Not so tiny request

[wishfulthinking]

Hi, I was wondering if anyone was interested in helping me with a story.

It's the follow up chapter to my story The Novice, about 23 word pages long, comes under the non-consent category and has a mildly religious theme.

There isn't really a problem I'm having with it, I just would like someone to see if story development realistic and flowing.

Please PM me if you are interested.

Cheers, WT

 

[Pure]

This might be better posted in the Authors Hangout, or Story Feedback. Hope you get what you want.

 

[wishfulthinking]

Me too!

 

[jimhawkins]

I am happy to try to help but I couldn't respond as you suggested by a private message for that option is "blocked".
Let me know if you want a reader.