Maid blackmails a wealthy couple

[HeyAll]

A maid gets treated like shit by the couple she works for.

The couple are wealthy, high class, and complete snobs. They're mid-40's in age.

The maid is mid-30's and takes pride in her work. She wishes she could quit, but she needs the money.

She knows the couple are very sexual people in their private lives, but she tries to ignore it so she won't get fired.

One day, the maid goes snooping through the wife's things, which she has done before. She tries expensive clothes and jewelry for fun.

After a little more snooping, she finds pictures, or perhaps a video tape. She looks at it and is stunned to find graphic sexual images of the couple (insert whatever you want)

The maid takes the images to her tech friend, who then scans the pictures.

The maid then decides to blackmail the couple for money. Then she realizes she can have something money can't buy, sexual power over the couple...

Thoughts? Ideas? Takers?

 

[jeninflorida]

Me like!

Interesting idea...my mind is spinning with some possibilities hehe

 

[Sean Renaud]

Why not take the money? Also you're gonna need something seriously kinky to hold over their heads, I mean seriously illegal otherwise the premise isn't realistic enough to work.

Fiction unfortunately has to make sense.

 

[sweet_lusciousdesire]

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[Sean Renaud]

LOL. We're actually a very inclusive and cuddly bunch by most standards.

 

[jeninflorida]

Don't bother writing down those ideas. The group of abusvie jerks who run this forum will just trash your stories no matter what. It's the literotica way.

Oh sweetie im sorry to hear that. Yeah there are a lot of asshats out there. Try to delete the asshat commenta from your mind and take in any positive feedback/ constructive criticism ... good fans will start to email you. Make sure its easy for people to find a email account.

Thick skin is key.

Im sorry that you have to deal with trolls...huggs

 

[sweet_lusciousdesire]

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[DarkPleasures]

Don't bother writing down those ideas. The group of abusvie jerks who run this forum will just trash your stories no matter what. It's the literotica way.

Wow. Angry much? There's no need for you to trash HeyAll's thread.

 

[jeninflorida]

okay...more evil thoughts....

confession I've watched a couple episodes of Devious Maids...and kind of like it (only at times I feel they are over acting). It's interesting and I'm so sure its real life for those with tons of money living in ca!

I like the part of willing blackmail, where the couple gets tested by the maid only the husband and wife like it. maybe the wife has a bi side...undiscovered and she can't help but want more....yet she tries to deny that side of her...

the husband, seeing..watching...feeling his wife become aroused and a sexual being is more then happy to go along

 

[tapeworm]

A maid gets treated like shit by the couple she works for.

The couple are wealthy, high class, and complete snobs. They're mid-40's in age.

The maid is mid-30's and takes pride in her work. She wishes she could quit, but she needs the money.

She knows the couple are very sexual people in their private lives, but she tries to ignore it so she won't get fired.

One day, the maid goes snooping through the wife's things, which she has done before. She tries expensive clothes and jewelry for fun.

After a little more snooping, she finds pictures, or perhaps a video tape. She looks at it and is stunned to find graphic sexual images of the couple (insert whatever you want)

The maid takes the images to her tech friend, who then scans the pictures.

The maid then decides to blackmail the couple for money. Then she realizes she can have something money can't buy, sexual power over the couple...

Thoughts? Ideas? Takers?

Given that this is essentially a form of payback, would I be correct in assuming that there will be a heavy element of humiliation involved? Maybe the husband has to watch while his wife is forced to prostitute herself in order to augment the maid's finances?

 

[Tmmldr]

okay...more evil thoughts....

confession I've watched a couple episodes of Devious Maids...and kind of like it (only at times I feel they are over acting). It's interesting and I'm so sure its real life for those with tons of money living in ca!

I like the part of willing blackmail, where the couple gets tested by the maid only the husband and wife like it. maybe the wife has a bi side...undiscovered and she can't help but want more....yet she tries to deny that side of her...

the husband, seeing..watching...feeling his wife become aroused and a sexual being is more then happy to go along

It was a large city, and in that city was a special club. One that was for maids only. Where a maid could get help in her desires to extract the very most from her employers, from her sisters who had been down that road. A club where she could find help for those special occasions where four or five maids were needed at the mansion.

The Devious Maids Club.

 

[danicanuck]

Maybe the couple can have a political or even religious affiliation and so when the maid finds the pictures or movie of them it would ruin them personally and professionally. For a twist I would add a racial tone to it, the maid being black and putting up with the occasional bigotry from both of them. Now that she has power she sets up a gang bang for the wife with all black men as he is sat down and made to watch.

