New Story Review Thread

Okay - I just read "Are You Ready?" by Arianna Lee (Erotic Couplings)

It is a first person POV vignette (1 page) about a gal who picks up the lead singer in a club band for some vanilla F/M sex. I didn't find the writing style particularly engaging, but YMMV. There were some technical issues for the grammatically anal, but nothing that would make me back click.
 
If you haven't already checked out Tsunami by the AH's very own Dr_Mabeuse, you must do so at once. This one of the single most astounding and beautiful stories I've read on Lit.

p.s. great idea for a thread, Imp. I shamefully admit I read far too little of the newly released stories.
 
impressive said:
Okay - I just read "Are You Ready?" by Arianna Lee (Erotic Couplings)

It is a first person POV vignette (1 page) about a gal who picks up the lead singer in a club band for some vanilla F/M sex. I didn't find the writing style particularly engaging, but YMMV. There were some technical issues for the grammatically anal, but nothing that would make me back click.


Glad to hear your back didn't click, technical issues during anal can be dangerous.

I am assuming you want to concetrate on the positive aspects of the review in a thread like this, is that correct?

I am gonna read one or two later or in the morning, see ya.
 
Just a quick question. If we get a new story up and want some feedback/reviews, can we post the link here? Just curious. A reciprocated feedback/review would most definately be implied.
 
rikaaim said:
Just a quick question. If we get a new story up and want some feedback/reviews, can we post the link here? Just curious. A reciprocated feedback/review would most definately be implied.

I would recommend the "Plug Your Own Story" thread or Shang's "Read, vote, ... on the person above you" thread for that.

My intent here was not a bunch of AHers trading votes ... but rather, the exploration of authors outside our cozy little circle. :kiss:
 
Great idea Imp.

Only just got home after a manic day. I'll read some later and post.
 
impressive said:
I would recommend the "Plug Your Own Story" thread or Shang's "Read, vote, ... on the person above you" thread for that.

My intent here was not a bunch of AHers trading votes ... but rather, the exploration of authors outside our cozy little circle. :kiss:


That's why I asked first. ;) I just wanted to make sure I had the intentions of your thread straight. Thank you. :heart:
 
rikaaim said:
That's why I asked first. ;) I just wanted to make sure I had the intentions of your thread straight. Thank you. :heart:
Rik,

Don't know if you've been around for awhile and I've just missed you, but whatever the case, it's good to see you back at the AH.

Rumple Foreskin :cool:

ps: Good idea Imp. Can we include Earth Day contest stories? rf
 
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