Odd writing choices

[designatedvictim]

Does it work for you when its a flashback? I did some flashbacks in a novel-length piece that were 3rd-person limited to show how a non-POV character got to where she was and why. But I made it clear via section/chapter titles that it was an interlude and a flashback.

That was pretty much the issue I had (have) with my main series.

I ran up to a point in a first-person POV story where the other main character was recounting an event.

I wound up doing a 'flashback' during which the second character briefly becomes the first-person POV.

Both the change in viewpoint and the details of the scene involved kinda broke me.