Need and Editor to work through story issues

[gapa69]

I have been working on a couple stories and need and editor / coach to help me through plot points so it doesnt seem rushed or out of place. I am new to the writing part, been reading for long time. Here are the stories I am working on.

1. 2 College girls get caught underaged drinking in a bar and a cop offers them a way out.
2. Science Fiction story, this one is longer where there is a power dynamic between the Captain and the Admiral of the fleet. There is incest and transformation from a man to a female.
3. A lobbying firm tells their new associate to hire two escorts for Senator's fishing trip. He goes home and tells his wife and her friend. The friend convinces the wife they should be the escorts and make some money. At the last second the friend backs out and the wife and the young associate have to go.

Being somewhat insecure being my first time writing I need a coach as well as an editor to discuss these things.

I hope this is the right place to post this.

 

[AchtungNight]

Your stories imply non-consensual activity. If that’s the case, I’m not interested in editing them. Good luck finding someone who is.

 

[SyleusSnow]

I don't mind non-consent stories as long as they're not outright vicious misogyny (of which there is plenty on Lit).

I'll PM you.

 

[StillStunned]

Being somewhat insecure being my first time writing I need a coach as well as an editor to discuss these things.

Simply being concerned about what you're writing probably means you're already being more careful than quite a few writers here. I suggest writing your stories, and the using Word's Read Aloud function (or another text-to-speech tool) and going through the whole text word for word. This will help you catch typos, redundancies and clumsy sentences and paragraphs.

Then just publish. See what feedback you get, and if necessary consider asking an editor for help. Maybe read your story again, online, before you start on the next one. You might notice things you'll want to keep an eye out for anything you think you should do better when you start writing again.