14,000 word NND story looking for an editor.

[DefCon4]

I have one self edited story so you can get a sense for my style. I am a guy but chose to write this story in a woman’s voice so i probably need someone that can add a critical eye to my language etc.

The story is written and i have gone through it a couple times to clear the obvious spelling/typo/grammar gaps

Mark (aka DefCon4)

 

[astuffedshirt_perv]

Nudes Never Die?

 

[Small_Island]

Just seeing this on 28 July, so clearly too late to help with a 2024 National Nude Day story. I did go read it and kudos on hitting your main targets of a non-incest brother-sister story that celebrates NND as a non-sexual event.
I was going to start a Conversation to see if you would like help with any other story, but it appears you need to change your privacy settings to allow for that. Feel free to reach out to me by my page.

 

[DefCon4]

Just seeing this on 28 July, so clearly too late to help with a 2024 National Nude Day story. I did go read it and kudos on hitting your main targets of a non-incest brother-sister story that celebrates NND as a non-sexual event.
I was going to start a Conversation to see if you would like help with any other story, but it appears you need to change your privacy settings to allow for that. Feel free to reach out to me by my page.

Thanks for the response. Not sure which settings i need to update but I didn’t set it that way on purpose. I am about 95% finished with my next story. Different topic but similar style. It has gotten a bit long (+20k words) thought. I can reach out when it is done.

 

[Small_Island]

Hi. There is a FAQ for this somewhere, I know because I used it myself a couple of years back to fix the same problem. ;-) Basically, if you click on my name in this chain, a box should come up with three options: Follow, Ignore, Start Conversation. With yours the last is missing - thus the settings issue. Try clicking on mine and see what happens. If it works as it should, you can e-mail me directly and we can set up you sending me your new story draft to review that way. I generally work in Word with Track Changes to edit others' work, but can manage Google Docs if needed. If you do, please let me know if you'd just like a beta read or if you'd like me to review grammar, spelling, continuity (call it level 1) or go into possible plot and character points (level 2).
ha ha, that Level stuff I just made up on the fly, but I like to assist to a writer's level of comfort, to help Them tell Their stories as They want. :-D