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[LadyCibelle]

What did I do wrong (again)????

For those who don't know me, I was being serious in a light-hearted way. I have had fifteen novels published (for money!) and I have never yet submitted one to my (professional) editor without feeling like kicking myself afterwards at the silly mistakes she finds.

Oddly, I see most of them AFTER submitting the ms and BEFORE she points them out; sending it off seems to open my eyes somehow!

You haven't done anything wrong honey bunny....haven't you read my white part?

There probably wasn't enough emoticons to set you on the right track. In case you didn't notice there was a white part I'll repeat it....I have a soft spot for you.

It was an attempt at dense humour on my part....looks like I failed miserably.

 

[rozezwild]

Aww thanks...yummy

Not a problem at all sweetie

 

[rozezwild]

What did I do wrong (again)????

For those who don't know me, I was being serious in a light-hearted way. I have had fifteen novels published (for money!) and I have never yet submitted one to my (professional) editor without feeling like kicking myself afterwards at the silly mistakes she finds.

Oddly, I see most of them AFTER submitting the ms and BEFORE she points them out; sending it off seems to open my eyes somehow!

Whisper in my ear your name so i can go buy one

I will even say please

 

[snooper]

Whisper in my ear your name so i can go buy one

PM'd you - because of my greatest failing, overwhelming modesty.

 

[rozezwild]

PM'd you - because of my greatest failing, overwhelming modesty.

Kiss kiss and thank you

 

[Sinful_whispers]

Rose,
Thank you for checking over chapter 1, I submitted that. Please don't kill me after you go thru chapter 2. Again thanks for editing them, I appreciate it alot.

Syn

 

[rozezwild]

Rose,
Thank you for checking over chapter 1, I submitted that. Please don't kill me after you go thru chapter 2. Again thanks for editing them, I appreciate it alot.

Syn

No problem sweetie -- just remember that you have to fix all the boo- boos i find


Roze

 

[rozezwild]

Rose,
Thank you for checking over chapter 1, I submitted that. Please don't kill me after you go thru chapter 2. Again thanks for editing them, I appreciate it alot.

Syn

Second one is there for you now sweetie -- hope you dont hate me

 

[Sinful_whispers]

-laughs- ....One never looks a gift horse in the mouth..Thank you Rose again...How can one hate such a sweet female?...I'll check it out tomorrow after the initial move is done..I would gladly correct 100 stories as you handed then back..then move. -ponders saying that ..thinking.....'Hmm..might recant that after I look at it!'

Thank you..again.
-Syn-

-thinks by the next era she'll have them all corrected..and doesn't even need to look to know that-


-slips out to bed..-

 

[Sinful_whispers]

-returns scoffing and scowling..looking to hunt her down-

Okay..curiosity got the best of me, I got up 2.5 hrs later and peeked at the email and laughed. I honestly thought there would have been more..-wipes my brow removing the sweat with a washrag and wrings out a puddle-

You do make me laugh, expecially the end part..about editing for me again..
of course I would gladly send you more stuff. -sends her 50 more chapters- I've had my ass handed to me now, and I feel like I broke you in..-grinz-

Enjoy the day dahlin'

-Syn-


P.S..I'm NOT recanting the previous statement I made..I'm taking it like the female I am..woo hoo! -strikes a pose showing those muscles-

P.S.S -gets all serious like- I did notice alot is all stupid little shit. Things I should have caught but didnt. You did bring my attention to alot to watch for on chapter 3.

 

[rozezwild]

-returns scoffing and scowling..looking to hunt her down-

Okay..curiosity got the best of me, I got up 2.5 hrs later and peeked at the email and laughed. I honestly thought there would have been more..-wipes my brow removing the sweat with a washrag and wrings out a puddle-

You do make me laugh, expecially the end part..about editing for me again..
of course I would gladly send you more stuff. -sends her 50 more chapters- I've had my ass handed to me now, and I feel like I broke you in..-grinz-

Enjoy the day dahlin'

-Syn-


P.S..I'm NOT recanting the previous statement I made..I'm taking it like the female I am..woo hoo! -strikes a pose showing those muscles-

P.S.S -gets all serious like- I did notice alot is all stupid little shit. Things I should have caught but didnt. You did bring my attention to alot to watch for on chapter 3.

