SunflowerThorns
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Thank you for checking my thread. I am looking for someone who has knowledge about American football and has possibly even played to take a look at a couple of high school American football scenes and provide constructive critiques and suggestions.
I'm creating a story from the perspective of a high school male who plays wide receiver for his football team. The scenes where your knowledge and input will be valuable are a locker room and practice scene and an end-of-game scene. Unfortunately, though I do enjoy watching football, I have never played it. The scenes are not long and will not take a lot of time to look over. I am hoping that someone with experience writing will be able to help enhance the scenes as well as provide feedback to make them more authentic.
I'm creating a story from the perspective of a high school male who plays wide receiver for his football team. The scenes where your knowledge and input will be valuable are a locker room and practice scene and an end-of-game scene. Unfortunately, though I do enjoy watching football, I have never played it. The scenes are not long and will not take a lot of time to look over. I am hoping that someone with experience writing will be able to help enhance the scenes as well as provide feedback to make them more authentic.