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Sizzling Sapphos....

The Sorority Sisters: Creme No. 2
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=291604

Category: Lesbian Sex

Review:

Damn, this report of an apparently true story was as hot as many fictional lesbian tales, if not sexier. Between the fact that it was true and the vivid description of a bisexual woman rimming a mature lesbian's ass, it simply had what it took to appeal to me. I give it a 5 and will certainly look for more of this writer's stories in the future.
 
More love than interracial...not a bad thing.

Canvas- Ch. 3 by ALEXIS_96
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=291492

Category: Interracial Love

Review:

I thought that the author could use an editor for a couple of grammatical errors and tense-switching, but the plot itself was very fascinating. The hot shower sex, coupled with the obvious chemistry between them and the interracial factor, all served to spice up the sexual side of the story. It also didn't hurt that this was not a stereotypical "well-hung black man with a blonde whose breasts defy the laws of physics and whose husband's genitals are almost non-existent" story. Those get more than a little worn-out after ten million versions of the same.

This was more of a love story between man who happens to be white and a woman who happens to be black, both lonely and both very passionate about sex and each other. There was even some comic relief. For all of that, I'll overlook the grammatical mistakes this time and give it a 5. It was simply a realistic and yet intriguing fictional work about two people meeting and getting to know each other in an intimate way. The sex was a major plus, though not the sole virtue of the plot. The people were quite likable too.
 
Happy Monday.

A lot of stories posted today and three in particular drew me into their smutty depths...

First up is:

"Water Under the Bridge"

by Sexxy Vixen

Romance

This was a well-written story about a school reunion and Sexxy Vixen captured the feeling of excitement very well in the initial build-up. I actually felt nervous and excited as well, reading about Meredith and her meeting with her lost love, Alex, who had been missing from her life for the past eight years.

But I felt it could have gone further. I finished with a feeling of slight disappointment and I would loved to have seen a dilemma on the cards for Meredith as she battled with herself as to who she eventually chose. Maybe a sequel would be an idea here? I definitely feel this story has more to offer and it would have been interesting to see Steve make a comeback and fight for his ex-lover.


My second choice was:

"Punishment Date"

by kyrie1595

Fetish

A hot, sexy read that was well-written and kept my interest throughout. It tells the story of Kay and her very strict boss and the punishment she receives for being continually late. There's a lovely build-up to the climax and I only wish I had a boss like this when I first started working!


And last, but by no means least, is a story from a fellow reviewer and an author I respect tremendously for his honest opinions:

"Nude Beach Bride Ch.07"

by sirhugs

Group Sex

I broke my cardinal rule tonight by reviewing an on-going chapter, but what the heck...it's sirhugs.

This was three, well-written, Lit pages of pure sex - the frantic action made me dizzy - so if it's sizzling hot erotica you're after, then look no further. The story revolves around a newly-wed couple, Seth and Gaby, who have a honeymoon with a difference at a nude beach resort. Now why didn't my husband book a holiday like that for me? ;)

Gaby goes from demure bride to nymphet in the intervening chapters and the action just continues apace in today's submission. I'm convinced sirhugs is one of the best writers of group sex on the site, managing to keep the action going without ever losing track of what was happening with each character. No mean feat.

Phew! A well-earned "5" vote from me.



OK, that's all for me today. Enjoy the stories and don't forget to give the authors feedback and votes.



Please also remember to direct any COMMENTS or QUESTIONS about these reviews HERE. Thanks!
 
Something I enjoyed...

A Blast from the Past... 10/17/05

Support by rgraham666 - Is a delicious write in 1st person. I would love to have all more worries caste away by these hands. :kiss:
 
In a slightly better mood this week (last Saturday was coloured blue, sliding to black so that by mid week, I gave myself a time out from Lit). So maybe I'll give more cheery reviews. or maybe not.