*groans* i have created a monster
Nope not alot of mistakes and like you said stuff that is easily fixed-- send away -- i am free as of right now

 

[Sinful_whispers]

-drags her breasty monsterous ass into the blank PM box..as her hairy knuckles drag along the ground..snarling..hot saliva dripping fer her fangs, as her toe claws rip the white virginal square-

Hmm..monster perhaps..-beats upon her chest-

okay..I'll send it!! -thinks she asked for it!!!-

 

[rozezwild]

-drags her breasty monsterous ass into the blank PM box..as her hairy knuckles drag along the ground..snarling..hot saliva dripping fer her fangs, as her toe claws rip the white virginal square-

Hmm..monster perhaps..-beats upon her chest-

okay..I'll send it!! -thinks she asked for it!!!-

Oh hell yeah i asked for it and you just got it back

 

[Sinful_whispers]

-peeks in just missing her arse go running away as she chuckles- cute email note made a smile on my face and chuckled...Mmmh..I asked for it and boy once again the evil editor strikes!!! -laughs- dayum woman..that was fast no shit..lol..didnt expect it back on my lap that soon. thank you..

-curtsey to her-

-Syn-

P.S. secretly knows shes looking to see if i'm wearing panties under my robe

 

[rozezwild]

-peeks in just missing her arse go running away as she chuckles- cute email note made a smile on my face and chuckled...Mmmh..I asked for it and boy once again the evil editor strikes!!! -laughs- dayum woman..that was fast no shit..lol..didnt expect it back on my lap that soon. thank you..

-curtsey to her-

-Syn-

P.S. secretly knows shes looking to see if i'm wearing panties under my robe

Well are you???

I couldnt sleep -- could you tell

pssstttt -- glad i could make you smile and giggle

NOW wheres the next one missy??

 

[Sinful_whispers]

-laughs- Nope never do unless the jeans tend to rid up, I tend to not like that camel toe thing happening, and they seem to help that problem a bit.Anywhozitz...I haven't gotten to the 4th yet, trying to figure where to take it to. I finally got ALL and I mean ALL my corrections done and the three submitted..lawd, what a frigging relief that was!

-chuckles- well..don't feel alone..I didnt sleep either..I had this mean nasty editor chasing me with hewr claws out..yelling."Space after the periods demmit girl!" Hmm..wonder who that could be.-snickers- I have a bad bad habit of tying the word as and if the word he follows..it immediatly becums she, can't help that, mebe my bi side is fighting to get out!-scopes her out like the drooling big bad shewolf- Ugh!, and being dsylexic sucks asrse when it comes to writing, backwards words look normal to me, hell Not sure I even know what normal is anymore..


Actually a friend and I have decided to team up, and start a series..so better watch whatcha say girlfriend, you might get more than you can handle!

I was asked about you as an editor, and I told the truth -grinz- Actually, I did I said if the person wants the truth and no sugar coating it you were good.(betcha never thought i'd trell anyone our little secret..mm..but you were soo good!) That you took it seriously, and I appreciated that as grueling as those emails were. I said I'd recommend you to anyone that could take the abuse..-shows all my battle scares from the whips Roze got me with but doesn't secretly tell anyone I loved every minute of it-

okay okay..i've rambled enough upon this once virginal blank space...-goes to oogle roze as she gets ready for bed..-

 

[Sinful_whispers]

-runs back in quickly as she hears the sounds of pleasure coming from Roze's direction..busting the door open as she joins her in bed..grinning like a mad fool..- "It got approved and posted..CH01!" -loves her up like no other, cuz she was a great help-

-Syn-

-looks about giggles and let's her go back to what she was doing..quickly setting up the cam to turn it into a story-

 

[rozezwild]

-runs back in quickly as she hears the sounds of pleasure coming from Roze's direction..busting the door open as she joins her in bed..grinning like a mad fool..- "It got approved and posted..CH01!" -loves her up like no other, cuz she was a great help-

-Syn-

-looks about giggles and let's her go back to what she was doing..quickly setting up the cam to turn it into a story-

I dont know wether to cry -- laugh and gasp for air -- or kick you in the ass -- SYN you were a dream to edit for and i thank you for the recomendation to any that ask-- i am Harsh at times but i want you to grow from the experience and make it second nature to look for what i say you are doing wrong -- makes it easier for us all


and now for jumping in bed with me miss-- get your hot ass back here and get in bed with me -- we can make an afternoon of this

 

[Sinful_whispers]

Gawd she's sooo sexy!-whimpers-

If you cry I'll kiss those tears away..if you laugh lawd I hope it's not at me but with me, then I'll join you..if ya gasp for a breath I'll offer you one..if you kick me in the ass..by now you should have figured it out..I'd surely ask for another!

