my favorite author five times?
Would anybody resent that?

What do you think anon?*

Or does it smell fishy?
Clamhead.


*Thank you for that brave two. If it wasn't you, you must have been related.

 

[bronzeage]

The meterical parrallese phrasing could be a little tighter in the opposite corners, but otherwise an interesting read.

Okay, try it this way.

Close your eyes. Don't try to walk. It is Parent's Night at a pre-school and you are looking at student drawings which are taped to the wall. There are a hundred of them. You are in a crowd. Make all comments as if you didn't know which person is the parent of the artist.

 

[twelveoone]

The meterical parrallese phrasing could be a little tighter in the opposite corners, but otherwise an interesting read.

Okay, try it this way.

Close your eyes. Don't try to walk. It is Parent's Night at a pre-school and you are looking at student drawings which are taped to the wall. There are a hundred of them. You are in a crowd. Make all comments as if you didn't know which person is the parent of the artist.[/QUOTE]
Delving into paradox, Bronze? If all the same I would rather run around with a pin and a tail in a herd of jackasses.

You know, like Jackie Chan with a plan.
I have to figure out how that voting thing works in threads, ah well, maybe one of my alts will do it.

 

[bronzeage]

I once had a story submission returned with the note it was too short and didn't contain any sex.

I don't know how poetry submissions are examined, but perhaps some work could be returned because it didn't contain any poetry.

 

[twelveoone]

I once had a story submission returned with the note it was too short and didn't contain any sex.

I don't know how poetry submissions are examined, but perhaps some work could be returned because it didn't contain any poetry.

Poetry is in the mindless of the beholden.
Seriously, all I think (and that is all they should look for) is underage, overt racism. I'm not even sure they check.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

I once had a story submission returned with the note it was too short and didn't contain any sex.

I don't know how poetry submissions are examined, but perhaps some work could be returned because it didn't contain any poetry.

That is the quote of the century and should be emblazoned and set upon a pillar of fire

 

[bronzeage]

Poetry is in the mindless of the beholden.
Seriously, all I think (and that is all they should look for) is underage, overt racism. I'm not even sure they check.

I don't think they (the mysterious minion mods of erotic and non-erotic poetry submissions) actually read the work. I have seen a few which would have been tossed if submitted as a story.

That is the quote of the century and should be emblazoned and set upon a pillar of fire

We must be careful. Some complaints are viewed as bitching, pissing and moaning. Others are seen as job applications.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

I don't think they (the mysterious minion mods of erotic and non-erotic poetry submissions) actually read the work. I have seen a few which would have been tossed if submitted as a story.



We must be careful. Some complaints are viewed as bitching, pissing and moaning. Others are seen as job applications.

I have got to an age when bitching, pissing and moaning are obligatory, coupled with tripping up other bus users with a walking stick and knowing the whereabouts of every public bathroom in a 20 mile radius. I have earned these rights and if anyone doesn't care for me using them well tough titty

 

[bronzeage]

I have got to an age when bitching, pissing and moaning are obligatory, coupled with tripping up other bus users with a walking stick and knowing the whereabouts of every public bathroom in a 20 mile radius. I have earned these rights and if anyone doesn't care for me using them well tough titty

A tough titty gives the sweetest milk.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

A tough titty gives the sweetest milk.

I should think by the time a titty was tough it wouldn't be giving milk

 

[bronzeage]

I should think by the time a titty was tough it wouldn't be giving milk

It will be many years before you can test your premise, but trust me. It is sweet.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

It will be many years before you can test your premise, but trust me. It is sweet.

I'll take your word for it as I haven't any immediate or future plans of partaking in mothers milk!

 

[EroticOrogeny]

Thread title make me think of paraquat, and the concern over toxicity after being sprayed on marijuana plants in late 70's. This was apparently more a scare tactic that a true concern. Don't think I smoked much then, being more into alcohol at the time.

 

[ParrotDee]

Thread title make me think of paraquat, and the concern over toxicity after being sprayed on marijuana plants in late 70's. This was apparently more a scare tactic that a true concern. Don't think I smoked much then, being more into alcohol at the time.

Is the title of the poem. It is a true concern of mine about the toxicity administered to what could very easily be a rather effective feedback loop being overcome with bullshit.

And what I see as death by delusion and self absorption.

Let's just say if the the commenter recites that "poem" referenced by the link 10X in a mirror. A big hole will appear.
And it won't smell pretty.

( ! )

 

[UnderYourSpell]

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