Deviating from the usual format, I want to compare two stories by Woffen, My Life Long Ambition and My Mother and My Wife . The two tales are adjacent on the index, and are so similar as to be almost, but not quite, mirror companion pieces. In My Mother..., hubby/son walks in on Mom and Wife having lesbian sex, and joins in. In Ambition, son/hubby and wife hear Mom masturbating, seducing her into both incest and lesbian sex. Woffen to me is an incest equivalent of Just Plain Bob's Loving Wives work. Both are prolific. Both feature formulaic plots, and write short stroke stories. Neither hits the mark every time. JPB though, in my experience, succeeds in writing hot steamy strokers about 3 of 4 stories. Woffen on the other hand I think succeeds one out of four times - just enough to tantalize, but not enough to inspire confidence.

Naked Cheerleaders by Bostonfictionwriter in Nonconsent/Reluctance. The title caught my eye, so I checked this one out even though its not a category I normally frequent. NOT a typical cheerleader story, so if you are (like me) a guy or gal who enjoys fantasies focussed on the allure of firm athletic flesh, be warned that this is a cautionary tale. However, it is hilarious, inventive and exceedingly well written. Definitely a diverting little piece. My only negative is that the sex was rushed. More detail would improve the story.

I must go. I'll try to return with more later, including a Blast from the Past. Comment on my reviews, or discuss the thread, on the Comments Thread
 
A quick early Sunday guest review.

Dust to Dust Ch. 02 by Evil Alpaca -- Sci-Fi/Fantasy

This storyline just launched yesterday, with both chapters in close proximity to each other on the new stories page, so now is the time to jump on board, before you miss the train!

Evil Alpaca is one of the masters in the Sci-Fi/Fantasy cat, and this story is a good example of why. The characters are solid and three-dimensional, the sex is hot, and the storyline pulls you in. The setting is well-developed... all the elements of another Alpaca masterwork are building here.

The use of [[ to denote switches in language from English to translated Terran threw me at first, until a mention of the switch partway into the story, but once you catch on to that, it feels perfectly natural and it's far better than having a text mention of the language switch every time it occurs. A mention of this in the Author's notes would probably be a good idea, in my opinion.

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I may jump on some more if something catches my eye once the rest of Sunday's stories post later on.

All comments/suggestions on reviews should be made in This Thread so the review thread will stay clean and easy to read.
 
Yeah, folks may complain that I reviewed a story that concerns the AH chain story and therefore I'm showing favoritism, but eh. . .I am going to review this anyway. :D

AH Fantasies Ch. 00: Introduction by zadefem. ;) Is a great read. It tells how our Heroine comes into possession of a very unique little gift. It then sends her propelling into different households and such, where she learns a few things about people she desires and hungers for. . .but that isn't enough, she wants more. :D She gets it too, but in the form of upcoming chapters.

This was a great way to introduce the upcoming chain stories, and it is a humorous tale too, one that made me chuckle, grin, and snicker. The writing itself flows well and keeps you wondering what we'll see next. I recommend it and not just because I am so looking forward to writing my chapter. :D

Enjoy this story!!!

Comments concerning this review or any review as well as suggestions about the thread or stories, please post here: Comments/Suggestions Thread

Thanks,
Red. :rose: :kiss:
 
Accountant's Revenge

Bean Counter- Ch. 11 by Creamer
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=292718

Category: Nonconsent/Reluctance

Review:

This story completely grips me. I love every fucking thing about it. It is truly awesome revenge and follows the saying, "Don't get mad, get even." I give it a 5, being quite pleased with the way that Bill gets back at Mary and gets some fun for himself for a change. I also like Mary's confession and his confrontation of her at last, fully revealing his anger and pain at her, reminding anyone who had any sympathy for her that she brought it on herself by her treatment of him and lies to him and others.
 
Monday Reviews...a bit late.

My apologies for not writing my reviews yesterday (I did try, but time just ran out on me) and I had the perfect excuse as it was my birthday :D.

Anyway, here we go with submissions dated Monday January 15.

My first choice for today was:

"How to Survive Internet Dating"

by rachlou

How To

Although I've never dated over the internet, I found this "How To" guide very well-written and informative, with some great tips on how to find your loved one in cyber space. What I liked the most was rachlou's gentle reminder that it may take a while to find the one, and patience and persistence are worth cultivating.

The other helpful tip, and one which I know of only too well, is the adage that the only sure thing you know about people on the internet is that they have access to a computer;).