Thank you Roze -luvs her up again like no tomorrow- Mmhm..said you were rough but you were honest, I'd rather you toss me criticism then let me flop on my face.If it sucks I wanna know..saves the embarassment of being denied and opens me up a new doorway for improvement..OH! and I promise to use wiggle, wiggles or wiggled instead of that other word we won't mention.
You earned my respect when you sent me back my 1st sucky (which I grumbled about lawdy did I ever!) email that was a mile long and had me do my own corrections and such., and not hold back! (lemme tell you people..she doesn't hold back!!...least editor wise)

NOW...about this going to bed thing with you..-gives her a cheesy ass impish grin- Shall I cancel all my appointments for a few days? week? month? and bring the whipped creme and the twister game or will that be supplied for us when I arrive? Do you promise to bind me up, gag me and spank me with a rubber chicken while whimpering the tune of row row row your boat or mary had a little lamb? If so..toss me the directions and baby..I'm there!

Hmm..people will be talking soon, yanno that right..wondering whats going on between us..is it in the bylaws someplace on here and having an mental affair with your Lit. editor?...sexing her up in your mind..while doing naughty things..with oiled goldfish,organ grinding monekys and a one-legged stuffed cartman plushie? -quickly goes to check and ponders if she edits all these post..if so..wants to be spanked with the rubber chicken for each typo she makes-

Fi sew shee wontz beet hawd (thinks theres six swats with the chicken already)

 

[rozezwild]

If you cry I'll kiss those tears away..if you laugh lawd I hope it's not at me but with me, then I'll join you..if ya gasp for a breath I'll offer you one..if you kick me in the ass..by now you should have figured it out..I'd surely ask for another!

Thank you Roze -luvs her up again like no tomorrow- Mmhm..said you were rough but you were honest, I'd rather you toss me criticism then let me flop on my face.If it sucks I wanna know..saves the embarassment of being denied and opens me up a new doorway for improvement..OH! and I promise to use wiggle, wiggles or wiggled instead of that other word we won't mention.
You earned my respect when you sent me back my 1st sucky (which I grumbled about lawdy did I ever!) email that was a mile long and had me do my own corrections and such., and not hold back! (lemme tell you people..she doesn't hold back!!...least editor wise)

NOW...about this going to bed thing with you..-gives her a cheesy ass impish grin- Shall I cancel all my appointments for a few days? week? month? and bring the whipped creme and the twister game or will that be supplied for us when I arrive? Do you promise to bind me up, gag me and spank me with a rubber chicken while whimpering the tune of row row row your boat or mary had a little lamb? If so..toss me the directions and baby..I'm there!

Hmm..people will be talking soon, yanno that right..wondering whats going on between us..is it in the bylaws someplace on here and having an mental affair with your Lit. editor?...sexing her up in your mind..while doing naughty things..with oiled goldfish,organ grinding monekys and a one-legged stuffed cartman plushie? -quickly goes to check and ponders if she edits all these post..if so..wants to be spanked with the rubber chicken for each typo she makes-

Fi sew shee wontz beet hawd (thinks theres six swats with the chicken already)

OHHHHHGASP -- hell i dont even know what to say to you SYN--you are such a wonderful woman and a treat to work for -- i pray that all are just like you and that it is as easy to work with them as it is you

Oh and by doing it on porpouse you get twice the swats

 

[LadyCibelle]

You two ladies are "piss in your pants" funny and I adore your exchanges.

 

[rozezwild]

You two ladies are "piss in your pants" funny and I adore your exchanges.

Thank you Lady C -- she is a sweetheart and hell wouldn't mind trying out my tendencies on her ** wiggling the eyebrows here ** and a doll to edit for

 

[Sinful_whispers]

-Rushes back in panting heavily as she sees Roze posted..drooling a puddle hearing I made her speechless- I bet it was the rubber chicken,the twister game and the organ grinding monkeys that caused you to be without words! -snickers- yes..yes..I'm such a kinky lil' devil..cannot deny that, if I did lawd i'd be struck down in a heartbeat by a bolt of lightning on a clean dark night. -ponders that..thinking electrodes..and shaven hamsters, and gets all excited..feeling a shiver run through me-

-catches the waggling brows, as she stops mid-tracks and dances about shakin her money maker for her to watch..does one of those things to turn her on as her twice peirced tongue slips from her warm moist mouth and licks both of her brows, seeing if that effects her..as she slips it back within that moist darkness again..grinning like a mad fool once more..then catches her last comment..-

porpouse? That's one of those fish, big ones..you kinky she-devil you!!! -quickly adds that to her things ta' do list before she croaks-

Ooo your making me blush! -shuffles her bare feet about as she locks her fingers before her, dropping her head and eyes, lilting it a little to show her blushing light colored cheeks..- awww..she likes me!!! Everyone..she wants me..see..!! We better keep it on the low down tho, between you and I, tis our little dirty secret..

