Hi, this is my first time writing story (ever). I'm in need of someone who would provide me feedback and correcting some thought process/structure of my writing. English is not my first language.
My story is about a chinese wife , starting a business to save the family financial problem. The story is taking place in Taiwan. The story has a bit of exhibitionist, sex in public, peeping, cheat/reluctant (maybe), etc. I have finished writing the first 5 chapters -- planning to have another 5 chapters. It is about 5500 words long. Imagine all 10 chapters will have about 10000 words.
I need helps in editing the story. I also don't mind feedback about the story.
If anyone is interested, please send me a message. Thanks.
Here are the outlines:
(1) Intro
(2) Business proposal
(3) Store visit
(4) Video camera
(5) Going to work
(6) Shopping
(7) The college boy
(8) Rainy night
(9) Discovery
(10) Ending