 

[lovecraft68]

Why not take the money? Also you're gonna need something seriously kinky to hold over their heads, I mean seriously illegal otherwise the premise isn't realistic enough to work.

Fiction unfortunately has to make sense.

Yes, the line line between fiction and "out there"

But easily remedied The pics would need a third person to make it a believable blackmail scenario. Perhaps a young girl of barely legal age that they seriously degrade and humiliate. Or perhaps even kinkier a threesome with the sister in law involved (maybe not incest between the sisters, but them sharing him.

Anyway you get the point.

Then the maid can....take the money(as she would in r/l) but have a nasty little session with them as well. little bit of the best of both worlds.

 

[mangydawg]

How about her finding incriminating evidence of illegal activity? This would accomplish two things. First, the couple is facing prison and a loss of their lifestyle, so they'll submit to her out of a real fear. Second, it leaves this couple sexually untainted; the better to "corrupt" them.

I get the sense this maid is going to give some serious payback to this couple. It would be more effective if the couple is not already kinky. Blackmailing a vanilla couple into kinky sex might be more impactful than blackmailing a kinky couple into more kinky sex.

The illegal activity must be seriously heinous for this couple to submit. The evidence must be damning. The worse the crime and the more damning the evidence, the more outrageous her demands can be.

 

[loquere]

A maid gets treated like shit by the couple she works for.

The couple are wealthy, high class, and complete snobs. They're mid-40's in age.

The maid is mid-30's and takes pride in her work. She wishes she could quit, but she needs the money.

She knows the couple are very sexual people in their private lives, but she tries to ignore it so she won't get fired.

One day, the maid goes snooping through the wife's things, which she has done before. She tries expensive clothes and jewelry for fun.

After a little more snooping, she finds pictures, or perhaps a video tape. She looks at it and is stunned to find graphic sexual images of the couple (insert whatever you want)

The maid takes the images to her tech friend, who then scans the pictures.

The maid then decides to blackmail the couple for money. Then she realizes she can have something money can't buy, sexual power over the couple...

Thoughts? Ideas? Takers?

The couble had threesomes with there previouse butlers/maids/pool boys (illegal mexican imigrants, so no one comes looking). Where in they stabed the butlers/maids/pool boys to death, mid sex. So there serial killer sex addicts.

 

[Sean Renaud]

@Lovecraft:I do get your point. I said it incredibly poorly but that was what I was trying to say. Like I said I forget the exact phrase but it roughly goes "Real Life can be random, Fiction has to make sense." The premise until a few more people started piling on just didn't, to me, reach the minimum level of realistic to qualify as a story. Which sucks because I hate nitpicky stuff like that but I know both from reading stories, watching television and occasionally from comments on my work that nothing seems to piss people off more than the author pulling something out of their ass at the last second. If Lord of the Rings had ended with Frodo discovering he was a wizard people would have rioted.

I think people are on the right track with the couple being fairly vanilla and also caught up in something very illegal. The kind of illegal that could put them behind bars for a while. Ideally we're talking something like insider trading, tax evasion and the like.

@loq: While (and I don't want to start with lovecraft on this because we have this very interesting agree/disagree on the subject. ) I suspect that a couple finishing off a guy during the climax would probably raise the red flags that get your story blocked. And considering that literally the difference between it getting blocked or not seems to hinge on if it happens mid coitus or if the couple is polite enough to give him a five minute head start on their massive property and then hunt him down like a dog.

Ultimately the girl needs evidence that she can get, someone she can trust and keep on the low low to hold the evidence encase something happens to her. You're gonna have a hard time keeping the maid sympathetic. Though to be fair sometimes readers won't look that deep and it certainly wouldn't be the worst thing that happened.

 

[i_would]

Why not take the money? Also you're gonna need something seriously kinky to hold over their heads, I mean seriously illegal otherwise the premise isn't realistic enough to work.

Fiction unfortunately has to make sense.

No need for anything illegal or seriously kinky. Images or movies of a threesome, or even better husband with an unknown woman, can be a career killer for a politician. Especially when your story is set in the US where voters are very sensitive for those issues.

I suspect that a couple finishing off a guy during the climax would probably raise the red flags that get your story blocked.

Not necessarily; got one in Erotic Horror where the girl gets sucked dry by a vampire, who enjoys her aroused smells and the lust hormones in her blood. Accepted without question. There are definitely more stories in that category where people don't make it to the end.

