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Cassian frowned as Andy pulled him into the club he was a new member at.
“I don’t like this, Andy,” Cassian tried to pull back but Andy gripped his wrist in a lock hold and pulled him further into the club and up to the bar. He hesitantly sat down on one of the red leather cracked stool as he gazed around the room. The red and black décor made him squint at everything, without his glasses on he was practically blind, the booths were red and some lined the back had locks on and curtains.
“What do you want, squirt?” the butch bartender grinned at him as he polished a beer mug before filling it and placing it before Andy.
“Um…Appletini?” the bartender smirked before nodding and turning to make his drink. His blonde hair flopped into his face as he turned again to observe the daunting club. There was a dance floor near the centre of the room with a stage a short distance behind it with a metal pole sticking out from the floor.
“A stripper club?” Cassian hissed in Andy’s ear as his drink was placed in front of him, the lime green drink bright under his nose.
Cassian frowned as Andy pulled him into the club he was a new member at.
“I don’t like this, Andy,” Cassian tried to pull back but Andy gripped his wrist in a lock hold and pulled him further into the club and up to the bar. He hesitantly sat down on one of the red leather cracked stool as he gazed around the room. The red and black décor made him squint at everything, without his glasses on he was practically blind, the booths were red and some lined the back had locks on and curtains.
“What do you want, squirt?” the butch bartender grinned at him as he polished a beer mug before filling it and placing it before Andy.
“Um…Appletini?” the bartender smirked before nodding and turning to make his drink. His blonde hair flopped into his face as he turned again to observe the daunting club. There was a dance floor near the centre of the room with a stage a short distance behind it with a metal pole sticking out from the floor.
“A stripper club?” Cassian hissed in Andy’s ear as his drink was placed in front of him, the lime green drink bright under his nose.