A very deserving "5".


My second choice was:

"Pedilingus"

by MistressSadie

Fetish

I'd never heard of the word "Pedilingus" before (it's amazing what I've learnt on this site...:D) but I think I like it! This is a short one page essay on the art of appreciating feet and although I wouldn't necessarily need a slave to cherish mine, the thought of my feet being licked, sucked and kissed appeals very much!

This was a well-written piece and the words had an instant relaxing effect on me as I read. I might print it off and give it to my husband to read as well!

Another "5" from me.

And lastly:

"Charlotte's Web Ch.01

by ghostwords

Erotic Couplings

This promises to be a good story and the introduction had me wanting to read more. It opens with Jack and Alison meeting at University and falling in love. However, then Alison's sister appears on the scene and I have a feeling that things will get a whole lot more complicated!

Another very well-written story that drew me in straight away and I can't wait to see where these characters are heading.

A "5" - in anticipation.


OK, that's all for me today. Enjoy the stories and don't forget to give the authors feedback and votes.



Please also remember to direct any COMMENTS or QUESTIONS about these reviews HERE. Thanks!
 
First Review

Sirocco by EHawkins

A very sweet tale with a strong flavour of the Arabian Nights.

The story was well told. The mystery at the centre was revealed with quick snatches that drew me in.

A sweet piece of work that I gave a five to.
 
Ass Virgins by Xy Jonah

For a first submission, this is really impressive.

So many anal stories get down and dirty and lose me before the heavy action starts.

This is so much more loving, concentrating on dialogue and the reactions between two young people.

Perhaps a tad too short, but well worth a look.
 
Second Review

Surrender At Loon Lake by LonelyMom

This is a lovely little story about a woman who discovers herself through the attentions of a much younger man. Well written, the main character, her thoughts, emtions and the changes she goes through are described fully.

The climax is quite hot and the end wraps the piece up nicely.

The secondary character of the sister did a good job of providing some tension and character exposition. The boat made a nice metaphor for the character and her limitations.

A nice piece of work by a new writer. I gave it a five.
 
Happy Valentine's Day

As I explained over on the Comments Thread , none of the non contest entries tickled me today, so, despite the risk of being accused of playing favourites, I want to review a few of the entries in the Valentine's Contest 2007. If you wrote, or read and loved another one, my omitting it is not intended to say that these are "better", merely that they each appealed to me for a particular reason.

The St. Valentine's Day Massacre Fiasco by Jenny Jackson, in Humor & Satire. What I love about this story, and JJ's stories generally, is her willingness to take risks, to just be different, to be herself. For example, I love the talking cock. Too funny! I also like that it isn't your ordinary roses, chocolates and romance.

Psyching Out Cupid by Unbridled_Passion also in Humor & Satire. Nothing like Jen's story, this tender tale twists a convention, with much humor and originality. Pathos combines with redemption. Add dialogue driven writing, stir, and you get my attention.

The Curse by past_perfect is in Romance, and I wondered why. This dialogue driven tale is sad, weird, loving and tender, but rough for Romance. Perhaps bdsm lite? It is dialogue driven, so I liked that. A bit short of the erotic content, perhaps why Romance seemed right?

That's it for now. Remember to take discussion over to the Comment Thread
 
Monday Reviews.

There were a lot of very fine stories appearing today, but sadly time is not on my side tonight and I have to be brief. But I may come back and review some of the others that caught my eye later in the week.

My first choice for today was:

"A Single White Rose"

by WyldBreeze

Romance

A beautifully written story of love and tenderness that was as erotic as it was romantic. A definite fit in this category. Memories are very dear in this one page Lit tale and the end is guaranteed to bring tears to the eyes.

A well-crafted and pleasurable read that earned a "5" from me.


My second choice was:

"Office Joke"

by starrkers

Romance

This was a lovely and very readable story of a Valentine's Day that finally lived up to all the heroine's expectations. I'll forgive the reference to "plain Jane" :D and say that I enjoyed this submission immensely.

It's a true romantic story that made me feel good and it's guaranteed to lift the spirits!

A sweet and tender "5".

