Looking for an Editor

[CatPerson]

Hi all,

I’m currently working on an erotic story titled No Turning Back and I’m looking for an editor or beta reader who can help me refine it.

The story is set in Madrid and focuses on a married woman navigating desire, guilt, and manipulation as she gets pulled into a situation she can’t easily walk away from. It leans heavily on internal conflict, slow-burn tension, and character dynamics, alongside the more explicit elements.

I’m mainly looking for feedback on:

• Flow and pacing
• Sentence structure and readability
• Grammar and overall flow
• Consistency in tone and character voice
• Overall tension and buildup

If you’d like to get a feel for my writing style, here’s a link to some of my previous work:
https://www.literotica.com/series/se/493616561

I’m writing purely for enjoyment (not commercially), so I’m not looking for paid services at this time—just someone who enjoys this kind of story and is willing to give honest, constructive feedback.

If this sounds interesting to you, feel free to message me.

Thanks!

 

[Duil2]

Hi, I'd be happy to edit if you like. How long is it?

 

[eslam60]

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