Make a haiku

[bknerd]

i enjoy both forms...
limericks are just haiku's
loose, bawdy cousins

 

[fathom7]

herons soar above
misty improbable hunt
frogs' rest is complete

 

[_Misty_]

angry pundits spar
issues and accusations
the debate begins

 

[Inrhapsody]

i like making one
but it's never as fun
as a limmerick

giggling so much
much more fun then you would think
glad to see you here

 

[fire_breeze]

A rustling sigh,
A rhapsody for the soul
Quietly breathes.

 

[Inrhapsody]

A rustling sigh,
A rhapsody for the soul
Quietly breathes.

The wind moves softly
autumn leaves are smoldering
fire breezes blow

 

[fathom7]

forced air blustering
convection demonstration
hot October winds

 

[fire_breeze]

The warmth of a thought
wrapped around me in a cloak,
warding off the chill.

 

[fathom7]

The warmth of a thought
wrapped around me in a cloak,
warding off the chill.

My god that was good.

herons call at dusk
conjuring sunset oranges
night hunters emerge

 

[southerntierguy]

advice from a mime
seemed so deep and thoughtful then
hard to recall now

 

[fire_breeze]

*blush* Thank you
And such imagery...

The heat of the night,
Stirs the blood and shakes the soul.
Prey becomes hunters...

 

[southerntierguy]

Knock, knock, "Candygram."
Why does that woman answer?
Another bites the dust.

 

[fathom7]

*blush* Thank you
And such imagery...

The heat of the night,
Stirs the blood and shakes the soul.
Prey becomes hunters...

No blush required you were wonderful

pinpricked evening sky
half moon illumination
night crawls stealthily

and for you --

 

[fire_breeze]

No blush required you were wonderful

pinpricked evening sky
half moon illumination
night crawls stealthily

and for you --

And into the night
I will dance of passions and
of dark desires

 

[fathom7]

And into the night
I will dance of passions and
of dark desires

streaked blackness above
disrupted peace still quiet
shooting stars tonight

 

[fire_breeze]

Stars pierce the blackness
Mirroring the tense stillness.
Deep wells of the night

 

[fathom7]

reflected moonlight
dancing waters make white noise
lost in your delight

 

[fire_breeze]

reflected moonlight
dancing waters make white noise
lost in your delight

That is beautiful (and it rhymed too!)


A sudden silence,
As the bright stars whirl above,
And falling deeper.

 

[fathom7]

meteors careen
brief flares across the deep void
nighttime festival

 

[bknerd]

the sun slips dipping
behind clouds down amongst trees
playing hide and seek

 

[fire_breeze]

The depth of the night
And the cool air kisses me,
Filled with promises.

 

[fathom7]

sauntered twilight walk
close held against the chill wind
shared warmth of passage

 

[_Misty_]

moon glow caressing
dark shadows with quick silver
softly shimmering

 

[artlover637]

Nice, Misty.

emotions rising
stirring deep feelings unfelt
longing for cover

 

[desideratum]

moon glow caressing
dark shadows with quick silver
softly shimmering

I like that a lot Misty, inspired me


sacred dewy perfume
silkenly wafts on dream haze
into oblivion