OK, that's all for me today. Good luck to all the Valentine's Day entrants!

Enjoy the stories and don't forget to give the authors feedback and votes.



Please also remember to direct any COMMENTS or QUESTIONS about these reviews HERE. Thanks!
 
Midnight Confession

RogueLurker

Lesbian Sex

I meant to do this yesterday, but ran out of time.

I was floored when I read Midnight Confession. It is one of the best stories that I have read at Lit in two years. I have now read it about a dozen times now and still have a hard time finding the words to express how I feel about this story.

It is a short story, but filled with an eloquence and grace that is seldom seen on this site. There are no wild sex scenes to titillate the reader. Just a story full of real emotion. My heart ached as I read the story. The author is to be commended for this piece. I gave her a 5 for her effort, and it seemed woefully inadequate, I wish I could have done more.
 
Busy Saturday

Both in terms of new stories and my delay in reviewing.

The Baby Carriage Tales ch 2 by JustPlainBob, in Loving Wives is a many layered diversion from JPB's usual plot free revenge/abandoning the cheating spouse format. As I've said before, despite the predictability of most of JPB's tales, the raw sensuality makes about 3 out of 4 work as short stroke tales for the not faint of heart. This new series is even better. Still on one Lit page, the plot is more than paper thin, the sex succulent, and the dialogue humourous. Many writers do less in more words.

New Writer

Jane Strays Far From Home by TattyTaleTeller, in Anal, starts slowly but delivers solid rewards for short stroker fans not offended by back door action. The dialogue could have started sooner, and the exposition is long for the story length. Rather than being a criticism, this suggests that first time submitter TTT could expand to longer multiple scene adventures. A promising debut.

AH Regular

Deay Diary ch 2 by Rachlou in Letter& Transcripts. Perhaps I have a conflict of interest, since Rach contributed big time to solving plot gaps in my Valentine's story, but read this yourself and see if you agree. I think it is hilarious, and sexy at the same time. It could easily be in the Humor category. I liked the breezy tone and flow of dialogue - it unfolded for me like a film. I would have added more heat if I was the chef, but that's my taste, and rach's effort is a tasty tidbit as is.

Blast from the Past

A Mother-in-Law's Valentine by The Scribe in Anal was the first Valentine Contest winner in 2002. It is four Lit pages, allowing lots of room for extravegant plotting and steamy fetishistic sex. It is not your vanilla "he adores her" Romantic seasonal tale, and in my opinion, that is part of what makes it timeless- it transcends the event. The Scribe has not submitted since 2004, and this story is one of his few free standing tales - most belong to a multi part novel or an incest dominated serial. I look forward to reading more of his works.

These are just my thoughts. Post your own by reviewing here, or commenting on the Comments Thread
 
Monday Reviews.

Again, there was another good choice of stories to review today, but the following three caught and held my attention.

My first choice for today was:

"Short on Money, But Not on Love"

by BOSTONFICTIONWRITER

Mature

As Valentine's Day approaches and the shops are full of romantic rubbish ;), this short and thought-provoking story made me stop and wonder if it's all worth it. I've always believed that love shouldn't be demonstrated on just one day, and this tale of an old couple, rich in their devotion to each other, but desperately poor in every other way, just demonstrates what's important in life.

It's beautifully written and very moving without being patronising. I'll certainly remember the story when I go out to buy my beloved his Valentine's present...

A "5" from me.

My second choice was:

"I Need a Miracle"

by jack_straw

Romance

A very enjoyable story - with nice touches of humour - from an author I've never read before, but who will definitely be on my favourites list from now on. Norman (don't let his name put you off) meets the woman of his dreams in a bar and we get to learn of their developing romance over two flowing and well-written Lit pages.

It's a lovely story and very deserving of my "5" vote.

My last choice for today was a little different:

"Sleeping Beauty"

by CelticFringe

NonConsent/Reluctance

I found this story very erotic and well-written. Our narrator meets his lookalike in a local pub and a friendship ensues in which both men act out a sexy fantasy. It's realistic enough but I did wonder if our man had been set up. But who cares? All three characters seem to have enjoyed their Friday evening special and I voted a "5" for turn-on value.


