Hi.
I recently posted my first story after some chat authors encouraged me to write. As I have never written fiction, it was a bit daunting to try.
I am very happy to see that so many readers clicked on it. I would love feedback on that or my second writing (written because a reader of the first story asked me to write about my wife and I wanted to express my love for her).
Let me know how you like them. Here is my author profile.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=199166
Thanks for the feedback and sorry for the typos, I am not a great editor and can be lazy that way.
Steve
I recently posted my first story after some chat authors encouraged me to write. As I have never written fiction, it was a bit daunting to try.
I am very happy to see that so many readers clicked on it. I would love feedback on that or my second writing (written because a reader of the first story asked me to write about my wife and I wanted to express my love for her).
Let me know how you like them. Here is my author profile.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=199166
Thanks for the feedback and sorry for the typos, I am not a great editor and can be lazy that way.
Steve