-quickly spams the forums with it..letting everyone know Roze got the hots for her..feeling all mischevious wondering how many more swats that will bring her..and hopes to not get caught..as she quickly emails Lit's home quarters..telling them annonymously...scribbling her name at the end of it all proud like-

Stands there striking a pose..looking all kinda sexy in a burlap bag and high heeled flippers..- Sooo baby...your place or mine? what's your sigh? Can I have your number seems I lost mine..-gives her that serious look.-



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Heya there Lady Cibelle....welcum to our world ..-grinz sheepishly..and laughs all evil like-
Actually..thanks, Roze and I seem to have a good friendship bond between writer and editor -wink wink- and she's so fun to play with..-lawd is she I think to myself -...she makes me laugh and smile, even when she hands my ass to me and a scroll of corrections..i've learned to love it..and take it..her cute little comments at the end make all the difference it's that psych thing..give a negative (she gave me 100's ) ya toss a positive back..-shivers and trembles- I peek in here cause this is where I know she looks..and I have this need to pester the hell outta her! I do it so well! and shes jest as sweet as a ripe georgia peach..( doesn't need to add a comment to that as her mind drops back into the gutter)

 

[fieryjen]

*sits by and reads silently*

 

[LadyCibelle]

-Rushes back in panting heavily as she sees Roze posted..drooling a puddle hearing I made her speechless- I bet it was the rubber chicken,the twister game and the organ grinding monkeys that caused you to be without words! -snickers- yes..yes..I'm such a kinky lil' devil..cannot deny that, if I did lawd i'd be struck down in a heartbeat by a bolt of lightning on a clean dark night. -ponders that..thinking electrodes..and shaven hamsters, and gets all excited..feeling a shiver run through me-

-catches the waggling brows, as she stops mid-tracks and dances about shakin her money maker for her to watch..does one of those things to turn her on as her twice peirced tongue slips from her warm moist mouth and licks both of her brows, seeing if that effects her..as she slips it back within that moist darkness again..grinning like a mad fool once more..then catches her last comment..-

porpouse? That's one of those fish, big ones..you kinky she-devil you!!! -quickly adds that to her things ta' do list before she croaks-

Ooo your making me blush! -shuffles her bare feet about as she locks her fingers before her, dropping her head and eyes, lilting it a little to show her blushing light colored cheeks..- awww..she likes me!!! Everyone..she wants me..see..!! We better keep it on the low down tho, between you and I, tis our little dirty secret..

-quickly spams the forums with it..letting everyone know Roze got the hots for her..feeling all mischevious wondering how many more swats that will bring her..and hopes to not get caught..as she quickly emails Lit's home quarters..telling them annonymously...scribbling her name at the end of it all proud like-

Stands there striking a pose..looking all kinda sexy in a burlap bag and high heeled flippers..- Sooo baby...your place or mine? what's your sigh? Can I have your number seems I lost mine..-gives her that serious look.-



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Heya there Lady Cibelle....welcum to our world ..-grinz sheepishly..and laughs all evil like-
Actually..thanks, Roze and I seem to have a good friendship bond between writer and editor -wink wink- and she's so fun to play with..-lawd is she I think to myself -...she makes me laugh and smile, even when she hands my ass to me and a scroll of corrections..i've learned to love it..and take it..her cute little comments at the end make all the difference it's that psych thing..give a negative (she gave me 100's ) ya toss a positive back..-shivers and trembles- I peek in here cause this is where I know she looks..and I have this need to pester the hell outta her! I do it so well! and shes jest as sweet as a ripe georgia peach..( doesn't need to add a comment to that as her mind drops back into the gutter)

You, both ladies, are my kind of crazy. Just one thing though, don't praise her too much in the open like that....you might lose her as lots and lots of people will want to work with such a gem.

Roze: I don't knkow what you do exactly but keep doing it....looks like I'll finally be able to rest a bit and stop feeling like the only editor of Lit. Who knows maybe next year you'll be the one getting the award.

I don't know your schedule and I don't want to impose...but....would you allow me to refer some writers to you?