"My Poetry" Feedback Welcome

[goomba]

Not all of my poetry is necessairly 'erotic', heh(so why post it here?). But I wanted to get a few out there and see what others thought. I will post one tonite and go and look for my others to post for you possibly tomorrow.
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Casual Sex


Reach inside my brain
Finger my thoughts
Turn me into your plaything
Mold me into your own


I am yours
To be forever enamoured
In the light that is your greatness


In this fleeting moment
Sensations of both esctacy and pain
We are one with a common bond


When you have finished
Toss me aside
Destination unknown
Lost in a sea of unusefullness

 

[ewopper]

Not all of my poetry is necessairly 'erotic', heh(so why post it here?). But I wanted to get a few out there and see what others thought. I will post one tonite and go and look for my others to post for you possibly tomorrow.
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Casual Sex


Reach inside my brain
Finger my thoughts
Turn me into your plaything
Mold me into your own


I am yours
To be forever enamoured
In the light that is your greatness


In this fleeting moment
Sensations of both esctacy and pain
We are one with a common bond


When you have finished
Toss me aside
Destination unknown
Lost in a sea of unusefullness

Nice Poetic dialogue, I won't judge until I see more of your works

 

[goomba]

Nice Poetic dialogue, I won't judge until I see more of your works

Thanks--i am possibly posting more tomorrow--right now i am SUPPOSED to be working and I dont have the available moemnt to do so deep digging on my harddrive to find it all

--Cheers

 

[goomba]

My Christmas Wish

I used to believe in Santa Clause
The Spirit of the season
But as I grew older
The Happiness left for some reason

The Years have left me jaded
Against hopes and dreams, its true
Then this year it happened
A happiness I found in you

Even though we dont speak a lot
And we are really far apart,
I can feel you next to me
Alive in my heart

I dont ask for many things
And I want this to be clear
I only want for you to be happy
All throughout the year

Plese think of me once in a while
And know that I think of you too
These words are not just sentiment,
I really do love you
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[ewopper]

I used to believe in Santa Clause
The Spirit of the season
But as I grew older
The Happiness left for some reason

The Years have left me jaded
Against hopes and dreams, its true
Then this year it happened
A happiness I found in you

Even though we dont speak a lot
And we are really far apart,
I can feel you next to me
Alive in my heart

I dont ask for many things
And I want this to be clear
I only want for you to be happy
All throughout the year

Plese think of me once in a while
And know that I think of you too
These words are not just sentiment,
I really do love you
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I like this one