Tenacious_A
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Hello everyone. I’m new to publishing and am interested in having someone beta read my story, the first of what looks to be a six-part series. It’s a polyamorous MMF love story featuring a repressed young man, his brother-in-law’s college roommate who just moved back to town, and this roommate’s long-time best friend with benefits. It’s told in past tense, third person multiple point of view and is currently 12,086 words long. There isn’t a lot of overtly sexual content in this first installment, but it would be coming in the second, which I’ve already started.
While I do want an editor to eventually look at my story, I first and foremost need another pair of eyes to just look at it and tell me if it’s even any good and worth pursuing. Is the plot engaging enough? Is it even sexy at all?
EDIT: This is my first erotic story and the first time I’ve ever attempted to publish something before, so I’m very nervous to put it out there at all. Please be gentle! I would of course give you due credit in my author notes. If you’re interested, please respond here or DM me, and let me know what format you prefer to work in.
While I do want an editor to eventually look at my story, I first and foremost need another pair of eyes to just look at it and tell me if it’s even any good and worth pursuing. Is the plot engaging enough? Is it even sexy at all?
EDIT: This is my first erotic story and the first time I’ve ever attempted to publish something before, so I’m very nervous to put it out there at all. Please be gentle! I would of course give you due credit in my author notes. If you’re interested, please respond here or DM me, and let me know what format you prefer to work in.
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