Looking for an editor

[testudo]

I'm looking for an editor for my new story. Its a sci fi, rapid pregnancy fetish story with reluctance themes. It is just under 20,000 words. I've already posted the first part, so you can get an idea of what its like:

https://www.literotica.com/s/cuckoo-requiem-pt-01

I would like the rest of the story to be better, and I was hoping someone on here could help me do that.

 

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[testudo]

Ah ok. Went and did it. Thanks for letting me know!