NuclearFairy
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Yeah I get that.I often wonder if people will get some of the things I reference, especially if they're younger readers, then I decide that I don't really care. They can ask Siri or copilot if they're confused
This was more her complaining that I had my shy character being too proactive for a shy person. It's like, shy people can put themselves out there, talk with people, take the initiative. They usually don't like it, and sometimes it can take a fair amount of bravery. But instead of spelling all of that out, which would've probably added about 300 words to my story, I hinted at it instead.
So either I need to spell such things out, or not care that some people won't pick up my hints. I'm trying to find a middle ground though.