lovecraft68
Bad Doggie
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- Jul 13, 2009
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Go with the latter, you'll drive yourself crazy worrying about how to make sure everyone 'gets it'Yeah I get that.
This was more her complaining that I had my shy character being too proactive for a shy person. It's like, shy people can put themselves out there, talk with people, take the initiative. They usually don't like it, and sometimes it can take a fair amount of bravery. But instead of spelling all of that out, which would've probably added about 300 words to my story, I hinted at it instead.
So either I need to spell such things out, or not care that some people won't pick up my hints. I'm trying to find a middle ground though.




