Jay142
Really Experienced
- Joined
- Dec 28, 2017
- Posts
- 225
I have written 81 stories so far and I have one that I have sort of finished but there's something missing. I like the premise of the story but I can't put my finger on what it needs. I was looking for another experienced author to read over the draft and give me their opinion.
It probably falls into the Loving Wives category but I would publish it in the group sex category just because the people in Loving Wives don't seem to like anything so I avoid it.
I'd send you a link to a Google Doc and let you give me your opinion. I wasn't looking for an editor only someone who could give me their thoughts on how to make it better. I like the ending but the build-up needs sprucing up.
Thank you.
It probably falls into the Loving Wives category but I would publish it in the group sex category just because the people in Loving Wives don't seem to like anything so I avoid it.
I'd send you a link to a Google Doc and let you give me your opinion. I wasn't looking for an editor only someone who could give me their thoughts on how to make it better. I like the ending but the build-up needs sprucing up.
Thank you.
