A girl fresh out of high school comes to the city to study at a prestigious college. Since she didn't get a full scholarship, much to her disappointment, she must stay off campus at the apartments ran by an older couple who also own the bar next door. The girl is doing very well in school, but when the bills start coming she doesn't know what to do. She goes to the apartment office to tell the couple that she can't pay the months rent when she sees them in the back room and the safe open. In a moment of desperation she sneaks over and takes a substantial sum from the safe, running back to her apartment. Realizing what she's done, she starts panicking, not realizing that the couple has already noticed there money missing and have viewed the security camera.
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What do you see happening? 
Are you looking to write this story or are you seeking an author willing to take it up?
Are you looking to write this story or are you seeking an author willing to take it up?
I think I'd like to collaborate, although it's not a necessity. I thought I'd just throw this idea out and see the responses. I imagine that the story would progress with the woman who owns the apartment knocking on the students door, then bursting through. She knocks her down, threatening her with calling the cops, then telling her that there may be another way she can avoid punishment.
I think there's 3 ways to take this:
1. The husband conceals the tape while the wife is at work. The girl feels HORRIBLE about what she did. She tries to return it, but he refuses to put the money back in the safe unless she becomes his slut.
2. Same scenario as above except it's the wife who's doing the blackmailing.
3. The couple have always been curious about a threesome with a college coed. They use this as their opportunity. The girl is from a small town and sexually inexperienced, which the couple loves. They make her strip for them, and they make her suck his cock and eat the wife's pussy.
I personally don't think there should be any overt threats or yelling. I think it's more erotic if the threats were subtle. "It would be a real shame if this tape wound up in the hands of the police. What would your parents think of their good girl?" ect...
1. The husband conceals the tape while the wife is at work. The girl feels HORRIBLE about what she did. She tries to return it, but he refuses to put the money back in the safe unless she becomes his slut.
2. Same scenario as above except it's the wife who's doing the blackmailing.
3. The couple have always been curious about a threesome with a college coed. They use this as their opportunity. The girl is from a small town and sexually inexperienced, which the couple loves. They make her strip for them, and they make her suck his cock and eat the wife's pussy.
I personally don't think there should be any overt threats or yelling. I think it's more erotic if the threats were subtle. "It would be a real shame if this tape wound up in the hands of the police. What would your parents think of their good girl?" ect...
I'm also a big fan of strap-ons in stories.
What makes this story hot is that the couple is "the family next door" and they aren't abusive in any way. They openly explain to the girl that this is their fantasy, in exchange for them destroying the tape & giving the girl a reduced rent. They all agree that this stays a secret.
Perhaps the husband just sits back and watches while the wife has the college girl suck the strap-on before getting fucked by it.
What makes this story hot is that the couple is "the family next door" and they aren't abusive in any way. They openly explain to the girl that this is their fantasy, in exchange for them destroying the tape & giving the girl a reduced rent. They all agree that this stays a secret.
Perhaps the husband just sits back and watches while the wife has the college girl suck the strap-on before getting fucked by it.
