Moan, groan, scream!

[cheerful_deviant]

I'm not that smart, but thank you

Pfffft.

 

[rgraham666]

If there's any dialogue 'in the clinch' in my stuff, it's because the characters aren't quite 'there' yet.

In the final moments they don't talk as they're far too busy.

It works for me.

 

[rgraham666]

I'm not that smart, but thank you

Double Pffft!

 

[Colleen Thomas]

LOL,

Pffft jackers!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[carsonshepherd]

Okay. I came up with this:


God I needed this. I slid my hand between us to run my hand over the insistent bulge in his jeans that pressed against my own throbbing cock, imprisoned in my clothes. I wiggled my hips and almost shot off from the intensity of the sensation.

"Ohh..."

 

[cheerful_deviant]

LOL,

Pffft jackers!!!!!!!!!!!

Turnabout baby!

 

[minsue]

Okay. I came up with this:


God I needed this. I slid my hand between us to run my hand over the insistent bulge in his jeans that pressed against my own throbbing cock, imprisoned in my clothes. I wiggled my hips and almost shot off from the intensity of the sensation.

"Ohh..."

Definitely better than "I'm cuuuuuummmmiinnngggggg"

 

[twink_alert86]

Okay. I came up with this:


God I needed this. I slid my hand between us to run my hand over the insistent bulge in his jeans that pressed against my own throbbing cock, imprisoned in my clothes. I wiggled my hips and almost shot off from the intensity of the sensation.

"Ohh..."

What was it that you wanted to know? I'm suddenly unable to concentrate.

Just don't use the word "weapon" and you should be fine.

 

[BlackShanglan]

Oh my God, yes!

Oh yeah! Ahh, ahh, fuck me!

Well, if you insist ...

The moaning and the screaming work really well in some peoples' stories, so why do they sound so lame in mine?

What do the rest of your porn mongers do when you want to create a really intense feeling of immediacy in the moment? Sometimes it seems so clinical to just tell it:

Just read it and thought it was great, actually. See my notes on the draft?

Shanglan

 

[carsonshepherd]

Just don't use the word "weapon" and you should be fine.

Don't forget, you can't say the words, The pen is mightier than the sword, without the word PENIS!

(blatant ripoff of Shang )

 

[Kassiana]

Don't forget, you can't say the words, The pen is mightier than the sword, without the word PENIS!

(blatant ripoff of Shang )

"I'll go with the Penis Mightier. Does it work?"

"What?"

"Does it work? Will it mighty up my penis, man?"
--SNL Celebrity Jeopardy with "Sean Connery" and "Alex Trebek"

 

[BlackShanglan]

(blatant ripoff of Shang )

I look forward to the royalty check.

Shanglan

 

[Belegon]

The most memorable of my "vocal" lovers was usually of the straight forward "scream my name" school or maybe a litlle of the classic, "Oh God Yes". that and the wordless actual scream. I loved it but have not figured out how to bring it to paper.

 

[impressive]

I suppose withing bounds and I'm Cuuummiinng could as well, although I have never heard it in my experience.

Unfortunately, I have.

I agree with Wolk. My characters tell me what they scream, shout, or whimper. Still, I avoid the "Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck meeeeeeeeee!" execution. No need.

 

[English Lady]

Well I myself am very vocal, not just whimpers moans and miscellaneous weird noises but actual dialogue too. It probably sounds more than a little silly taken out of context but I can (and often do) talk nigh on constantly during sex. things like "thats it." and "right there." to "Damn! you fuck me so fucking well."

Also sometimes I talk out whole erotic stories,although that is usually more during mutual masturbation han actual penetrative sex.

Ok away from me and my sex life to my characters. I think alot of them make quite a bit of noise and osme even speak. You just have to let out what feels natural to the situation. don't force it and with the right level of passion and lust I think a bit of dirty talk or the odd "ohhhh" can really work

 

[dr_mabeuse]

I love the vocalizations, just love them. Verbal, non-verbal, whatever they are. I love the talking, in fact I’m a talker myself. I even believe there’s a difference between “Oh,” “Ooh,” “Oooh,” and “Ohhh,” the first being a gasp of surprise, the last a long exhalation of satisfaction, the sounds in between being little coos of delight.

And then sometimes you want an “Ahhh”, other times you want an “Aghh.” They're not the same: the first being breathy, the second more back-of-the-throat. (Tip: stay away from “Ack” though)

I also stay away from long strings of letters. I don’t think anyone can understand the onomatopeia of an “OOOOooooOOOoooohhhh.” It makes you character sound like a siren and it gives the story a comic-book look. I also hate strings of exclamation points. Three should be the top limit. After that it's like pounding on a nail that's already in.

I also wish there was something a gagged woman could say besides “Mmmph!”, but “Mmmph!” seems to sum it up, at least when she’s wearing a ball gag. (There’s a bondage site somewhere on the web called “Mmmph!” that specializes in pictures of women wearing gags.)

