Make a haiku

[_Misty_]

Markets in freefall
Doom, gloom, fear, despair.....no wait,
today's a new day

 

[ljiowa]

Markets in freefall
Doom, gloom, fear, despair.....no wait,
today's a new day

Stocks...or holding you?
Easy choice. 'Bye newspaper,
Calling in sick now.

 

[bknerd]

stretched out on the couch,
folding into a new book...
happily ensconced.

 

[_Misty_]

Barack Obama
John McCain, Sara Palin
Joe Biden....saviors?

 

[fire_breeze]

I will close my eyes
and see the landscapes of dreams
and feel a long sigh....

 

[bknerd]

flying down the road
disappointment disappears,
lost in the exhaust...

 

[ljiowa]

Silence in my head:
A welcome respite from doubts
And a time to heal.

 

[bknerd]

being too eager
to please, i play hide and seek,
poorly, with myself...

 

[ljiowa]

Close my eyes - can't think -
You're in my thoughts, lying there -
And I want you now -

 

[fire_breeze]

Spiralling, spinning,
a descent and an ascent
into sweet madness.

 

[VoyageToBeyond]

thinking on and on
about this world of ours
she walks in
nipples hard

 

[ShaiGirl]

rainy days are here
bringing cool air and soft breeze
autumn has arrived.

 

[VoyageToBeyond]

lightening flashes, seen, not seen;
last night, was it real?
her taste lingers on my tongue

 

[VoyageToBeyond]

a wet pussy, a cock slides in, the sound of passion

 

[VoyageToBeyond]

our bodies sticky and wet
panting, catching our breaths
a white cloud vanishes in the empty sky

 

[ljiowa]

Hey...not to be pedantic or or critical....but a haiku has a pretty strict syllable structure:

five syllables in the first line
seven syllables in the second line
five syllables in the third line

It's actually a Japanese form originally, and "syllables" mean something different in Japanese than in English, but for English haikus, the five-seven-five structure is generally accepted.

Hopefully this will be taken in the spirit intended.

 

[fathom7]

Hey...not to be pedantic or or critical....but a haiku has a pretty strict syllable structure:

five syllables in the first line
seven syllables in the second line
five syllables in the third line

It's actually a Japanese form originally, and "syllables" mean something different in Japanese than in English, but for English haikus, the five-seven-five structure is generally accepted.

Hopefully this will be taken in the spirit intended.

Thanks for the reminder.

AS you will see in the sig line -- I do this all the time some for a quarter others for a dollar. Here's one from the other night that works for me :

Blood orange Moon sets
Ocean waters extinguish
Equinox's dawn

 

[fire_breeze]

Thanks for the reminder.

AS you will see in the sig line -- I do this all the time some for a quarter others for a dollar. Here's one from the other night that works for me :

Blood orange Moon sets
Ocean waters extinguish
Equinox's dawn

And how much was that one?

 

[asian_princess]

Thanks for the reminder.

AS you will see in the sig line -- I do this all the time some for a quarter others for a dollar. Here's one from the other night that works for me :

Blood orange Moon sets
Ocean waters extinguish
Equinox's dawn

Ghost from long day's past.
I stop him. One moment to say,
Welcome back to Lit

 

[fire_breeze]

I will dance under
The whispers of the full moon.
But will you join me?

 

[ShaiGirl]

Saturday morning
Sun is hiding, a bit cold
My nipples react.

 

[VoyageToBeyond]

Saturday morning
Shia's nipples pointy hard
tongue flicks, mouth waters

 

[ShaiGirl]

Voyage is peeking
At my stiff nipples, oh my!
Gotta cover up.

 

[bknerd]

we could just wrap up
in bubble wrap, to be safe.
but i'd miss your touch...

 

[ljiowa]

Bowling with bumpers:
Safe but unsatisfying.
Bliss lies near the brink.