OK, that's all for me today. Enjoy the stories and don't forget to give the authors feedback and votes.



Please also remember to direct any COMMENTS or QUESTIONS about these reviews HERE. Thanks!
 
Slow Saturday reviews

maybe its just my cold making me FEEL slow. So hopefully it won't make me unduly harsh.

AH Regular

Raise your hand if you are tired of my fawning over rachlou. Seeing none, I commend unto you Show Me Heaven ch 4 in novels & novellas. Although as well written as all of rach's work, this story will be confusing if you have not read prior chapters. It seems a bit rambly. But the hot sex that pops up just as your attention starts to wander redeems it. Not a short stroker, but, um.....strokeworthy????

New Writers

Donna's Favorite Vacation by bustercruster is in Loving Wives. What would happen at the resort if Hubby misses his plane? It is buster's first entry, and I am already a fan. The exposition up front is a bit dense, and the plot is unbelievable, but who cares? The sex is hot, the dialogue natural, and the ending left me smiling as well as wanting more.

After Hours by ade773 in Group Sex takes on the challenge of the secret sex life of accountants. Ade manages to be funny, clever and hot all in a short stroker. The action(plot, what plot?) is contrived, but as already noted, who cares? It works. Next time you see some uptight coworker in her power suit, think about what you might be missing after hours.....


Time to go make supper. Perhaps I'll return later , with at least a Blast from the Past. Until then, kiddies, if you want to comment, go here.
 
Monday Reviews.

OK, it's late here in the UK so I'm not going to waste any time rambling.

My first choice for today was:

"Secrets"

by rrickgauer

Erotic Couplings

I started reading this story at work and just couldn't stop. It drew me in and I enjoyed it immensely. It tells the story of Mary and Brandon who are drawn together by their loneliness on Valentine's Day and end up on a date that neither thought would happen.

It's well written with a lovely flowing style that reads easily and smoothly. I liked the ending and voted a "5".

My second choice was:

"Me and Busty Jessica at the big D."

by sethp

Group Sex

Now, I have to admit to being biased here - and this is a story that I think readers will either love or hate - but I do enjoy Seth's stories and this was no exception.

I love his enthusiasm and the way he manages to weave a story out of almost nothing. This is another chapter to his "Busty Jessica" series and is a short stroker that will find appeal among readers who like their sex nasty and kinky. I'm sure it's pure fantasy (is it?) but I couldn't resist and gave him a "5".

My third choice for today was:

"Wicked Tales: Little Red's Wolf"

by RedHairedandFriendly

Sci-Fi & Fantasy

I've always loved Little Red Riding Hood and thought it just cried out for an erotic twist. The film, "The Company of Wolves" went some way to achieving that and RedHairedandFriendly certainly created a version that was superb enough to evoke the simmering sexual tension that is always under the surface of this story.

The author treated us to a tale rich in description and atmosphere and it was an emotional read as I found myself immersed in Athelyna and Wolfe's story.

Beautifully written and fully deserving of my "5" vote.


And my last choice for tonight was:

"Incarnations of Love"

by Scriptordelecto

Romance

This was another beautifully written story that really tugs at the heartstrings. After a bad car accident, in which Kara's love dies, she attempts to re-build her life with his best friend who was also injured in the accident. It's full of emotion and feeling and the characters come alive through the writing.

The ending is just wonderful and I voted a "5" with tears in my eyes.


OK, that's all for me today. Enjoy the stories and don't forget to give the authors feedback and votes.



Please also remember to direct any COMMENTS or QUESTIONS about these reviews HERE. Thanks!
 
The Break

The Break

Author: Selenakittyn

Category: Romance

This is Selena's Valentines Day Contest entry.

Her story grabbed me from the start and wouldn't allow me to stop reading until I reached the end. As with most of her work, this story makes the reader feel the emotions of her characters. It's not about wine and roses, but it is a story of love, a love that endures despite everything that has happened.

I gave this story a 5, and I wish I could have gone higher. I highly recommend this story, it's definitely worth reading. A well written piece from one of Lit's best writers.
 
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