Looking for an Editor / Reviewer.. (Transformation Story) Simi SciFi

[Profanity89]

The Story is titled, Building The Ultimate Fuck Doll. Currently I have 5 Chapters, totaling roughly 65k words.
Its a story about a man, who's one of the founding fathers of nano technology, and using it in humans to cure diseases, etc. He finally get's the tech to a point where he can use it for his own personal 'fun'. FYI, story does contain body modification (realistic at first), then slowly travels further down the road making a female live entirely off is cum where it starts to get a little more realistically unrealistic. It's Smith's personal vendetta to create the perfect fuck doll. Let me know if your interested and I can send you the google doc to review.

 

[Profanity89]

Also, portion of it may walk the line of non con.

 

[XMarilynX]

Personally I see a reviewer and editor performing entirely different roles.

Regardless, what do you mean by reviewer i.e. what are your expected outcomes from a review process?
Re editing, 65k is daunting. What do you specifically seek from your editor?

Please make your reply as succinct as possible. And, jkt, Fuck off is not succinct.

 

[MarieWriter]

65K stop and think about how much that is and what you are seeking/asking -- as someone who has done some editing work in the 'real world' -- for LIT- One Literotica page is about 3,700-3750 words, so that is around 17 pages of posted story, (assuming your goal is actually posting it here). You are looking for a volunteer- if you had that edited (or reviewed), professionally it would cost you around one thousand dollars. Try to keep that in perspective as you ask someone to, in their own time, look over 65K in words. And as XMarilynX has put it, what does review mean? What specifically are you seeking? There is a thread on here- if it is still up anyway- to post parts of stories or to find "beat readers" if that is all you seek. Regardless-- I do wish you the best and no matter what- KEEP writing. M.W.

 

[Profanity89]

Update: Okay, so, not looking for an editor. I feel pretty strong on grammar, spelling, sentence structure and likes. More so for feedback, story flow, etc.

 

[MarieWriter]

There is a story feedback post here in the forums, might have some luck there!