 

[lovecraft68]

No need for anything illegal or seriously kinky. Images or movies of a threesome, or even better husband with an unknown woman, can be a career killer for a politician. Especially when your story is set in the US where voters are very sensitive for those issues.


Not necessarily; got one in Erotic Horror where the girl gets sucked dry by a vampire, who enjoys her aroused smells and the lust hormones in her blood. Accepted without question. There are definitely more stories in that category where people don't make it to the end.

EH has its own rules.

Not going to get into an argument here, but the site is soft on its own personal favs. EH and NH get away with a lot of snuff and beastie cause, "monsters aren't real"

There was a story in EH where the girl was 15. There were 8 comments on the story and everyone called out the under age. The story was reported by multiple people yet still remained. And mind you this was a contest entry so a lot of people read this.

So to be the ball buster I am I started a thread "So are there different rules for NH/EH and linked the story and mentioned underage and "guess its okay over there"

the story was deleted within a day.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I don't think a politican would allow him/herself to be manipulated into sex slavery because of something that could end their career. It just isn't worth it to the majority of them.

The rules on EH are a bit inconsistent, without reading it though my guess is you handled a vampire killing by feeding tastefully. I had a story about a man who was fleeing from a Satanic Cult and originally it ended with him being swallowed whole by an abomination. That got rejected three separate times under different names (my standard modus operandi because I've found that sometimes you get a squeamish mod.) I eventually editted it down a bit.

 

[i_would]

I don't think a politican would allow him/herself to be manipulated into sex slavery because of something that could end their career. It just isn't worth it to the majority of them.

You've got a point there.

The rules on EH are a bit inconsistent, without reading it though my guess is you handled a vampire killing by feeding tastefully.

It should have been so, indeed.

And as others mentioned, indeed monsters do not exist. I'd also have more issues with underage sex in such stories (though as European I consider 18 as minimum age pretty high) as, well, underage people do exist.

 

[Sean Renaud]

My point about a politician being blackmailed is it seems like not only can they bury a lot of shit so you better make sure you got your shit tight if you decide to blackmail one but more importantly they seem to by and large be bored rich people indulging in a hobby. A passionate hobby mind you but a hobby, they would be unlikely to do anything they were truly uncomfortable with to keep it. Of course this being Lit you could reveal that to be a twist earl-ish. This was a couple of quality upbringing, she could never voluntarily do something as degrading as sucking cock and he would never insult his wife by asking her to dress up in provacative clothing like a street walker.

I guess the fact that monsters don't exist is almost an excuse. Though Saw is just as much Horror as Friday the 13th is. Still it's a thing and we've discussed. I don't really have a problem with the underage rule. My large complaints on that front are twofold (and I agree that 18 is tad high) but the other is that whether high school students are 18 by default or not seems to hinge primarily on the mood of the moderator at the moment and it's a tad difficult to deal with 18 year old virgins.

 

[Balddudesrock]

Many times, people being blackmailed don't realize that they do not have to accept the blackmail.So what if my mom knows I Like Butt Plugs? I wouldn't Bring it up to her, but I wouldn't get all worked up if she knew, either, other than some embarassment. So perhaps the couple in question doesn't realize that no one actually cares about their proclivities? The punch line being, that if they didn't feel so guilty, they could free themselves any time they wished. And by the time they realize this, everyone has settled into a happy, threeway, kinky lifestyle that satisfies everyone. Whatayathink?

 

[Sean Renaud]

The number one complaint I get and hear about with black mail stories is that what they do to avoid the blackmail is so disproportionate that they'd have to be mentally retarded to go for step 2.

I'm of mixed feelings but I see it all the time.

 

[i_would]

My point about a politician being blackmailed is it seems like not only can they bury a lot of shit so you better make sure you got your shit tight if you decide to blackmail one but more importantly they seem to by and large be bored rich people indulging in a hobby.

True. Especially in the US where without heaps of money you can't get far in politics.

A blackmail attempt could indeed backfire. Maybe they know something about the would-be blackmailer. Maybe indeed they don't care enough, and threaten to expose her as blackmailer. Plenty of options.

I don't really have a problem with the underage rule. My large complaints on that front are twofold (and I agree that 18 is tad high) but the other is that whether high school students are 18 by default or not seems to hinge primarily on the mood of the moderator at the moment and it's a tad difficult to deal with 18 year old virgins.

And as a result of this rule, about half the stories are about people that "have just turned 18" or are about their 18th birthday... oh well.