I love the sounds lovers make, and I wish there were more names for them. I also wish I knew the difference between a moan and a groan; I use the two pretty much interchangably. I love the gasps and sighs, snarls and whimpers, and lately I’ve been using more grunts, even female grunts, as when she’s being fucked so hard the bed shakes.

I wish there were words for that kind of shuddery breathing you do when someone runs their fingernail down your spine; or that kind of satisfied explosion of breath she makes when you enter her; or the crescendo of pleading whimpers that tells you she’s losing control and heading for an overpowering orgasm.

God! I love it all!

In fact, I’ve got myself hot now. I’ve got to go write something!


--Zoot

 

[domjoe]

The moment of orgasm is synasthesic; all the senses combine. My money shot paragraphs try to refect this:

SHE SAVORED THE SALTY TASTE. HER NIPPLES GREW AS HARD AS A HARVARD ENTRANCE EXAM. HE STOOD OVER HER, ARMS FOLDED, HIS HAIRY BALLS HEAVING IN TIME TO HIS STEADY BREATHING AS HER LIPS SUCKED RHYTHMICALLY AT THEM, FIRST THE LEFT, THEN THE RIGHT, THEN THE LEFT AGAIN, JUST TO MAKE SURE SHE HADN'T MISSED A BIT.

HER LABIA WERE SWOLLEN AND MOIST NOW AND SMELLED SWEET, LIKE HONEYDEW MELON MIXED WITH A FAINT AROMA OF SEA BASS LEFT OUT IN THE HOT, HOT CALIFORNIA SUNSHINE TO DRY…

(from Cindy Heller, Ch. 1)

 

[Guest]

God! I love it all!

In fact, I’ve got myself hot now. I’ve got to go write something!


--Zoot

You and the rest of the AH.

Great post, Zoot.

I have one sound to add to all you said: the growl. I love growling - both hearing it and doing it myself.

To me, a woman (or even man) made to growl, signifies a very hard and heavy fucking - most often anal.

At least, that's when I do most of my growling.

Edited to add: Growling can be done with a gag in place, because the sound comes from the throat. No use of mouth or tongue is needed.

Lou

 

[Honey123]

There are things I want to say whilst in the middle of sex...but then I think I might sound really naughty..

Sometimes the ol' "Yeah, fuck me baby" just sounds funny coming out of my mouth, but still it doesn't stop me from saying, just not as often.

The more wordy I am, the hornier I get. Ihave to admit, I love saying "Yeah, fuck me..." "Oh, God that feels so good!" "My pussy loves that.." LOL....

Now, if the guy is saying things to me like, "Oh, baby you feel so good", "I love your body" or "I want to fuck you real hard"...why, I am a puddle.

But besides the vocals, it's the acts...licking his fingers after having them in me...looking up at me while licking me...smacking my ass and say, "Oh, yeah, now that's a great sounding ass..."

Big turn ons...okay, my nipples just got hard.

 

[impressive]

Agree with Lou re growling. Mmmmmmm. LOVE the sounds of sex -- words, grunts/groans/shouts/whimpers, wet slurpy flesh on flesh noises, sucking noises -- bring it ON!

 

[BlackShanglan]

I love the vocalizations, just love them. Verbal, non-verbal, whatever they are. I love the talking, in fact I’m a talker myself. I even believe there’s a difference between “Oh,” “Ooh,” “Oooh,” and “Ohhh,” the first being a gasp of surprise, the last a long exhalation of satisfaction, the sounds in between being little coos of delight.

And then sometimes you want an “Ahhh”, other times you want an “Aghh.” They're not the same: the first being breathy, the second more back-of-the-throat. (Tip: stay away from “Ack” though)

I also stay away from long strings of letters. I don’t think anyone can understand the onomatopeia of an “OOOOooooOOOoooohhhh.” It makes you character sound like a siren and it gives the story a comic-book look. I also hate strings of exclamation points. Three should be the top limit. After that it's like pounding on a nail that's already in.

I also wish there was something a gagged woman could say besides “Mmmph!”, but “Mmmph!” seems to sum it up, at least when she’s wearing a ball gag. (There’s a bondage site somewhere on the web called “Mmmph!” that specializes in pictures of women wearing gags.)

I love the sounds lovers make, and I wish there were more names for them. I also wish I knew the difference between a moan and a groan; I use the two pretty much interchangably. I love the gasps and sighs, snarls and whimpers, and lately I’ve been using more grunts, even female grunts, as when she’s being fucked so hard the bed shakes.

I wish there were words for that kind of shuddery breathing you do when someone runs their fingernail down your spine; or that kind of satisfied explosion of breath she makes when you enter her; or the crescendo of pleading whimpers that tells you she’s losing control and heading for an overpowering orgasm.

God! I love it all!

In fact, I’ve got myself hot now. I’ve got to go write something!


--Zoot

You've never been as sexy to me as you are at this moment.

Shanglan

 

[dr_mabeuse]

Take me. This moment may never come again.

There's the microwave. My egg foo yung is ready.

---Zoot